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added to read later, and by read later i mean read in about 4 hours when everyone is offline and i have nothing to do
I SHALL COMMENT BACK WITH MY THOUGHTS
Sounds like a good story. STORY. I said story. I be no clopper.
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Inb4 featured.
" wraps her hooves around your waste "
Found a spelling error!
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Fixed! Thanks for pointing that out! Can't believe I missed that.
1298093 "At first there doesn’t seem to be any sigh of it"
Found another!
well done
here a a sexy redheart
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Whoops...again! And fixed!
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Thank you!
Huh. Not my fetish, but ok, now I'm questioning myself. Good job while I go and have a long look at myself >_>...
Can't say I would have acted any differently
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"share our naughty fun form the privacy of our own home"
Last one that I spotted!
Who's awesome... Your awesome
It was an epic read by the way
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Glad you enjoyed it! I put a lot of thought into this one. And the two pee scenes were a bit of an experiment with this story. What can I say, I enjoy trying new things when I write.
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Thanks Swift! You're quickly becoming a big supporter of mine! Glad to have you as a follower!! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-fyay.png
Great story, Would have preferred less kissing and more crazy fucking, but that's just me. I think anyone in a similar situation with someone they really cared about would do the same. If you've been dating for eight moths, I would hope so at least.
Nurse Redheart is slammin' hot. Close second to the spa ponies.
^_^ AHHHHH im such a nice guy. But yes you did make me think, +1 well worth it.
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Very very good cant wait for the other one.
No, how could you. here have all the dawww's i have. i can contain it anymore!! *faints from the loss of dawwws*
well, what do we have here? oh, Darth Brony left his computer on. what story is this? *Reads story* The Dawwws have been Doubled
This is awesome in every language known to man and a few known to monkeys! Rated five out of five moustaches.
This was totally worth the wait! I loved it! And "our" story will continue? So much awesome my computer can't handle it all
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Excellent! Thank you for all the dawwws, but.... *sees you fainted* Oh my! *gives some dawwws back* Come on...wake up! It's fine to give dawwws, but save some for youself. And Ha-ha! The Dawwws have been doubled! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-lfun.png
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Wow! What a comment! ...and thanks for the moustaches! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tbob.png
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Oh yes, the story of "you" and Nurse Redheart will continue! If this story does well enough, I'll only be too happy to write the sequel. I've got a rough outline for it and a title already! I'll post the summary in my next blog post! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tyell.png
in before inevitable featurement. X3
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You think it's good enough to be featured? cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tblush.png It'd be awesome if it does! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-dawhyeah.png
1299295 I haven't read it yet. just got hame from school.
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Did you catch the reference?
1298398 well i'm glad to be following such a awesome writer like you
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Oh, my bad then.
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It sounds very familiar...but I'm not sure of the exact reference.
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Thank you! cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tblush.png I'm glad you enjoy my writing. cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tyell.png
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Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it.
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Glad I made you think! And that pic of Chuck Norris, made me lol
1299484 So much yay
1299484 reading it noa! I was up at 5 am thinking it would be out by then. No luck now I've felt like crap all day.
okay, wtf, that's two fics in a row. In the spa ponies, I'm wearing a green polo in the fic and IRL. Now I'm clean shaven, and I just shaved before I logged on today IRL. How are you doing that?
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Honestly, I'm drawing those things from my own RL experiences. cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-dlaugh.png In the spa pony fic, I thought of clothes guys typically wear (myself included). I chose green, because it's my fav color (and a common pocket T-shirt color). And in this fic...well I like nuzzling with freshly shaved cheeks, rather than when mine are rough and stubbly (and I suspect I'm not the only guy who likes having his cheeks shaved).
1299651 but that's the crazy thing. i like my beard. I only shaved because of an interview.
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Fairly Odd Parents.
I just could not relate to "you". I'm a flawed guy... WISH I was like "you" but I'm not. He's too perfect. Would've liked this better if he had some more bad things about him, makes the character more interesting. Now, what would I actually do? Tch... well I wouldn't be as overprotective as "you" is. She can help herself, it's nice to be with her for a little bit but I'd have to work. She's a nurse, she can handle it, I'd have that much faith in her. If it was a real girl... tough luck, get some bed rest, take a bath, watch TV, you don't need me for that! Last thing I'd be is annoying.
But I was here for the clop, and I got it. Even though phrases like, "Of course my dear" or "yes my lady" really made me grunt in annoyance. Just too nerdy dude! Enjoyable read.
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It's like you mentioned in my one blog post, some guys are into the tender stuff. You told me you aren't, which is perfectly fine. The world needs all types of people. This was just an idea I had for a sweet story. I'll admit, I modeled the "you" after things I would have done, and what I would hope other guys would do for their sweethearts.
Wow Jaydex, this was simply fantastic. I now like a pony I had always overlooked, until now.
Your word choice was excellent, and the love scenes made me feel so immersed! I d'awwwwed when he said all those kind things!
The wait was much more than worth it, this was amazing, and deserves to be featured.
Take care friend, and keep it up!
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Thank you my friend! I'll be sure to do my best!
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loved it. piss was gross, but whatever. had sex.
1298066 what do you know! I came on here SPECIFICALLY to see if you were lurking in the comments. So far, i've found you on 4 differ clop fics. Im gonna tyrn this into a game
I put others first before myself, so I would do everything in my power to make sure that other people are better before I tend to myself even if it kills me.
Loved it, great story!
That really was an amazing story my friend, it really lived up to my expectations as a pure romance fic. i personaly thought the D'aw and sexual moments matched well together. The flow was great as always and it felt that I was there with her. which is why i have like Faved and added this story to my top faves list!
If i had to add one thing that i wish i saw more of though as just something that i personaly like is I wish the shower scene had more too it as i really enjoy shower scenes...
This deserves a seqel, But first i think we both agree there are other things that need an update. lol
Edit: Congratulations on the feature box again you lucky dog
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You sir, have my admiration.
I love this story a lot.
"What would you do?" Sorta feelin'
But I love this story from the beginning to the end.
It's good to be reading again.
hmmm I would do the same, and snug her close to share warmth of my body.
..................................brilliant, just brilliant. 100/10 and just keep me reading. my god, perfect, cant wait for the next part.
The story was good and well set within the relationship they (Nurse Redheart and You/me/etc.) especially with their comfort levels with each other and expressing endearment and trust..these factors gave a great representation of their love and also the intent you put within the story with your opening and ending question.
As far as what i would do for my girlfriend were she ill...i would do anything within my power for her...because to me having her is a blessing and as such i would do what i must to aid her..love her..and ease her woes to the best that i can muster.
as for the "watching your Girlfriend pee in the toilet"....i'd rather not do that for some sense of pleasure...however if it's a matter of medical issue then it's understandable...ex..blood..or erratic issues.
JaydexTheShadowKnight keep doing your all with your stories...and always allow yourself to rest too...awesome job.
1299295 see what did I tell ya. Featured baby!