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Hand-Made
Dedicated to hand-made quality reminiscent of old-world charm. Specialization in anatomically correct fillies/mares having fun with human males. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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New Hand-Made Fic? MY BODY IS READY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this was great amazing work
Hand-Made you are the best at what you do.
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Finally! Hand-Made did another story!
my little human fap fic
I don't get it
Wait, Fluttershy wrote this? You didn't exactly indicate it...
I don't know if it's just me but the dialogue in this story sounds like a dubbed hentai. But I like that so no problems from me.
What this fellow (5198780) said. It seems like 'Fluttershy fucks some dudes' and that's it. Which is fine but it would be better with something to indicate this was something Fluttershy wrote as opposed to something that happens. Someone reading it (even Flutters) and commenting at the end would work to really sell the premise. Or even internally in the story itself as asides. As-is ... I mean, it's porn but I was hoping for something a bit more true-to-title I guess.
Uhm, one more thing. A bodice is a piece of clothing by the by so, uhm ... I get what you're saying it's just that's not exactly the word you'd use. Unless there's either a very old use of that word I'm unaware of or there's a secondary meaning that is rarely used in American English. Barrel, as strange as it sounds, is the word used to describe the torso of a real horse so that'd work
5199927 So are Knickers
The word you're looking for is Nicker, specifically the 4th definition (To neigh softly). Honestly, it's an easy mistake to make, and spell-checks won't catch it.
I'm really jealous of how good you are with setting the scene. I really like how the opening flows, and the actual prose used in this story is probably the best I've read from you so far. Great work!
So...this is the kinda clopfic Fluttershy writes...holy damn I'd give ANYTHING to read more of this level work. Seriously, just...just awesome.
Lol self insert fic
So...Much...WANT!!!!
Yeah, so what if you missed a day of school, that's actually better than being late cause you can just tell them that you were sick.
I couldn't stop myself from laughing!
Oh man really Fluttershy? 
Good job fluttershy!
I'm so happy you got gangbanged! 
XD
Huh, this was actually... pretty amazing.
Aside from 2 "the the" repetitions the story had a superb flow and was hawt as hell
Upvote is definitly deserved, and my hat off to you, dear sir/madam author.
I'm going to be honest, yeah, that was hot. Good job.
I'll have to check out some of your other stories.
That was HOT!
Really great writing! No surprise coming from you.
Just.. so satisfying!
I can't find this word in the dictionary. Care to share where you learned it and what it means?
for a more pertinent matter?
while he adopted
heard
would have
flown
the writing style is great, but the exposition i a little bit taxing
had the story not had the title you gave it, I would have stopped reading right when the humans discovered Fluttershy was aroused. I get really annoyed by greedy over-eager male characters in clopfics. But I'm guessing that's just me, because a lot of other people seem to love that.
Despite not liking the scenario, the sex is described pretty well. I love the visuals you're giving us, and it's actually not as wild as I was fearing it would be, even if it's kinky. Though, I'm having a little trouble figuring out the positions of the men, with her anus AND her pussy being penetrated at the same time, unless I'm misreading some things.
>Her flat, long tongue lapped along the topside of the shaft, feeling the human's rapid pulse through the raised veins. His pheromone-laden pre dripped into her throat as Fluttershy's nose nearly met his testicles.
Is he... upside down?
>The lubrication was of much-needed benefit for the girthy male within Fluttershy's anus; he was the foundation for the mare's balance. He took the longest to extend his penetration, finally sliding himself fully within Fluttershy's tight ass with the aid of her soupy orgasm.
How does her orgasm lube up her anus? As far as I know, female orgasms have a wet residue from the vagina. Unless Fluttershy has some special thing where her butt can secrete vaginal fluid, I would think feeling wetness inside her anus would be pretty icky.
Thank you for at least giving the scene a tenderness to it. That's a little heartwarming.
Was REALLY hoping that with the title, we were going to get a little bit with Fluttershy outside of the fic that she was supposedly writing; such as her rolling it up in a scroll, having one of her friends read it, her sending it anonymously, anything like that, so that was slightly disappointing.
