(He/They) Sometimes you just want to hear your favorite story told a little different
Spike, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, Pound and Pumpkin Cake meet a strange zebra filly who lives in the Everfree Forest. After that day they all wake up with strange curses.
This is the a short story based off the same universe as my story Age Swap. You don't have to read it to know what's going on but it would help a lot.
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i should probably read age swap...
and i like that this is a rewrite of another episode!
What shall be the next story of age swap
2690043 I'm not sure yet. I was thinking about doing a blog where you people can vote.
I think you should just do them in episode order, of the real show episodes. Also, I thought it was cute how you made Zecora not sure how to rhyme yet. And voice cracks are a menace to singing
, mustaches for that too 
Loving these stories so far
... read the description, got bored...
now i'm gonna read it.
2691111 I apologize, summarizing isn't my strong suit.
2690823 I thought about doing that but I plan on doing stories that aren't episodes and not doing some episodes at all.
...LOL... WTH little Zecora fails. Spike sucks; so cruel and selfish. HOW CAN POUND CAKE AND PUMPKING CAKE BE OLDER THAT TWILIGHT? LOGIC HAS BEEN DESTROYED AHHUHDUWKAUHFUARBVUKBWFBABEVFAYE!!!! lol
Little filly Zecora is adorable
Will you do more of the Age Swap stories ?
LOL
This was really cute. I saw quite a few errors here and there that could use some fixing. Nothing a good read over could do. Little bit of advice, always wait a day after you've written something before proof reading it. That way your mind will see things that it wouldn't have the day before. If you feel like you gotta keep progressing with your writing that day, move onto a different story or the next chapter.
Something I think that you should have done was possibly make Zecora cry a little. Being pinned by a full grown aggressive Pegasus, these guys used to be militaristic, has got to be a little scary. I did enjoy how you had her struggling with rhymes. What really made me interested though was the lack of a guardian if she's a filly. Then again, she's Zecora and her character is meant to be mysterious. :3
That letter to Luna was hilarious! Loved the story!
Again, you did a great job on this story. Especially the filly version of Zecora who is still trying to figure out how to rhyme. :-D I'll definitely be looking forward to more of your work as soon as time and inspiration will allow.