Five Minutes Flat

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HighRyde

HighRyde #1 · May 7th, 2014 · · ·

"Dash gasped, sounding affronted, and smacked Appledash right in the ass."

Um....

Might want to fix that.

cooopercrisp

cooopercrisp #2 · May 7th, 2014 · · ·

4351465 Thanks.

HighRyde

HighRyde #3 · May 12th, 2014 · · ·

4352347
No problem.

Raidah

Raidah #4 · May 16th, 2014 · · ·

Nothing like a good bit of AppleDash to end a long day. Like and fav since it was funny and hot at the same time.

Yamazaki

Yamazaki #5 · Jul 10th, 2014 · · 1 ·

Really great story that's been sitting in my 'read later' for quite some time. Glad I finally got round to reading it!

Although, in the part

taken aback by the force she thrusted with, a force that was almost painful. The thought of Dash ravaging her likes this was

, 'aback' should be 'back', and 'likes' should be 'like'.

cooopercrisp

cooopercrisp #6 · Jul 11th, 2014 · · ·

4671271 "Taken aback" is correct, but "likes" certainly wasn't, so thank you for pointing that out.

Scaramouche

Scaramouche #7 · Oct 24th, 2014 · · ·

Short but so sweet, loved that it had content and fun ! Great job !

kemkitty

kemkitty #8 · Oct 25th, 2014 · · ·

Haha! that was funny yet had lots of... well... ya know.

Appledash327

Appledash327 #9 · Feb 21st, 2017 · 1 · ·

That was awesome ... Could you possibly do another chapter or a "squeal" where Applejack is doing Rainbow Dash with the strap on? Haven't seen many stories where AJ is doing Dash

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