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cooopercrisp


Author of "Filly Fooling," "Cuddling," and "Spread."

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Oooooyyy. Moar, please.

Oh boy. Sh*t's about to hit the fan... :derpytongue2:
Can't wait to see where this goes. Keep up the good work, mate!

Gah, you totally stole my pony-resorts-to-smutty-photoshoots-to-pay-bills idea! :fluttercry: Still, color me intrigued—I can't wait to see this blow up in Rarity's pretty face.

Good start but judging by how this is going so far, I'm guessing Rarity is gonna start having sex with ponies (stallions and mares) as well as the rest of the Mane 6 for money but Spike is still gonna get shit on by everypony cause he's a 'baby dragon' cause of his body size despite being about 6-7 years younger then Twilight.

Nothing wrong could happen here. :pinkiecrazy:

Heh, looks like Rarity's found herself a new calling. :raritywink:

And look at it this way, Twilight. Least it isn't Fluttershy.

:yay: You've no idea.....

At least the pictures are tasteful. :raritywink:

ANOTHER !!! *smashes cup*

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I kinda agree with this, but I also could see this as Twilight doesn't want anypony else to know that her "brother's" marefriend (implied) has resorted to adult photography. Especially if Spike found out. She would think that he would be devastated.

Personally, I think he would be disappointed, but understanding once he learns straight from the mare's mouth why Rarity had to resort to this.

:raritydespair: I wonder how far Rarity is willing to take this. I'm not sure if I want to know, but I'll read anyway.:raritywink:

Comment posted by M-Tails-P deleted Aug 27th, 2013

3113238 Pretty sure Spike is still being 'friend-zoned' by Rarity. In the prologue Rarity mentions hoping that with this photo shoot that stallions will give her more then a glance. I'm pretty sure after this she'll have stallions and mares coming by to offer her bits to plow her flank.

Lookin' good, Rarity, lookin' real good. I started this expecting sparity, but it doesn't look like that's where we're going. I like to think Twilight's reaction to being kissed is just to foreshadow her sexual orientation.

What I'm hoping more than anything else is that you're going to pull the same brilliant trick that the best author in the fandom does: playing our low expectations of Spike against us by revealing that he's more mature than we give him credit for. That's who he is: a mature young fella who hangs out with grown mares, not some sheltered kid. More likely than not, he has his own hidden stash of Playcolts.

3113441 Which makes Spike the only male companion she has who's interested in her as more than a piece of meat.

Eli?
Yes Sylph?
Am I allowed to say that this is where things start to go horribly wrong?
...you just did.
Ah, so I did.
~Sylpheed and Eli

Please please PLEASE have a small scene where twilight walks in on spike with the magazine!! XD that would be brilliant!!!

3113441..

That may be....:fluttershysad: but it's still just chapter 1 and the prologue. I think for both of our sakes, let's find out a little more about what's going on before we judge.

I think for now we are putting the wagon in front of the earth pony a bit. All we see at first glance is:
-- Rarity's business is floundering (beg pardon, but ponies usually don't wear clothes)
-- None of her friends can provide financial assistance
-- She received a "opportunity" from a previous time with Photo Finish (makes me wonder if Fluttershy has a couple of centerfolds herself :coolphoto:)
-- Once there, and getting started, Rarity realizes that she sort of likes this (and not just because of the bits)
-- Karma: Twilight finds out.

Everything else about the details is speculation. That is our job! :pinkiehappy::raritywink:

I can bet this will be a Rarelight fic; but at one point in this story, let my nigga Spike get in the fashionista!

3113622 Not trying to judge but Rarity liking posing for that magazine really could lead her to do things she'll eventually regret. :applecry::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

What I'm hoping more than anything else is that you're going to pull the same brilliant trick that the best author in the fandom does: playing our low expectations of Spike against us by revealing that he's more mature than we give him credit for. That's who he is: a mature young fella who hangs out with grown mares, not some sheltered kid. More likely than not, he has his own hidden stash of Playcolts.

