Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.
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I can't wait for more fluttershy stories. I love your stories 💛😊
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Thanks, I'm glad you like them. Right now I will be splitting my time between Fluttershy stories and a longer adventure story involving one of my OCs and Starlight Glimmer.
Oooh I can't wait to see it keep up the great work 😊👍🏻
Uh Celestia is OOC but I assume that was the intention
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Yes, that was the intention behind the whole story....for her to be extremely OOC.
It's days like this that I'm glad Hasbro all but officially condemned this perverted take on Celestia when they shut down the Molestia thing from way back when. You at least made it an AU.
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Well of course I made it AU. You don't think I'd actually classify this as something to go along with canon. The Molestia take on Celestia, the non-canon geography and the birth of Unicornia caused it to be that way as well.
pretty good
Uhhhh…
I loved this! I loved how
Celestiathe tyrant was given the punishment that she deserved.11104598
It was hard on Luna to do it but she made a deal with Queen Radiant Hope.
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Yeah.
Poor and miserable Selastia.
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Celestia isn't exactly that nice of a pony in this story....she had that punishment coming for the atrocities she committed over the centuries.
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At first, I thought he was under some kind of curse, but later I found out that he was completely crazy.But I feel that in this story, maybe he is really obsessed with twilight.
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Well she is in this story. In "I Never Wanted This" it was a matter of Celestia viewing Twilight as a daughter. In this one, she does have a very messed up obsession with Twilight, just like she did with all her former proteges. Luna will be the one with the proteges now and she is hoping to groom Sunset Shimmer to rule alongside her one day. She won't pull any of the same stunts as Celestia.
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Unlike the other 200 victims, he directly restrained his fear for the sake of twilight, and after five years, he also went to the forest to get it back himself.He gave up on the other ponies.
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The reason Celestia didn't try to get another protege after Twilight left is because she had left a much bigger impact on her than previous proteges. Sunset Shimmer was the protege right before Twi and Celestia got over her departure rather quickly. With Twilight, that didn't happen. If I ever do a sequel to this, Luna will wind up stabbing Unicornia in the back and free Celestia....which is something that Princess Sunset will not be pleased over (yes she will be royalty by that point) and I'm sure you know how the royalty of Unicornia will react when Sunset notifies them.
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If there is a continuation, it is really very exciting.If Selastia is released from hell,Then he will definitely look for Twilight again.
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If I do this, Celestia will be released from limbo and will be fully healed but I'm torn on what to do regarding her desire for Twilight....well whether she'd actually act on it. She will still have the unhealthy obsession over her but her time in limbo will have made her realize that she can't just go after Twi again....that and she will remember how Twilight was eagerly anticipating executing her. She will definitely be torn.
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He won't give up Twilight, even though he hates him so much,This is the only belief that he sustained when he suffered in hell.It is also his obsession.Twilight can't beat him.It was an accident in the forest.It can sneak into the forest, then hide and attack directly.Go straight for revenge and get the twilight glow.There are many things that can be written based on this.
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There are plenty of things that can be written after this but if you don't mind me asking, why are you using male pronouns for Celestia? It is really throwing me off.
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There is no special meaning.It's just a mistake
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Alright, I was just curious.
I'll admit, it's a cool story, I always reread it when I'm bored
But there's one thing I can't ignore, Twilight abandoned the only friends she had and spike because of celestia is a very questionable attitude to me, maybe she forgot about them...
I hope they don't feel betrayed
I also hope they return in the threequel, I bet spike will be the one who will feel the most betrayed and may twilight explain why she abandoned them
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Damn man, you gave me ideas here. I was initially going to do a third story where Sunset was a princess and then Luna broke the promise and released Celestia. Of course this would require that they travel to Unicornia since Twilight won't as much as set hoof outside of it. In the story I had Twilight being so traumatized that she felt that fleeing Equestria and basically starting from scratch was the best option. By the time Celestia was cast into limbo, Twilight had done her best to try and forget most of her prior life. I know that sounds bad but that is how I wrote her in this.