Otherwise, not bad. I enjoyed this more than I thought I was going to. Good job.
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I think the flowery purple-prose description at the beginning was probably on purpose. And Fluttershy was apparently on her back on top of one guy leaning her head back for another. That means her fluids would be subject to gravity and would be added to the mix as the guy on bottom thrust. Physics.
That was great :) Incredible detail, and all around just incredibly sexy. Thank you so much
Ugh, I'm so unbelievably late with some things. Sorry about that.
Alright, so, lets see, thoughts: it's an enjoyable little romp and well done so far as I'm concerned. It works well speaking to the inner hopes, thoughts, and dreams of the thus far repressed Pegasus and works well as an inner window to her mind. However, I'm not entirely sure the effect of her writing it was as strongly conveyed as Rainbow's story (which naturally will be the comparison piece).
As I said, it's an enjoyable story, thematically it fits with Fluttershy being depicted as the repressed and easily cowed mare who doesn't say what she thinks in public. So it comes across as an amalgamation of some of her deeper desires manifested at once. Fluttershy feels like the mare we've come to expect; her sense and desires meld into a sensuality still derived from emotional comfort. Appropriately, the strongest evidence phrase for it was early on:
It's a strong personal touch that neatly encapsulates both fear and comfort into one simple image. The comfort of the blanket is what's holding her fear in check, naturally the wings provide the same covering, so it has that nice 'a-hah' moment that we see that extended to the show's manifestation as well. Fluttershy's needs start off as physical in nature, but it seems like that is merely a vehicle for comfort through touch.
Now we have “the trio of separate entities.” I like this touch that they're all very different, yet all are archetypes of various physical and mental desires. Their very presence doesn't seem to interact with each other as strongly as they interact with Fluttershy, which gives off the impression that it's Fluttershy's own menagerie of fantasies melted into one situation where she couldn't otherwise decide what she wanted to write about. All fit into the previous story 'Reader' personalities and makes it feel like an identifiable fantasy for an indecisive patron even if it might very well be about one person in particular:
Singular, not plural, and with the intentional slip of prose at that time it's quite revealing. All three are separate, and not at the same time. There's something in it that screams for attention from one person, promising "I can be 'bad' if you want me to be' while wanting to indulge all her curiosities at once.
The story itself has frequent conflicts regarding just who is getting the better of the deal and who is in charge of the situation. On one hoof, she is only “an innocent, defenseless mare” but on the other, she is the one satisfying them and empowered despite the compromised position. It's a meld between unblemished inexperience and some sort of natural performance in being able to satisfy physically; So Fluttershy is simultaneously in control and meekly passive about everything.
But, the problems I have are more in execution: not the actual writing, that's terrific as usual, it's in the differentiation of Fluttershy vs. Hand-Made's prose. Rainbow's story from earlier set the standard as it's amazing and 'terrible', IE, it feels like something Rainbow could have written. From a stylistic perspective it had her usual idiosyncrasies which made it really believable as an amateur. Fluttershy, in contrast, still uses the more well used and well liked Hand-Made definable vocabulary and flourish, aside from one or two little breaks (the big one in the middle, and the accurate detail at the beginning).
It's almost unavoidable as Fluttershy doesn't have a tremendously recognizable style, and her 'washy' tendencies in of dialogue with more 'maybe' and 'could' identifiers don't come across as strongly as.... something awesome that comes across all strong-like! Twilight has her polysyllabic academic tone to work off of, Rainbow can use the 'buffyisms' with poor metaphorical allegory and self-aggrandizement, Rarity can be ridiculously flourishing avec le fleur de coleur, AJ has the countryisms, Pinkie has her rambling stream-of-consciousness but Fluttershy is bereft of a strong literary tone. Point being, identifying this as Fluttershy's written work is naturally going to be hard. So, with that in mind, the missed opportunity here would be injecting an early identifier into the written process to firmly attach the notion that it's her work. It could be as simple as something from the first two or three sentences written in first person then struck out and rewritten, or the 'gamey' style
[you find a note hidden in the inside of a pillow case; it appears hastily crumpled as if somepony has tried to suddenly hide it from view. The parchment's ratty edges have several unrecognizable stains and smells weakly of sweat.]