That's basically been my headcanon from the beginning. Spike can be childish at times (blame slow dragon aging, I guess?), but he's also shown that he's more mature and perceptive than most ponies realize.

BREAKING NEWS: SPIKE FOUND DEAD INSIDE GOLDEN OAKS LIBRARY!

Our Ponyville reporter confirms that after finding the last issue of Playcolt, the young dragon died from lack of blood caused by a massive nosebleed together with a raging boner. This unlucky circumstances led to the departure of Twilight's #1 assistant. The dragon could have survived the nosebleed if all of his remaining blood wasn't concentrated in his crotch. Rumors say that even Big Mac is in ICU.

"At least he died happy" :twilightblush:
"was it a bit too much?" :duck:

as for me, the only thing I can say is MOAR!

Coming soon: Twilight learning a valuable lesson that what a pony does for a job has nothing to do with how they are in real life.

This is going to be good. Hopefully.

Oh boy. Well, you didn't tag it mature and sex for nothing...

~Skeeter The Lurker

Yep. I'ma gonna follow this one.

~Skeeter The Lurker

But... how can they have a porn industry? Ponies don't normally wear clothes!:applejackconfused:

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There's a lot more to porn than nudity. And a lot more to making an image sexual than having the subject be naked.
Which strikes you as more sexual, a pony strutting around naked, or the same pony in panties and socks posing on a bed giving the camera naughty eyes?

Considering the fact that her talent involves finding gems and making a shit ton of money, including the fact that she also has high moral standards, make this seem pretty far fetched. :unsuresweetie:

3114837 I see you bought a new head.

I understand pronouncing "th" as a "z", but that would never be an issue in writing. Unless Photo Finish dictates to her quill like in Harry Potter.

3113964 XD Ten bucks (Ten bits?) says he finds the specific copy Twilight hid. Maybe she forgets about it and reshelving day hits.
:moustache: Huh. what's this? I - *BOING!* ... *THUD, unconscious!*
:facehoof: ...I knew I forgot something...

3115060 There'll always be a market for guys who wanna watch hot girls groping themselves. :rainbowwild:

3115729 You have a point, but there's no way to make it sound like Photo Finish's voice without throwing the alternate spelling in there. I have the same problem with her that I do with Applejack writing a letter. It wasn't an easy decision to make it, to put it dramatically.

Oh my, good thing FiM is a cartoon and they don't have to deal with economic downturns like in the real world (unless the writers decide otherwise). I feel really bad for Rarity here, not to mention Applejack, It's tough for ponies who pride themselves on providing a service, and seeing their life's work being threatened by economic circumstances.

So now, Rarity has decided to take up Photo Finish's offer of letting her pose for Playpony. Well, any port in a storm is suppose. But dang.

I can't help but wonder what Sweetie Belle would think of her big sister going into this sideline. I know she hasn't been mentioned in this story yet, but the most sensitive of the CMC will certainly have a reaction to something like this. Oh well.:raritywink::unsuresweetie:

3116225 Not to spoil too much, but Sweetie Belle will make an appearance in this story. :unsuresweetie:

3116344 Not in her own photoshoot I hope. :raritydespair:

3116363 Well, you'll just have to wait and see about that...

I'm kidding.

3116365 Damn, that was fast. :P

3116368 Almost like I READ YOUR MIND! :pinkiegasp:

Or not. :yay:

3116371 Oh you wouldn't wanna read my mind, it's all kinds of fucked up in there. :pinkiecrazy:

oh boy, Spike is about to find out one way to get "together" with Rarity:pinkiecrazy:

3115729 I don't remember anyone writing like that in Harry Potter. I mean, the author did, but not any characters.

I'd like to see Spike find Playcolt. It would be hilarious.

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I'm not sure it needs to sound like it's in Photo Finish's voice, though. It didn't bother me as much as it probably bothers others, but it was a bit unusual.

I myself had wondered what it would be like if Photo Finish was in the porn industry (I think you should list her as a character here, btw). :coolphoto:

I'll be sure to check this out soon! :scootangel:

3117194 Thrakerzod! this is no place for a young filly! Go play with Captain Hook or something.

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