This story takes place during Twilight's Kingdom. Story takes place from Marks POV. Mark has been in Equestria for a week now and it is probably the craziest week ever for Mark. Mark's grown to become friends with a lot of Ponies around Ponyville. One of them being the Mane 6 and Spike who are the first ones mark saw when he just appeared in the everfree forest. How did he come to be in Equestria you ask. Mark was just playing one of his most hated games vanish like he always does he never beats it but this time it was different this time when mark died his computer just flashed red and his screen turned into a seizure trap before mark could restart his computer his hand got sucked into the screen "AHHHHH" Mark Screamed as his whole body was pulled into the screen. And that's how he ended up in Equestria. He doesn't know when he'll get back but he has faith that Twilight and the others will find a way. But these next days are about to go from weird to life threatening and Mark's the only one who can stop the storm that's coming and he doesn't even know it yet.
This is also my first story so please don't be too harsh.
If you enjoyed this and want to read the sequel, click here.
yeah, no...
why
It was a good try, but it didn't work. Seems a bit underdeveloped. Sorry.
PewDiePie and his likeness is not accepted here.
... Just... Why?
wat.
I'm... I'm not sure how I should feel about this...
4478249 You make an excellent point sir, your criticism is well thought out and addresses all the parts of the story that need adjustment.
The author will know exactly how to improve his writing for any further chapters thanks to you.
I just read this aloud in Markiplier's voice. Don't ask me why. I just did.
LOT of haters here go away haters no one like you guys anyway
I was loling when
mark used WARFSTASHE DRILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4670800 Thanks I just thought it would add more action and humor to the story
I cannot say that this story is good. Its complete shit. BUT it is mindless fun and I loved it.
So is he Wilfred Warfstache now...?
Nice, I was hoping that Mark was gonna K.O. Tirek by punching him in the gonads lol.
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5233197 Sometimes a story has to be mindless to be fun,
6118606 He is a youtuber who plays horror games and sometimes funny games he is most known for his charity livestreams and how he once donated 8000 dollars to cancer research
6118606 A horror gameplay youtuber who is known for making giant donations to charity, encouraging others to follow their dreams and generally being a nice guy. However, in his videos, he tends to annoy people because his reactions are sometimes...pretty out there.
So Mark does most of the fighting... And he doesn't get a throne? Man what a rip off.
6151476 Ik if I make another story I might have them make his own castle maybe and if not a giant throne
The art is just amazing. I'm sorry, but it just is. Also, love the idea!!!
4481530 this comment.
LOVE DIS!!!
Nicely done, although, most of the plot seems forced, but it doesn't matter because Markiplier.
why are why short.
6452133 Well this was my first story but if you want to read the sequel to this, click here.
way to rushed, gonna find another story.
No, just, no.
Wait is mark human?
6685226 yes.
it appears this fic is not good
6850057 k thanks for that wonderful piece of criticism.
Needs more detail sir
7013108 I was actually thinking about coming back to edit in more detail but I've been really busy lately.
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7151579 Omg
7151676 I can do what I want. Okay?
7153311 Ok? It didn't say you couldn't...?
7154275 Sorry for being so rough there.
7154397 Its ok.
You seem to put this on a lot of stories
no.
If that music vid at the end is supposed to be the end credits music, it would have been better if you used Crazy La Paint by MiniMusicMan
6685226 I haven't read the story, and because of that you comment looked kind of like a joke to me, maybe in a bad way, but I had to laugh
While I may don't like that youtuber, I'm not certain if he is really faking all that screaming.
*hits blunt*
whut.
When you find this.
Well, I suppose I should schedule a date with Bleach.
This story is much too long. It really only needed to be two sentences: "Markiplier utterly destroyed Tirek with the power of sheer AWESOMENESS! The End."
why...
what is this....
pls add tag pov!