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Hand-Made
Dedicated to hand-made quality reminiscent of old-world charm. Specialization in anatomically correct fillies/mares having fun with human males. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Finally! You know how hard it is to find stories with a level of class in them? Yet another awesome story my friend!
Sounds like Fun!
Edit: Oh god, The force of a thousand suns.
Fluttershy! WHAT THE FUCK!
Oh shit HandMade has a new story? Dis gon' be gud. :3
Awesome story! Always glad to see that you've made a new one!
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this was amazing great work.
Handmade, why are you such a god?
For your continued efforts in Sweetie sexing, we are now friends.
Don't fight it.
On top of your clop boner, enjoy your nostalgia boner from this!
That's right, the boner has been doubled!
translate to english for understand:
oh dios, super fantastico, nunca lei una historia tan original, el nivel de descripcion es totalmente de mi agrado y el manejo del celo de sweety bell uff que caliente , llenaste cada espacio de la personalidad del personaje
pense que el dueño era descarado, pero fue tranquilo y agradable solo por complacerla, bondage no es lo mio del todo pero me gusto cada detalle y personalmente me gusta la descripcion de los fluidos..
gracias, ya tienes otro seguidor.
yo this story though...
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i do see fluttershy being the gambler XD
YES! More stories by handmade! NEVER stop writing.
needs more he should have had sex with rarity and she would join his herd/harem whatever he wants to call it plus really generosity but you dont care that he took and had sex with your sister all you care about is being famous thats being greedy
Holy fuckin shit why am I reading this?
That was horrible and perverted and pedophile-ish and abusive and just all-around morally fucked up. Yet it was entertaining... in a sick, twisted way. And you should feel bad on a moral basis and good on an accomplishmental basis for writing it. Mostly, just feel bad, okay? I'm not sure how to react. I know you know how horrible this was, you pedo.
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Technically hebephilia, as Sweetie Belle has grown to the point of estrus (and able to bear young). Still considered immoral by most modern-day western or European cultures, but pedophilia is worse, which is pre-pubescent children. (Wikipedia article: here)
But I'm not sure what to think of this either. Well written and interesting nonetheless, so liked / thumbs up.
Should have expected this when I read the description. <:
My friend, sweetie belle is much too young to be doing these things! How can you users condone such horrible behavior!? And here I thought that there was a chance of saving america from its self.
Forgive me for I have no mouse but I must downvote. 2/10
Oh boy, this is going to be one of those stories, isn't it?
Don't do gambling kids
Damn that was hot!
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4549515 That's probably right.
4549241 true. Well, I guess I learned something!
This has caused my orgasm to spilt the heavens.
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This is what could happen if you loose at a casino.
Be careful!
4550559 Aggreed
I'm late to the party once again
C'est la vie.
Well, unsurprisingly, I like it. I'll talk about the whole thing in one go rather than in three as it comes down to the same thing in the end.
First of all, formatting wise... I like this. Three definite parts, broken up by perceptible gaps allow for a definite non-rushed feel to the pacing despite skipping several intervals. Because of that it works quite nicely. The story is large enough that it can sustain it and the tonal qualities between each are different as well so it doesn't blend one with the next or muddy the transition between them. It took me a looong while to notice the first part wasn't even in second person perspective, but two and three were
Naturally, it means it wasn't a jarring transition.
Alright story itself:
Poor poor evil Fluttershy and her 'system'
. I've seen someone in Vegas try to bet their shoes once... given I only went once, that seemed noteworthy. No suspension of disbelief at all and given the circumstances, it readily latches on to her latent 'Flutterage' tendencies which have been shown a few times. That said, I still like the continuity of Fluttershy pursuing the 'Reader Character' (henceforth named Bugsy, and always certainly wearing a check suit). Her whole attitude really does meld well with her mission in the story.
That said, the wording with: 'even when their friends couldn't.' is particularly intriguing. It does present a fun pair of possibilities in, A: giving a line of thought as to 'which other friends would that be?' if she's being genuine, or B: fulfilling Fluttershy's fantasy for being the sole and express exception among her friend, taking the role of the superior mare despite her typical subordinate personality. Psychologically it just seems to explain her, well, 'episode'.
I like the callbacks and cyclical nature lucky Red-Nine and Sweetie Belle's fear. The first is just sorta fun that it is the lucky number for Bugsy, used for 'control' which got Sweetie into both awkward positions as it were. Certainly a lucky number... just not for Fluttershy. But the second one is a little more serious. I like that Sweetie's issue is still that Rarity steals the spotlight. Her anger might have subsided, and it seems like it's not intentional, but it's still a fact of life living with her. And given the Epilogue's ending she's absolutely justified in fearing that. First and last, it works well to bring everything in a circle in that sense.
Rarity herself is interesting too. It generally feels sincerely interested in Sweetie's well-being when she thinks there's a chance for change. She doesn't want to mention Ponyville, she's curt and polite though not warm, it feels business-like in that she doesn't want to negotiate from a position of weakness. Sweetie is still first and it shows though which is nice. When she loses control, everything else feels like her consolation prize. I was laughing at that little implication of getting drunk with lightweight Twilight Sparkle, but I'm also a little surprised, given the circumstances, she couldn't find a tawdry little thing to slake her needs too.
Now, about Sweetie and our Bugsy: they're a good foil so it works nicely. They work in a really complimentary light; where as Sweetie is a very naive and innocent dreamer, Bugsy is the worldly predatory.... hmm, bourgeois. His actions, the initial introspection in just setting up his own appearance after the chloroform, and particular the passage that likens him to a 'lion' all set that ruthless tone. What makes it even more sinister is the capitalization on Sweetie's comfort towards an authority figure. It feels so very devious and underhanded, yet it makes absolute sense from a psychological point of view. The reference to the bull and Europa is not only tremendous, it feels like that is the perfect comparison for the whole story in a nut shell
. So on a personal note, c'est délicieux! He feels like a real opportunist; so while every single thing I've said are, more or less, personality traits I despise, I also really am genuinely impressed that you managed to write him in such a way to make it accessible and understandable. Like the Dark Brotherhood in Skyrim, people love the type and I have no idea why. Still, finding out and thus exploring that facet is tremendously enjoyable.
“Perhaps this is a special-guest only rule? If not, I certainly have some frivolous sons I could do without..."
I love that line I really truly do.
Many thanks agian mate, it was a lot of fun!
I gotta say I wish rarity had blasted the dude and took sweetie away I honestly doubt celestial would allow a child to be gambled away and screw casinos all they do is rig the games bet some of u reading didn't know those roulette tables are rigged with magnets certain numbers have magnets that can be engaged and the little ball has a metal core
You don't fuck with casino's.......
Damn, that was good.
4546401 Pretty much my reaction.
Why did this switch to second person? Completely ruined the story.
4546847 For liking Handmade as well, we r best friends.