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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof


Just a writer who likes MLP and hopes to make a living off it: https://ko-fi.com/ink_hoof

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This story is a sequel to Friendship is Shining: The Ticket Disaster


The season one finale of the Friendship is Shining series. The day of the Grand Galloping Gala has arrived at last. Shining Armor and his friends are all very excited to be going. Unfortunately things end up not going the way any of them expected. How bad are things going to get, and how much of Canterlot is going to remain when all is said and done?

Meanwhile, back in Ponyville, Twilight Sparkle is sleeping over at the Cakes. How much trouble could two unicorn fillies and a pegasus colt cause at a bakery?

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 57 )

Wow. Go Mrs Cakes reminds me of this.

Sad to see the end of Season 1 already, but I understand. Best of luck with this story and when Discord Returns.

Ah, I was hoping we could see more of Season 1. Still, I like how you're going to work "Look Before You Sleep" in as a secondary plot. :eeyup:

When's Cadence gonna come in?

4324508 I don't know if she'll ever come in in this continuity. "Crisis of Infinite Twilights" seemed to imply that Cadence and Shining Armor wouldn't get together.

So this universe was inspired by "Crisis of Infinite Twilights?" I didn't even realize that when I first came across it...

Mind telling me the chronological order of this universe's season 1 episodes, so I know what order to read them in when I get around to reading it?

4324619 Well, first and foremost is "My Little Pony: Friendship is Shining".

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Friendship is Shining, The Ticket Disaster, Twiley's Return, Griffon Regret, Boasts and Brag, Bridle Rumors, Cutie Mark Rising, and then this one.

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If I manage to keep this up? The season two finale, same as the series. Although not as a romantic interest to Shining Armor (it kind of confuses me that the Shining Armor and Cadence group have several of these stories when there's no Cadence).

4324803 I wonder who's gonna replace Canon! Shining's place in the Shiny-verse...

4324809 Maybe Prince Blueblood? Or maybe Fancy Pants? :applejackunsure:

4325023 I can assure you that I haven't found a universe that has a Blueblood liked by ponies.

4325027 Not yet anyway. Who knows, maybe this one will change that. I mean it probably won't because every fandom needs a character that we love to hate so we can use said character as a punching bag.

Updated already?! That was fast.

If they think petsitting Opal is hard enough, just wait til they try to petsit Angel Bunny. :rainbowlaugh:

Nice chapter. I liked how Shinning's mind went into the gutter.

I was too busy sleeping to even notice this, I'll read it as soon as I can! :twilightsheepish: :twilightsmile:

Twily and Pound Cake sitting in a tree, K.I.S.S.I.N.G! :rainbowkiss:

Awesome. I Loved this chapter.

Loving the story so far, can't wait for more ^_^

:rainbowlaugh: some things will never change

I get the feeling that photo's gonna be kept as an "insurance policy" for future misbehavior. You know, straighten up, or the embarassing photo is sent to the papers.

That was sweet. I liked that chapter.

Wow that is really a sweet chapter nice one :D :pinkiehappy:

So, ShiningDash is happening in this universe? Or is this just a tease? :applejackunsure:

Nice idea with the dancing at the end. This has been a great story.

Ok so... is he hooking up with Dash, Applejack or Fluttershy... or is he going to hook up with all of them... :applejackconfused: I'm so confused... still a good chapter though.

Should have gone with Shining and the princess. But hey, if his friends are available he might as well take them all.

Wait, Rainbow, what? I'm so confussed.

4348908 I know. Is there a name for PoundXTwilight? It's the AU equivalent of SweetieMash. :pinkiecrazy:

Nice chapter. I loved this story. Best of luck with Discord.

4350123 I wonder what he'll do to break Shining Armor, seeing as Shining is quite capeable of thinking his way out of tough situations.

It's so hard to find out which mare has their eyes set on Shining.
As for the Twilight Pound Au pair up. Cuteness levels rising.

4351208 I'll place my bets on Rainbow Dash.

Here's an idea, for the Season 2 make Eris as the villain.

So his crush is Rainbow Dash, well I still would loved to see him with Rarity, Her knight in Shining Armor. But still he still close to all of them.

4351604 Rarity still has her eyes on him she will go down with a fight, but still he has FIVE female friends and no male friends. (I consider Spike more of a little brother.)

4360985 Nah Rarity just had the, oh he was nice and imma go blablablabla after obvious disappointment...for all we know he might end up hooking up with....um....dunno really author continue plz, dun make me use my whip plz.

You heard her Shining Armor:raritywink:

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Can you really blame him? At least he tried to warn Rarity about Blueblood, hopefully she'll realize he's not worth it before it's too late,

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Eeyup. I swear it's an FIM tradiition for the Gala to go wrong. :eeyup:

i really like this story series:raritystarry:can't wait for the sequel of Friendship is Shining series:pinkiehappy:

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