Pen strokes Nyx and Slendermares Crimson Fang work together to over come bully's, supernatural forces, beings from other dimensions, and birthdays.
A collab between me and Slendermare go to her page to read Crimsons POV when it's available.
(The Anthro tag comes into play in chapter 6)
Contains the following ships:
Sweetiebelle x Applebloom
Lowell x Applejack
Gage x Fluttershy
Lightning Storm x Rainbow Dash
Crim x Button Mash
Nyx x Dante Fleetfoot (we just call him Dante though)
Snow Cloud x Dazed Feathers
Crystal Sands x Purple Star
Ian x Derpy
Go here to get to Slendermares page
Chapters (13)
You. Better like those that don't read dovah on a day to day bases
Keep up the good work
nice so far.
4110402 Thanks!
4110403 Thanks!
Pinkamena from "Cupcakes"
4112723 now killed.
For what seems the millionth time.
Once by moi.
Rahahahahaha..... your all so weak and pathetic.This seems much better then the other one i read!Wow, lackey is the perfect word...
4117904 Thank you
4117904 Very funny,
well this story is interesting I wonder were it will lead to
my god
4137629
No, para, there is no god here. Only me.
nope.
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honestly,
this is one big nope for me.
4139014 Why so?
4139153 Medieval, yeaah!
4139014 You, random internet stranger, have no sense of awesome.
4138989 Well, then why do you keep commenting?
Hmmmm, Can't wait till the next Chapter!
Yay!
Can I please have a link to that story?
4148861 It's not out yet
but it will soon.
4148861 I need some time people. It will be out soon though.
Yay! Good job.
4164459 Thankies Slendy!
This is the ghost of the fuchure for nyx...
She gets a might I say awesome brother and thanks to him uses magic again...
Keep up the work!
4165099 The future for her is sad......, but I'm gonna say do not make Crim angry!
I think we all know why.
hell, she made a real hidden blade for nightmare night for f**k sake!
plus she feels no pain (sounds like my when I go berserk....) and is a vampony
that makes some strange sense,
how the hell do you do that so well? making something confusing but sensible at the same time?!
4179187 I defy reason I can make anything random make some sence.
well keep it up!
4179274 I SHALL
and though some talking with gods, I found out that my soul has the capability to be the 2nd most powerful god but it is limited to a mortal body.
4179332 That's fine you've seen how power corrupts.
why else do you think I was going to be the god of balance? light and dark, fire and water. they are my life force in a sence.
4179354
4179354 how about you do sanity and insanity I could use it
DONT LISTEN TO HIM HE HAS NO IDEA WHT HES TALKING ABOUT
4180377 (slowly raises Spellbreaker)
4180385help me
NO DONT LET ME HELP YOU PROMISE YOUR DEATH WILL BE QUICK
shut up help me get rid of this pest
SUCH HARSH WORDS
4180459 (runs Mr. crazy butt through with Dawnbreaker (see avatar) )
4180467 that is what my oc draco has to deal with (as well as nightmare moons spirit) so yeah hope you could use him in a fic so do you think you can use him or no both answers are fine with me
4180497 I was in need of a third antagonist in my gamers in Equestria fic I just might use him. Pm me how he looks acts and his powers weaknesses. Basically everything about him.
4180511 will do. he has dark try fur he is also half dragon so dont forget to say that he has rainbows mane but instead of it being rainbows it is dark red and normal red his cutie mark is a fire with draconic wings on both sides of it his eye are emerald but can go from being normal to dragon if need be. his insane half is drac who has straight up black furr full dragon eyes whitch are ruby mane dark crimson he has claws and his teeth are in a Fraser sharp point he can take control if draco has a fatal wound oh draco can use magic and weakness his friends and family (draco is 229 years old and was evil 200 years ago when celestia turned him into stone)
4180576 got it
4180586 one more thing drac has three rules
1 friends and family cant be hurt
2 pony's he like cant be hurt
3 if a foal is hurt hope he dont find you lr your he dinner
he aalso worked in the bad rainbow factory
great story.
Tonight was the night. It was the Nightmare Night costume party. Nyx, and Crim stood outside the schoolhouse were the party was taking place being a good thirty minutes early so they played on the swings. "You think well win?" asked Nyx.
We'll is we will.
"Why of course the others went out and bought there's we took the time to make ours we have the edge." said Crim pushing her glasses back up her muzzle. They continued to swing until Miss. Cheerilee opened the schoolhouse doors, and Nyx saw a stream of fillies, and colts dressed up in mid evil attire walk into the building. Nyx halted her swing, and her and Crim followed the students to the party.
First, there's should be their's
Mid evil should be medieval
But then Scootaloo asked "What was with your mane, and eyes back when you were kicking Diamond Tiaras flank?" looking directly into Nyx's dragon slitted eyes.
Tiaras should be Tiara's
About a hour later Gage and Fluttershy walked in apparently the fillies and colts parents or in Nyx's case guardians are allowed to come. Gage was dressed up in an horned helm, studded armor, and a sword was in a sheathe on his side. Fluttershy was dressed in a healers robes, and had a small dagger in her side. Were the weapons toys? No. Should they be? Yes.
When Nyx arrived still blushing a little at the punch table the costume contest was just beginning, and Nyx, and Crim were as they knew last on the list to present so they sat and watched. "So were are Sweetiebelle and Applebloom?" asked Scootaloo "I thought you were looking for them didn't you?"
Sweetie Belle, not Sweetiebelle.
"Hey Gage!" said Crim smiling as she broke off from her conversation with Applebloom to greet Nyx's new.....well dad. Nyx didn't know how to feel she'd never had a father she was created by a spell for Celestias sake, but she was determined to make it work no matter how hard!
Celestia's.
"The cube happend." said Gage "Were anthro now kiddo." he said. Nyx knew what anthro ment, and she was about to freak out her, and everypony in Equestria probably were anthropomorphic now......and she caused it.
Were becomes We're.
Ment becomes meant
Love it!
4190282 NOW DO THE FLOP!
4190285 Umm....... What?
4190289 EVERYPONY DO THE FLOP! (Flops onto face)
4190295 Ok! this is very uncomfortable.
4190298 DO THE FLOP (flops onto face again)