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Flint-Lock


Convicted Bibliophile (Buy me a coffee, will 'ya? https://ko-fi.com/flint_lock)

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John Faust is at the end of his rope.
He's hopelessly in debt, an alcoholic, and overall has no hope for the future.

In desperation, he uses a mysterious book to make a deal with an eldritch entity. The being's deal seems fair enough; pay the price, and it'll take him to the land of his dreams.
Unfortunately, there's a catch. A really big catch.

Special thanks to Scootareader for proofreading and editing!

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Comments ( 11 )

This was not terrifying at all 0-0

Hey, wait, I didn't finish proofreading this yet! :twilightoops:

I should get a better work ethic so my authors don't get fed up with waiting for me. :ajsmug:

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It's all good! You waited long enough. Hopefully I'll be able to look it over tonight, heheh. :pinkiesmile:

wow...... just wow..... I did not expect this......, Bravo good sir! You made a successful short story! Bravo I say!

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What didn't you expect?

4140743 The fact that a demonic doll thing killed all of equestria!

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

Em dash here...
You need another paragraph space here. Also remove that period and the space after it.

Heh.

hey, just thought id say that this is beautifully written, and that you deserve so much more recognition! if you havent already, definitely submit this to equestria daily like starlight nova suggested

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