• Published 21st May 2012
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What Happens in Pegasus - Crowley

You and Rainbow Dash enjoy some R&R - or at least try to!

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Comments ( 165 )

Another tale by Crowley. And yet another story that I look forward to reading in a single sitting.

No time to read this now sadly, but at least I have something to look forward to later :twilightsmile:

Booya! And here I thought it would be published in chapters, instead of getting the whole thing at once. :rainbowderp:

Hmmm interisterestering.
Pronounced: inter-ister-ester-ing
Best. Word. Ever.

oh boy this looks good:yay:


best word ever improved!

Oh yeah... Looking forward to it.
EDIT: Reading it, that is. Just logged in and saw this.

What happens on the Mile... stays in the Mile :trixieshiftleft:
As a reward for bestowing the gift of story upon me, I shall give you a funny song:

Hurray! It's finished!

Now to drop everything I was doing and read it.

will you be able to keep a straight face?

Yes, you just need a fucking awesome poker face:

That'll do.

Whoa. What? The whole story? Awesome!

yeah this is going to be awesome, looking forward to another crowley story that will probably get featured like they always do. :ajsmug:

Omazing all I can say is damn it Crowley i alreAdy had to many fetishes if there is such a thing


...but it's too late for me to read...:raritydespair:


The story's only been out for 20 minutes and already 25+ comments! Hot damn.
Time to start reading.

I keep forgetting to read the first one. ...gotta get on that now, then come back to this.

New Crowley?

Must drop everything and read this, now!


I dropped my laptop!


Sweet, I get to add two new fetishes to my list! :rainbowkiss:

This story did not disappoint.

Well worth the wait, It was nice to see Rookie and Rainbow again. I think the last time we saw him was in your first fic, he didn't say much and he was as bland as white bread with really no discernible personality. Now in the sequel after what seven other fics? He seems to actually have character development, a past, and clear motivations. I really like the secondary ship of Soarin' and Spitfire. By the way it was nice of them to let Rainbow and rookie keep the outfits, but considering that they soiled them with Love Tabasco, it was a better option than just tossing them out. I bet the other fans in that stadium would never guess where those uniforms have been or what they were used for, if only nylon and spandex could talk...Giggity, Giggity. Also I laughed by ass off at the awkward situation where Rookie took the blame for the locker room incident. :rainbowlaugh:


I really like the detailed description of Las Pegasus and I love that you modeled it after more 50's/60's Vegas Rat Pack era Vegas as apposed to the more family friendly Vegas of today; which I don't mind because have you been to Vegas recently? It's fucking amazing.


Thank you for making this.
Peace Out.

*We now have too many fetishes because of you Crowley: underwater pony fetish, Twilight Sparkle fetish, an Applejack fetish, a pony fetish, Lucid dreaming fetish, a possession-by-a-millenia-old-evil-being fetish, massage fetish, wall-eye fetish, Fluttershy fetish, a cave fetish and a Rainbow Dash fetish and now we can add Jacuzzi and role-playing fetishes to the list...I hope you're proud of yourself.


I have to wait a day before reading!

Heh heh, yes, those costumes are perfect "replicas"... I wonder what they'd say if they found out otherwise...

Also, Dash really does look sexy in that suit, even in the pic you chose. I also enjoyed the way you incorporated a SoarFire pairing here, it was nice to have that little bit of trouble thrown into the mix. :)

Oh Crowley you devil you, with your fetish inceptions :rainbowlaugh:

Now that everything has been dropped, my laptop is dead, and I have read this.

My mind has been blown. I laughed a lot, I nearly tested up when Rookie and Dash kissed after their fight, and I laughed more at the wonderbolts costume moment at the by end.

Crowley, you totally need to do a follow up where Dash and Rookie double date with Spitty and Soarin'. Then, have them show up in the Wonderbolts costumes. The laughs from that would probably kill me. It doesn't have to be long, just do a single chapter.

... I'm speechless

YES YES YES! Your stories are always the best Crowley!

Whoa... Two hours went by while I read all this. I can't thumb this up enough... This pulled me in so much..

623789 really? RWJ? that song was stupid when it came out, and it's still stupid in Lego form. I like some of his stuff, but that one sucked. Big time.

624476 told my grandparents it was for my younger sister. They fell for it hook, link, and sinker.

624721 more power to you. Just saying that I don't.

Haha You're a very wise man.
That pretty much just made my night!

I'm suppose to be studying right now for an exam, until i saw a new fic posted by Crowley.
Guess i made the right decision, reading this story :pinkiehappy:

Hell yes. Read this all in one sitting. Awesome fic yet again.

Ahh, the continuing adventures of Dash and Rookie! Loved it. :pinkiehappy:

Yet again, you amaze me by your writing, Crowley.

AWWW YEAH, Another winner by the awesome Crowley. Sir, you are just the PINNACLE of ideas. This is definitely the best fic so far, taking an older character, and giving him depth.

Son, I am happy.

nicely written! no wonder its in my feature box!

Another masterpiece :V

Finally managed to find time to sit down and read the story, and I must say that I'm very impressed. My list of fetishes only continues to grow thanks to these wonderful stories

Geez, the popularity for this story is rising at an almost staggering speed.
Oh, and it's really awesome btw.
Rainbow Dash approves :rainbowdetermined2:


This is a good read, could cut the clop parts but there is 1 thing that bothers me....

One does not simply disagree to take bacon. (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻

Loved it. Simple as :twilightsmile:

Your stories are always pretty cute and funny, Crowely, but can you please, please get someone to show you how to use proper punctuation coming into and out of dialogue? Heck, inbox me and I'll go through it with you, but it is a really glaring issue in all of your work.

Anyway, that aside, this was good fun. Keep up the great work!

*A loud bump noise was heard* ah shit, anypony got glue? my jaw just disconnected. absoulutly incredible. yes, just yes. FUCK YES! :rainbowkiss:

Judging by the last two stories Crowley has made, I think he may just have an underwater blowjob fetish. :rainbowlaugh:

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