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JaydexTheShadowKnight
I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?
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Very lovely story.
Though I though that maybe she would have developed a possible nickname?
Her eyes are very purple in the cover image.
Interspecies relationships and getting a horse pregnant? Not possible should hats it but interesting character choice
admittedly not your best but was definitely a good read.
I have read a redemption story that is similar, but with Trixie and Nightmare Moon suddenly stuck as a filly.
I don't know what it's called though, sadly.
You had me tearing up a bit with the first BGM and I don't usually get tearful from reading. Great job Jaydex.
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Have this pic as well:
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I have to say this not as bad as I expected it to be but I have low standards to fanfics
1459779 What do you consider night? It is 9:29 here
And their love killed the child. The End
Just. Speechless.
How can you release so much brilliant content, so often. You sir, deserve three. NO four! Internets. In all seriousness though I thougherly enjoyed this and would like to see more nightmare moon content in the future
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A great short story.
I'm a fan of Princess Luna but Nightmare Moon interests me.
Another brilliant story!
1460064 Wazza? (What's up?)
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1460161 I see them. And I enjoy them. cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-rsexy.png
Prequel please!
That link, it brought out all the feels
Yes! You posted it, here have some players getting mad at a soundboard
1459805 Considering we don't know the full genetic make up of Equestrian ponies, who are no doubt very different from normal ponies we can't say for sure if interbreeding is impossible. Odds are it could be possible, but unlikely of a fetus reaching maturity and if it does uncertain what the offspring will be or even look like let alone if it will survive to adulthood. Then you also got to take into account the number one rule when dealing with Equestrian ponies. Magic, so it don't have to explain nothing.
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That's what i was hoping for, like half clopfic and half telling how they met
1460206 I agree. A prequel is good!
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry,I'm so Sorry...
I accidentally clicked on The forbidden Dislike button from my iPhone 5 and it won't change it ....
A prequel would be simply smashing!
Great writing as usual my man. I'm surprised on how well the BGM you listed fits well with the scene at hand, really makes the theme rather quite nicely. I'll shall be looking forward with your other works as you use these techniques to create as sense of immersion for your stories. Great story man, keep up the good work! Best regards
this....this story right here.......is great, no question, only fact. cant wait for more. i wanna know, ohh i wanna know more.
Not as long as your other stories, but still just as beautiful. The songs also added to the sory.
Can't wait for the third person Nightmare Moon story. Finish one of your other multy chapter stories fist though.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
Very sweet.
Oh my.... helloooooooo.
1460270 AHHHH MW3 *hissssss*
Kind of awkward sex scene picturing the baby, but awesome story!
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Down boy or I will put you down.
Don't worry I hate MW3 its only for little kids
Fun fact: I'm the one who came up with the concept behind the 'My Night Will Last Forever' pic, and the one who commissioned it.
Damn, I am a sensitive guy lol that first song had me tearing up all the way to the second song. Have I mentioned you have amazing song choices? lol I really liked the concept of this story. it really made you feel the love in the whole thing. that is what i think a good clop fic is. One that has a strong romantic feel to it. I think you could make a good prequel to this story. Anyway, i loved all of it. It really sucked me in.
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Also, there were some minor spelling errors between the beginning to almost middle. Like three or so. nothing really bad though.
Edit: I read it again. but cannot find said errors so maybe i was hallucinating. Lol
Color me curious; I must read this. As much as I've not been a fan of second-person narratives, I must say I love the idea you've put together here. The description alone stirred up so many wonderful thoughts.
Yet again Jaydex leaves us with another amazing story! This was honestly something I've never seen before, but that's not surprising, with the originality present in your ideas, even though I don't like nightmare very much, I still enjoyed this story a lot; I would never base my final opinion of the story on how I feel about the characters themselves if it was negative. Anyways, this was very good, and has been featured, something I probably won't be able to do for a bit.
This was epic.
1460085 same, in the darkness I close my eyes but they open up anyway.
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What color is curious again?
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Honestly, I had thought about that, but couldn't think of any off the top of my head. Besides this was originally just an idea that came to me at work as the result of that other fic and that very sad pic of Nightmare Moon.
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I hope you like it!
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Yeah, I know what you mean. It was one of those ideas I had in passing, yet I felt very strongly about.
