• Published 6th Apr 2012
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Fatherhooves - Violise



Another short one shot Featuring Dr.Whooves

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I am Noponies Father Pt.2

White.

All Twilight saw was white.

As if the whole of Equestria was nothing more than the delusion of imagination, and her whole existence could be chalked up to nothing more than this- kind of white.


She twisted her body around in the limitless expanse, in search of some sort of exit. Instead all she found was seemingly invisible walls preventing her from continuing. Frustrated, she leaned against one of the invis-walls, and stared of into the expanse. It wasn't the fact that she was here that frustrated her, it was the lack of explanation on how she came to be there. One moment, she was standing just feet from imminent disaster in the form of Dr.Whooves and Dinky; and then white. Limitless, ever expandi-'Arghhh!' Twilight screamed in her head. Exhausted, she hit the wall with a hoof.

"You had one job, Twilight. One job, and you couldn't even do that!" Twilight started pacing about the space. " Sometimes, I don't know what Celestia see's in me."

"It's your amazing will to stay positive, for one. Very few ponies have such resilience and wherewithal in this place."

Twilight spun in place, trying to find the source of the familiar voice, "Celestia? Is that you? I-I can't see you."

Twilight attempted to focus her gaze and her thoughts, but the white expanse was making it difficult. " Can you at least tell me where I am?"

"A safe place within my mind," Celestia's voice echoed. "I brought you here so we may discuss our next course of action in regards to our dear resident Time Lord."

'This goes way beyond personal, but I'll complain later,' Twilight thought. "What exactly do you mean 'next course of action', Princess?"

The silence hung for a moment.

"Unbeknownst to you, Twilight; you have actually been in this expanse for quite some time. In that time, Whooves has gone into a state of pure madness, unable to cope with his already fragmented mind being put into further disarray. HE has put a chain of events into place that have forced Luna and I to bring you here in order to put our final effort in place. Before I tell you what it entails, I wish to tell you that you are and will always be my favorite student, and I will always love you. I..know this may be hard to take, Twilight; but I will have to again ask that you do the impossible."

I need you and Whooves to die.

....


For a moment, Twilight was too stunned to speak. She fumbled to speak as a knot formed in her throat, "P-princess, you are surely j-jok..." Her eyes strained as the tears began to fall endlessly. 'no, Celestia would not make humor at a time like this...'

Twilight choked back a sob, "I don't understand Princess, how will this possibly help anypony? How can you expect me to comply with something like that; I mean, how can even solve anything! Princess, your plan doesn't make sense! Please, answer me?! I need your guidance...I need something-anything...just not this..."

Twilight collapsed onto the floor of the expanse, unable to comprehend the finality of the Princess's command. Silence was the only thing that answered her. Twilight looked at her hooves morosely. Death. She knew that is what she heard, but even if she had a thousand years to contemplate the word, the finality of it just tore her apart.

'Why?'

