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Twilight Sparkle begins school in Ponyville. After things don't go as well as expected, she decides there is only one thing to do: get her cutie mark. Maybe she can get some other ponies to help her. After all, some things are more fun with friends, right?
Part of the Shiny-verse (and an attempt to create the Cutie Mark Crusaders).
Also while not a direct sequel, it does reference Boasts and Brag
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I'm liking it so far, keep it up, Hopeful!
It looks like this is taking place while Shining Armor and his "friends" deal with a little dragon problem. Am I right?
I get the feeling filly Trixie is going to be joining forces with the terrible twosome who's names shall not be mentioned.
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Yes. Dragonshy doesn't really seem like a story that would change enough to be worth re-writing with Shining to me, so I decided to use it as part of a background story.
GASP... the Cake twins are aged up!? I wanna see Dinky and Pip next!
Nice chapters. I think I know where this will be going. Twilight is going to have to make some more friends, and then of course tear up half of the town in the process.
4260166 And then, all the headaches.
4260421 Don't forget Damage control.
4260441 Especially if we see that "accidental magic" mentioned in "Crisis of Infinite Twilights".
4260446 Shinning is going to go bankrupt at the end of this story isn't he?
4260487 Well look at all the damage the CMC have caused in the show as we know it. They haven't had to pay a single penny.
4260083 read the past stories
I thought when seeing the tags that Trixie would be the teacher
4263717 Hm, someone needs to make a fic where Trixie is a teacher of magic in the town of Ponyville. And frequently butts heads with Cheerilee and the rest of the teaching staff.
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Never even crossed my mind. When I was considering things, I realized I wanted to keep some sort of rivalry between Twilight and Trixie. Part of the reason it was Sunset in Boasts and Brag is because I wanted Trixie to be Twilight's age and kind of a rival/bully/potential friend.
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Yes. Yes they should. Sounds like it would be fun and funny.
4263878 Like the terrible two-some that shall not be mentioned.
Nice job with the twilight meeting the other CMC's. Now we need for her to develop an overwhelming desire for her cutie mark. Best of luck with that.
4265811 That shouldn't be too hard. Unless, in this universe D.T. and S.S. don't exist.
I was actually hoping that Sunset and Trixie are sisters or friends.
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No and no, although if Shimmer had stayed, Trixie would have asked to be an apprentice.
4276901 Glad that didn't happen, but it looks like the seed of worship has already been sown anyway. And poor Trixie can't see her idol for what she really is. A bully, a completely insane one at that.
God/Celestia Damn, now sh*t's getting real now!
So Diamond Tiara hasn't gotten her cutie mark, yet.
4282804 well there was an episode of the show that did say she recently got it... i think it was the CMC starting one
4284547 Yep, and that is to date the ONLY episode where she's at least somewhat tolerable. In every episode since she's been a nusiance at best and a villan far worse then most of the major ones at worst. Fun fact, what do "Ponyville Confidential" and "Flight to The Finish" have in common? They both make Diamond Tiara cross the "Moral Event Horizon" and then never make her face the consequences of such actions.
I'm gonna be looking forward to the "accidental magic" that puts Diamond Tiara in her place.
4280770 Yeah, poor filly Trixie. Looks like she drew either the Silver Spoon or even the Diamond Tiara straw for this universe.
Nice job with this chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
hahahaha if only Shining knew.
Magic can't solve everything?!
That was great. Diamond Tiara getting a swirlly. Man though that isn't going to end well.
What is the Shiny-verse?
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It's a series of stories where Shining Armor takes the place of Twilight Sparkle, with said character being his little sister, and all the consequences thereof. It's based on the Twiley chapter of Crisis of Infinite Twilights written by defender2222. The Shiny-verse is a name given to it to differentiate it from the main universe, similar to the Luna-verse or Cadance-verse.
It's most likely that Twilight will get her Cutie Mark, if I'm not mustaking...
Good, GOOD, Keep it up, Hopeful!
Finally! DT getting some form of payback in an alternate universe!
In all the fics with DT, she NEVER gets her comeuppance. And yet you did it. Here you go. 
Nice chapters. I like how Trixie and Twilight are starting to be friends. I can't wait for the next chapter. Best of luck.
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D'aww, li'l Trixie's shifting from a total jerk to a tsundere.
The part when Shining said in his head, "Think, Think, THINK..." reminds me of Jimmy Neutron when Jimmy trys to think of a way to solve the Problems that is happening, Good/Perfect Job, Hopeful!
Nice ending to this story. I can't wait for the next part of this series. Best of luck.
That spell's not going to work, I know it.
4292024 Forget the Powerpuff Girls, the CMC in this universe are going to be upgraded to the Power Rangers. And Twilight is likely to be their sixith ranger.
4295930 Diamond Tiara should be lucky. If Twily had really tried hard enough she probably could've flushed Diamond Tiara. Heck, she probably flushed Diamond's tiara.
Atta boy Shining Armor, you tell off Filthy Rich for not stopping his daughter's poor behavior.
4302982 Better late than never. I was worried she'd join forces with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Meanwhile, in a galaxy far far away.
"I sense a disturbance in the force".
4313812 All that was missing was the phrase "Brain Blast!"
Filthy Rich is not really that like that, but some parents you think their children are little angels who can do not wrong. Even though Rich would have punished Diamond, it makes for a better story to have defend Diamond. Get series by the have been reading the stories all day.
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Yes! And butts heads with Twilight over how to teach magic. Something along those lines would be the story Magic Tutor, a Lunaverse fic.