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Glad my story moved you, and thanks for the pics, they made me smile!
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Then I guess I'll take that as a compliment.
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I just need to work on a few other projects in the meantime, like chapter 5 of my Celestia fic. 
I'm delighted you enjoyed it so much! I'll be happy to work on more Nightmare Moon fics in the future.
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It always makes me lol! 
I love that pic!
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Thank you!
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Likewise my friend! Normally I prefer Luna, but I've become intrigued about writing stories with Nightmare Moon now.
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Glad you liked it!
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Thank you!
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Yeah, I know what you mean, but I think it worked out, you just have to imagine.
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Alright. No matter, still a great story.
1462228 You are welcome! Btw will you make a prequel? Several of us are asking for it if you don't mind that is.
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Before I even considered using the BGMs for the fic, I was listening to some songs and BMGs that fit the mood I was feeling as I worked on this and from what fit anytime I looked at that sad pic of Nightmare Moon.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the addition of the BGMs. Yeah I'm looking forward to my 3rd-person Nightmare Moon fic too.
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Thanks!
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...you can see why I had to express my reaction to it somehow. 
That is a fun fact. It was quite a moving picture
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And I' sure there are typos in there. Even though I combed it several times. 
Don't feel bad my friend. I tear up every time I read this, especially if i have that BGM playing. And yes, you did tell me you like my taste in BGMs. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. As you no doubt are aware, I always try to make my clop fics more than just about the clop. I like to have heart, feelings and anything that makes for a good romance.
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You'll have to let me know what you thought of it, and what thoughts it stirred. BTW, I need to check out your first fic "The Goddess Within".
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Glad you enjoyed it my friend. I try to come up with original ideas, or mostly original ones. And don't worry, I'm sure one day you'll have a fic in the feature box. I remember wondering if I'd ever see the day one of mine would make it there. So just keep at it my friend!
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You certainly have my thanks for suggesting a prequel.
This was mostly intended as a One-shot...but I suppose in time I could do a prequel. it certainly would be interesting. Though I do have another lengthy 3rd-person Nightmare Moon fic in the works. So I'm not sure when this would come to pass. I have a rather full plate.
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More, eh? Well I was certainly thinking sequel as I wrote this.
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Read the above comment. I have addressed the prequel there.
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While I'm saddened by this development, I understand those phones can be quirky, so no worries here. Though I believe you can change your selection. Maybe you just need to try that from a regular computer. Not sure. Either way I'm not mad.
So much "I love you" that it turned into a sappy romantic fic that was really stereotypical.
seriously I got tried of the "I love you" bits
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I appreciate your interest, but I think it only fair to warn you that my stories are rather explicit. Maybe this warning's not necessary, but after looking over your profile, I do feel tempted to give it.
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Red.
Awwww, this was such a sweet story
during the nightmare all I could think of was that pic you posted. I'm not at all ashamed to admit that this almost had me cry, both sad and happy tears threatened to spill. Great story and i loved it, can't wait for your other NMM story 
I don't normally read clopfics at the clop part, all I do is read the story leading up to it and it was very nice and congrats on getting featured.
I just finished this story, and my goodness, it was beautiful.
I'm not going to lie, after that heart-wrenching dream at the start, I first thought the dialogue seemed a little unrealistic because the human seemed to act like a child instead of a lover. But as the story progressed, you gave their relationship proper context and, upon re-reading it, it suited the story quite well.
What really drove the story for me was how loving Nightmare Moon was, both physically and emotionally. She seemed so soothing, so loving, that it warmed me to read your descriptions of her. I wanted to cuddle her at the moment your character did! I also liked the idea of a nightmare being sought out to shoo away nightmares. This is gonna sound really silly, but I have a Luna shirt that I bought for just that purpose when I was going through some hard times. I really felt a connection to the story as a result.
The story really hits its stride during the lovemaking scene, and it really carries the story well to the end. It's so tender and intimate that I could picture it perfectly. What's really awesome about it, which not everypony does when writing sex, is that you stop the dialogue when the sex intensifies, and you focus on all the wonderful sensations. I love this because, realistically, one does not form coherent sentences on the brink of orgasm, particularly in a mind-blowing encounter such as this.
So again, fantastic work! I'm going to have to read this again on a late night to get the full effect.