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JaydexTheShadowKnight


I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?

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A good story I will follow and soon I was done d'awwwing i read the comment by 459640 and 459534

Can't help but to LMAO :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you for the feedback! I especially like the funny pics from Bloodpool and Dusk Stalker. :pinkiehappy:

I'm really looking forward to continuing this story. Let me assure you that I've only scratched the surface with the first two chapters. There will be considerably more content to come! :twilightsmile:

462060
We aim to please :pinkiehappy:
Now I must go back to my fic.

Absolutley beautiful, one of, if not the best Luna fic

BBB

continue the story this is good!!!:pinkiehappy: also i have a solution that will solve luna and davids problem... if luna can handle his weight even if it is for a hour or two and not that long why doesnt she bring him with her? i mean it seems he doesnt really have much to live for (not one mention of family or friends so guessing familys either gone or all over the place and his lifestyle doesnt say much for friends) except his farm so he can just come with her. EVERYONE WINS!!!:pinkiehappy: *someone pops up* "uh what aboubt celestia and the equestrians?" *knocks out by smashing bottle over head*:pinkiecrazy: ok now where was i?... oh yea... EVERYONE WINS!!:pinkiehappy:

Thank you everyone for the great comments! Don't worry Blahblahblah, I already have things planned out (your suggestion isn't too far off from what I'm planning, though I wont say anymore. Don't want to spoil anything. :pinkiehappy:). And I am certainly going to be continuing this. I started work on chapter 3 last night and will be resuming work on it momentarily. I'm very excited about this story! It seems to be my best yet!! :twilightsmile: Though it may be a few days till I post any new chapters. I want to take my time with this. That way the rest will be as good as the first two chapters! :raritywink:

BEAUTIFUL. so far... cant wait for more

459695 where's the "Cheers~IraqLobstah"? that's kinda your official catch phrase and to the author; you depicted what I want to do to Luna so here's a thumbs up Mr mind reader. :eeyup:

469956
Im not going to explain this a fourth time.
I cant do it anymore. Muff said.
:ajbemused:

469961 that sucks...if it was for rascism i cant comprehend why cause your an Iraq Lobster so theres no rascism ah well the internet has lost a possible meme

Heavy can not wait for next update

I have to say, at first I was a bit scared this would end up in some weird clop-fic but you managed to stay within a romance and I must say this is very well written! :)
So I'll keep on reading this story as I enjoyed the first two chapters.
Nice work so far! :twilightsmile:

Heavy will pay 400 thousand dollars to read next update.... For twelve seconds

I GIVE YOU ALL OF MY YES.

I can hardly express how happy I am that you all are enjoying this story so much!! :twilightsmile: Rest assured there is more on the way! I'm nearly done with chapter 3. I've only got a few more scenes to complete and then I need to give it a good smoothing over and edit to make sure it's ready. I'm going to give the same level of care to this chapter as I did to the first two. I want you all to be as satisfied with it as you seemed to be with the first two. Expect the next chapter late tomorrow or sometime Sunday at the latest! :twilightsmile:

Oh and Hang in there Heavy! The wait will be worth it! :raritywink:

hmm, i wonder if luna will turn human?:trixieshiftright:

Now this was beautiful!! It's been a long time since I've read a true romance story! Lord knows Luna deserves some love already! Keep up the good work, friend.

Comment posted by XxTestName69xX deleted Dec 9th, 2018

Simply Beautiful and great. You better write chapter 4 fast!

Also can't wait for some "Quick! Subdue the monster that captured Princess Luna!" Bullfeces. I'm interested in how will you pull first contact out, Celestia will propably be furious at David and try to do something drastic, as deducted from the small glimpse of her behaviour in this chapter.

KEEP IT UUUUUUUP!

-Sixteen, The Binary Scourge

DAAAAYYUUUUUMMMMM


This was epic :rainbowkiss:
Now, moar :rainbowlaugh:

niiiiiiiice. also, can't wait to see when he meets Blueballs-i mean Blueblood.

oh damn!
thats coo!
and you didnt notice it wasnt an 'L'

Chapter 3... was better then sandvich

WRITE MOAR FACKING CHAPTERS!!!:flutterrage:

BBB

if celestia trys to "deal" with david then i sense celestia VS luna comeing up

Oh, I'm dying for the next chapter already! Update, please! This is so wonderful!

I'm glad you all are really enjoying the latest installment of my story! I'm already working on Chapter 4! And I don't think this one will take quite as long as the last one did! :raritywink:

Though rest assured if you want it to be as good as the prior chapters, I still intend on taking my time (to a certain degree). :twilightsmile:

I'm going to have fun doing the first contact in this chapter! I'm glad you all are eager to see how it's going to play out!

the story is very nice!!
I love romance like this. I hope you're planing a true happy end for them. i don't like "happy" ends like: "and he returned to earth, but remembered their love till his end."
Up and downs in the story are ok. but I'm a fan of true happy ends. maybe even something like he gain immortality and their love... will last... FOREVER!!! MUAHAHAH!!! :pinkiecrazy:
*cough* wait what? :scootangel:

Can't wait to see how Celestia and the others will react to a human (especially Twilight and/or Lyra :rainbowlaugh: ).

I would kill to see Lyra's reaction to a human!!

I will pay you all the cookies in the world to see that!!

touching, but kinda anticlimactic.

Interesting story, wondering where this is going.

Nice work so far! :pinkiehappy:

Great chapter. Aside from some minor spelling errors (like 'except' instead of 'accept'), there was solid work.

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