All in all, like I said, I did enjoy it, but I also think this might have been one of the harder ones to write because of its intrinsic difficulties. Still, the concept has a lot of merit and the actual story was a lot of fun. Thanks again mate!
"Fluttershy Writes a clopfic"
The introduction to the story is beautiful. We are given so much details to work with that it feels like the start of an epic Journey. In this case it's a journey that belongs to "Lemondrop"
. Now having read Rainbow's "story" (which was priceless
) I was looking forward to see how Fluttershy would fair when putting together her version of a clop-fic. Even though it is her own world/fic, it seemed that she went into it with a lot of baggage. Flutters goes on describing her everlasting fear of flight, Troubles at the Academy, As well as personal challenges (inability to woo a stallion) and is put in such a way that seems to follow her character even while she writes a personal story.
Choosing to be honest with herself instead of hiding behind a "mask" was the best way to go about it because it shows that Fluttershy envisions herself conquering these challenges. Almost to say that she has set a personal goal....aside the you know..... getting gangbang by 3 humans thing
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Flutters drums the scenario of getting lost in the woods of Everfree while trying to confront her fear. While lost, confused and trying to sate her needs, the mare finds herself in a predicament with 3 humans. Now in Rainbow's case, she was sated with just one... Damn!!! Flutters is a Freak!
This is even more evident when she tries to find the right word for context by crossing out words whorse and broodmare. Eventually she resides herself with the statement "oh Celestia let him fuck me" It's always the quiet ones...
Now for myself, I loved and was disappointed at the next couple of lines. Seeing Flutters struggle to with her choice of words prior and her accidently using I instead of referring to herself in a 3rd person was truly golden material. It was hot to see her trot in and out between the realms of Fantasy and Reality. The only aspect of being disappointed was how she was able to retain complete composure soon afterwards. It did not take anything away from the story completely, I guess it was something that could have been explored further with continued "Mistakes" that she could have made.
The three males roles here are about what Fluttershy really wanted in her fic and basically were designed to fill'er up! . As for personalities, they did not come off as imposing (too much) and they didn't seem like a bunch of dicks. They were adapted to their surroundings and for Flutters, served their purpose. Even towards the end, they were more than happy to invite her back should the need arises and even to go on an provide a map. Resourceful^^
A long build up of hesitation along with anticipation does the clop good. I personally enjoyed how you stitched together the sequence of events that led up to the initial penetration as opposed to just Going In Raw. Flutters hesitantly trying to avoid staring at the groin area/ backing up into the male behind her/ to releasing her mare fluids before them which initially tipped off the miscommunication to the males on why she was there. The clop of how they take her lines up perfectly and I love the accuracy to mare detail from spraying to nickering in appreciation when she is forced to climax over and over again
. I'm surprised she didn't go feral completely for a mare of her structure^^.
Finishing out, post-tension Fluttershy would be amazing to see more of. The analogy of her springing with new life and an extra umpf in her step/ and extra flap in her wings like a butterfly was cool. For her, that is the ideal persona that she wants and for a timid character, it's something I think the fans of Flutters would want as well. The story was well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish and for someone like me that believes in the "no hole left unfilled" policy, it was a clear winner!! Outstanding quality that is truly Hand-Made!
P.S I realize that this story has been out for awhile and my review is late, needless to say I am the last horse to cross the finish line
but hey I finished the race and that's all that matters.^^
Dayum.
It's always the ones you'd least expect...
... Flutters needs to write more...
Twilight: "Fluttershy, this is a really weird and disturbing story you've written."
Fluttershy: "Oh, I know. I would never be late for class."
Twilight: o_O
Well she certainly writes better clop than Rainbow Dash.
To fully enjoy this you really have to imagine it all in Fluttershy's voice. Brilliant
Wow! That was AMAZINGLY HOT!
Great story! You get a thumbs up from me!
BTW, I found a typo:
I don't think Fluttershy was showing any partiality to anypony. I assume you meant partially?
Noice.
THIS clopfic is so much better than a clopfic of Fluttershy and a bowl of soup.
This should have a porn tag