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Techno Flare


Writer with too many feelings and not enough time.

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As Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie are about to make their way into the Everfree Forest for the first time, Bowser decides to mix things up in his world by swapping Mario with a different hero. Chaos erupts as both heroes try to find out what they have to do to get back home.

BIG thanks to my editor Twilight Mercer, also to Final Draft for making this awesome cover art.

Starting October 17th, this fic is in full production. Check out my other stories and channel, and please say what you think down in the comment section, and remember; keep it clean.

Play certain tracks when they shows up in the story with the links, right click and choose 'open in new tab'.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 34 )

Yeah I'd recommend linking us to the music. That being said this is a nice start. :eeyup:

3348897 Thank you! Glad you liked it, and yeah, in retrospecr it would make things a lot easier. :twilightsheepish: I will fix it tomorrow, definitely.

I shall work on some cover art for you.

Interesting concept. Get a proofreader to work this thing through, though - you're switching tenses, and it's getting weird. Among other things.

3348935 Awesome! Thank you! :rainbowkiss:

Play certain tracks when they shows up in the story with this link, times in description. Soundtrack follow along

How do you do that? Change the link into words in the story.:pinkiegasp:

Are the other members of the mane 6 transported to the Mushroom Kingdom as well or just Twilight? Feel free to PM me if you want to keep it a secret.

Awesome start

Luigi better play a important role in this story.
Also, I can't wait for more!

3362154 Its a good thing you brought that to my attention, I will probably make a lot of side chapters. And believe me, there will be more :twilightsmile:

Only nitpick, they shouldn't be saying "body", they should still be saying "pony". :eeyup:

3389155 ..... I read this over about ten times and didn't pick that up....:fluttershysad: What kind of Brony am I!?:raritydespair:

....CURSE YOU PINKIE PIE!!!!!(Everypony other then Pinkie yells as they plummet to their doom)

And so the girls have completed their first boss battle. Now it's time for the real journey to begin. :eeyup:

When do we get to see Mario's (and hopefully also Luigi's) side of the story?

3449582 Instead of telling Peach's story in between chapters, I was going to just put in a quick thing about the other characters that were affected. I am tryinng my hardest to get the prologue done, but it's just as long and tiring as it was in the game itself. :ajbemused: I have a life that my parents force upon me outside of ponies, so try to bear with me.

Comment posted by SuperPinkBrony12 deleted Jan 6th, 2014

Only nitpick, Angel is a boy not a girl. :facehoof:

3479949 :rainbowderp: WOW! Umm... I didn't know that... it's good that you're here to help me with this :twilightsheepish:

3479957 In Return of Harmony Part 2 Fluttershy in her discorded state says "Good boy Angel. Mama's so proud."

3479971 It's these little things that make this fandom so awesome. :pinkiesmile:

3479976 Yup. You can easily find any quote from anyone about anything.

Cant wait till we get to the open world.
Also don't be afraid to stray from the path of the game if you have an Idea.

3480560 oh trust me, I have quite a few ideas about getting stuck on certain parts or them doing 'other' things. :ajsmug: Also, I will probably create LOADS of side stories.

3480572 Great nothing makes a crossover fic run dry than having it be a straight up play through with ponies.

WHY!!! Why do these people keep breaking this wall!?!? And why am I the one who always needs to fix it?:facehoof: I hate my life.

She would learn later that the experience she just had was nothing compared to flying.

How right you are. :trixieshiftleft:

How does Fluttershy get herself wegged into a pipe? I thought warp pipes were a one size fits all. :rainbowlaugh:

3734605 Let us just say, she wasn't the most healthy before Twilight came.

3734855 Fluttershy does seem to have a bit more "oomph" in the plot. :rainbowlaugh:

3734866 Fluttershy: in a nutshell

3734901 Still. if someone has big as Bowser can fit through those things Fluttershy shouldn't be able to get stuck. :rainbowlaugh:

...is this story abandoned? It hasn't been updated since January 4th.

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