Twilight could only muster that single thought as a sudden heat rose in her chest. Her eyes shot open, and she began to paw at her chest. Rapidly, the heat rose to an unbearable level; choking all the breath out of her. It felt as if the flames in her chest had grown claws and began to try to burrow out of her. She tried to scream in pain, but could only manage a whimper. The whiteness of the expanse started to crawl back to reveal a stark blackness, consuming everything as it went. Twilight could only lay helplessly as unconsciousness began to take hold of her body. Twilight closed her eyes for the last time; and the tears ended...forever...


~~~~~~~~~



The Doctor strode about the TARDIS; looking about as he waited for the blue police box to land at it's next destination. He absently looked about the roof of the TARDIS, as if looking for some invisible prize.

He looked towards the space above him, and began to notice a blue light begin to form. But before he had time to form an opinion on how the color looked quite lovely against the TARDIS golden paneling, the form gave way to a purple haired form, which rapidly approached The Doctors face.

~

The Doctor was briefly stunned by the sudden onslaught of darkness, but after a moment; he began to realize that the darkness was indeed very warm, which was quite peculiar indeed. He reached up and found that the darkness was being caused by some sort of furry creature. He proceeded to move the creature from his face and properly investigate.

"Heylooo, little creature!" The Doctor chimed.

"Um, H-hi..." A feminine voice nervously responded.

"Ah, so you can speak! How marvelous, if not a little peculiar. So, what is you name, dear?"

"...I don't know." Twilight responded.


Sorry for the absence, I've had alot of stuff on my plate. And one more round of apologies for the chapter being so short. I only wrote it in 4 hours, and without a proper spacebar. Now, with that aside, I will be properly writing more chapters here soon

Comments ( 19 )

... I have no idea what is going on. And I can actually follow the Doctor's antics most of the time...

I am disturbed...

It's all good, we all have stuff we have to take care of. You have no need to apologize.

As for the story on killing the Doctor: BWAHAHAHAHA:rainbowlaugh: Good luck with that Celestia and Twilight.

This seems to when the Doctor was humanoid, I'm going to enjoy this.

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Celestia, of all ponies, wouldn't outright kill somepony. And I doubt even more that she would ever asked somepony to sacrifice himself.
Given how it's going, the most likely plan is something along the lines of "Amnesic Twilight -she's "dead"- meets the Doctor, unknowingly keeping him from becoming Doctor Whooves -"killing" him-"
Hell, knowing Celestia, Twilight would probably come back and regain her memories - Celestia stating that "Before I tell you what it entails, I wish to tell you that you are and will always be my favorite student, and I will always love you." because she believes not even her student could forgive her for doing that against her will.


...Whether is this or not, I don't really care, as long as it doesn't imply actual death for anypony...That would be too OOC for my liking. Then again it's only my opinion (damn, I wrote a novel again, didn't I? ^^')

1024158

I'm going to have to disagree with you on that. Celestia has shown to develop that she'll do what it takes to protect Equestria (banishing NM/Luna and turning Discord to stone). If she needs to do it to protect her land, she'll most likely do it. Fluttershy would fit the category better "out of all ponies."
I doubt she would risk that big of a paradox to prevent the Doc from becoming a pony, this is his 25th incarnation, who knows how long he's been there and what he's done to affect history.

I can only imagine how much it crushes Celestia to do what she must.

1024240
Ahem. As you said, she never killed anypony. Even the one who almost destroyed all life in Equestria (she's her sister, so it makes sense) or Discord that she loathes more than anything else in existence. Even against Chrysalis she apparently went for capture rather than kill (given she was only incapacited by Chrys' attack, the same would probably have happened if she won), and she was the first one actually out to harm and enslave her ponies.

Plus, she has that tendency to try to deal with everything using the Elements - I mean, even from a completely emotionless and objective point, sending Twilight, Element of Magic and most likely one of the (if not the) greatest hero Equestria ever knew to death is a dumb move. If only because that means no more elements.

If anything, Celestia ain't stupid nor short-sighted. Twilight's departure can only be temporary...

...Although she might pull a Turn Left on us. That's actually quite likely, I would say (even if I don't like it all that much).


...And I'm rambling again ><

:raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair: you dont know how badly I want to tell you how the story plays outttttt, but I can resist.1024355>>1024240

1024442 Ah, no problem. I'm insane, just deal with my rambling and forget about it :p
I'll be fine with more or less anything as long as its well-written and explained, anyway!

1024355

I agree with the fact on the enemies ,but this seems like a situation where she has to take drastic measures. Considering what the Doctor has done and she knows he's a Time Lord. She very well knows what he's capable of (sorta). Celestia is one of the few that are physiologically fit for making such an act.

As for the fact of the government super-weapon (EoH) and sending TS to do the job (let's be honest, who else possibly has a chance?) it might be because she's the best resource she has. Once again, I'd like to bring up the point this is the Doctor. Unfortunately, we don't know how long he's been in the ponyverse but for Celestia to say multiple times he's a Time Lord makes it quite obvious he's done several things.

I'm going to have to agree, I doubt Twilight will die just judging by the way this story is heading.

I don't think she would go that far. Anything could happen because of that move.

1024442

Pretty much what Raptor said, continue on with the story as well as you please.

whay the hell happend one minute dinky is leaving the hospital the next thing i know the doctor has gone mad and has to die? WTF!!!!!!

what... just happend?? SO CONFUSED!!!!.....:derpyderp1::pinkiegasp::twilightoops:

ugg and im listening to the assinscreed sound tracks and it fits perfictly with this

eml

GREAT STORY :derpytongue2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

eml

Take time this one story wroth wait for:derpytongue2:

Oh my celestia! This is so awesome, this fic has had me on the edge of my seat ever since Dinky's collapse. :D I cant wait for the next chapter.

...what just happend?

I'm sorry, but you lost me somewhere in the last chapter. I must've taken a wrong turn in Albuquerque. This whole chapter reeks off wibbly wobbly timey wimey stuff. Please try to clear it up. If you will kindly excuse me now, I must get an ice pack to help deal with this splitting headache I have now.

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