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TheNomad


"I'm not racist I hate everyone equally" -Probably from someone I don't know, but I heard it from my dad first.

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Celestia, and Twilight are in canterlot one day to catch up. And they come across something they never could have dreamed up of. As well they will learn that monsters don't just happen, There's reasons that their bad.


This fanfic is based on a song I found by 4everfreebrony & DragonwolfRooke. [Link] And if he finds this, I love the song!

Disclaimer - All rights go to Hasbro (Characters) and 4everfreebrony & DragonwolfRooke (Lyrics/Cover art). I own nothing besides my PC and the story itself, but the lyrics belong to 4everfreebrony & DragonwolfRooke and the characters Hasbro.

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Comments ( 34 )

I know, what you did,

Even though o did this first, I'm still gonna give it a thumbs up, it is well written and better than mime anyways.

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Beautiful! Beautiful! Absolutely marvelous!

4321606 Sorry, I didn't know :twilightsheepish:

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it means a lot really, thank you

4322563 nah it's good, I just deleted it anyways. XD

Pure win. PURE WIN.

I notice the absence of any dislikes.

You know how many mustaches this gets? ALL THE MUSTACHE.

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Thank you, really it means a lot to me. :)


and one for you :moustache:

Not bad, not bat at all! It is an interesting way of portraying the song.

...... this is better than i could ever have imagined. The only thing to make it better would be if you added a dialogue between the princesses and discord.... Then again that could ruin it....

10000/10 stars!

4344447 wow that rating...
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But really thank you it means a lot to me, to hear you say (type) that. :)

This is actually pretty damn good. Great idea you have here.

4690464 thank you! it mean a lot. :)

I love this. Brilliantly written and just awesome and beutiful

Someone needs to animate this

Long and short descriptions: they're, not their.

Good story, my only problem is the Doctor was Frankenstein, the monster was called the Creature. Although I guess it had to be done that way, most people don't know that.

But again, a good story...

5783949 Hey I didn't write the song. But I did know that. :/

So we can expect "StarSwirl the Musical" some time in April Im guessing?

Well that would have to be Hard show to cast for...

This was nice. I was listening along to the song as I was reading, and I really felt that the descriptions of the what Discord was conjuring as he sang really fit it.

5797856 Thank you :) I try my best.

Have ALL THE FAVS ALL OF THEMZ

6170353 Thank you very much. But where will we pull all these favorites... I have an idea!

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Get in.

6171122 WE NEED MORE TRUCKS I HAZ 999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999 more faves

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This might be a little late but, didn't they call it Frankenstein's Monster? :rainbowhuh:

I apologise if I'm mistaken. :fluttershyouch:

7644028 actually they he was called the creature.

Argh!!! :flutterrage:

I literally just listened to the song on youtube. I was thinking "Holy S@$t! This would make a GREAT story." I just turned on the computer and would you believe it? Somebody beat me to it. :apple cry: Well the video has been out for a while now so it's no surprise that someone would create a story based on this hauntingly beautiful youtube video. I was going to incorporate the song's lyrics into the story, too. Though the story concept was a little different than yours.

Such a catchy song too. I find myself humming it.

Well done, Nomad!

YOU DID BEAUTIFULLY A+++ YOU DID FANTASTIC AND DID THIS SONG JUSTICE AND JUST YES THANK YOU GOOD JOB.

*clap clap clap clap*
Good job bro

fell in love with this song, typed in its name in fimfiction just to see if there was anything, and was not tisapointed...if i was a beter animator i would so use this as a scrpit to make an animation.

Wow... That was powerful. I would recommend going back through and adding proper punctuation.

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