MINDF*CK

4451542 Exactly!

PLOT TWIST!
Dante is Blade!

4451869

Whelp, this went to your-world-getting-flipped-upside-down-town pretty fast.

Grand Master Jonathan Lorenzo Quicksilver O;! - he bowed smacking his head on a shelf- Ow!!! buck! DX

HOLY MOTHERBUCKING MIND BUCK NICE PLOT TWIST

4453914 It is good that you know of me, my fellow brother. *Places a firm hand on your shoulder.* But there really is no need to bow.

4466170 ..Well it was a gesture of respect sir...

4466381 I think that is quite nice, respecting your Elders. That will build you to become a great pony.

4466921 Sup dood.

4466921 -he rubbed the back of his head and blushed a bit-..

4466926 Hey bro.

4466930 You!!! My arch nemesis!!! - he pointed dramatically-

4466934 I is confuzzled.

4466937 -he pounced- Rawr O:

4466944 *fades to shadow and reappears sitting on a bench*

4466985 -he only face planted-...derp

4466998 It's hard to catch a vamp isn't it?

4466999 You're a vamp?

4467005 Yeah let my guard down in an old house. Bugger got the jump on me, bit me, and ran.

4467007 Ohhhh

4467018 It's a real pain.

4467022 ......batty ;3

4467050 Np I can't become a bat that's a stereotype.

4467053 .........bat pony owx...

4467060 Nope I gotta keep my feathery wings!

4467066 Okie owx

Well, I didn't get an update this had updated TWICE until now... That's nice. This is a really good chapter! I like it!

4480061 Thanks.

4480062 No problem

Read it like I promised Music, however not sure why you don't expand the paragraphs, or add more dialogue. I find if can read an entire fic in less than a half hour, there needs be larger chapters.
Nonetheless I like it, just needs more work, or "UMPH!"

4584974 Opinion noted.

4617156 Thanks.

Dovah. Undead, whatever you go by nowadays. Please do me a favor and continue this story. Please do me a favor and honor Music Within Us.

5237937 Let me finish my stories first then I'll do this one

5238083 alright.