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I can't remember how long it's been since my plane went down. I've been surviving in this strange forest with nothing but Cat and my memories for company, but one day I meet someone who changes my life forever.

Well, "meet" isn't exactly the right word...






Characters will be added as they appear.
I know HiE stories are kind of old hat, but give this one a chance.
Contains elements from LOST, Hatchet, and My Little Pony (who would have guessed?!?) This may seem like something you've read before, but I assure you it's purely coincidental.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 57 )

This story . . .:trixieshiftleft:
I Like It! :twilightsmile:
Bring me Moare!! :pinkiehappy:
Seriously though, this is really interesting
Please Continue!

703210

Thanks, I'll surely write more, but the next chapters definitely won't be as close together as the first three.

I'm amazed how many favourites this has gotten in only a few hours!

I'm digging this so far. Will read next 2 chapters tomorrow. :pinkiehappy:

You bitch. No one hurts Fluttershy, even on accident, and gets away with it.

703412 Really? You should read "Hands" and "Through the Eyes of Another Pony," they're both really good

You sir have done what hundreds of other HiE fics have never done (aside from 5 really good ones) This is a once in a lifetime HiE! I have searched far and wide for good HiEs and yours has now made it to my collection! (Seriously these stories are hard to find) but i digress, please do continue with this, you have my blessing! (Or a favorite and thumbs up works too. :twilightblush:

I honestly never expected a reception like this. I'm seriously going to keep writing these! :derpytongue2:
Thanks!

703721 CHRIST IN A HAND BASKET.
update it soon please.



AWEEEEEEEESOME

okay, that was awesome. Moar pls.

Have a macintosh. :eeyup:

I like it, i acutally was thinking about a story that's a bit like this one for a few days. Survival in the Everfree f*ck yeah.

One of the best HiE fics i've seen in some time.

This was an instalike. Now go write MOAR:flutterrage:

Ill be surprised if this doesnt get on EqD.

713688 Yeah, how exactly does that work? Do they find it themselves, or does somepony send it to them, or what? :rainbowhuh:

I'm surprised this doesn't have more views and thumbs up.

Now keep writing. *cracks whip*

713697 It accually works like that or you send it

713769 Yes, sir, right away, sir. :fluttershyouch:

It's pretty good, but I think the story has to progress more for it to be EQD material.

714144 Excuse me? Have you seen some of the crap they have in their archives? :unsuresweetie:

714204
If you go to EqD there is a tab that says submit on the top right.

YOU SHOT FLUTTERSHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:

however do keep up the great work:fluttersmile:

714204

Actually, no, I haven't.
And I'm just saying there's too little pony in it so far to be able to be submitted, in my opinion.

why has it been cancelled? :fluttercry:


-lavawing:eeyup:

757428 I just can't write it anymore. I don't have the time, and I can't think of where to go from here.

763065
ok thanks for letting me know

763065 That's easy, Fluttershy takes them out of the forest to her cottage. Introduces them to her friends, etc. A bit cliche, sure, but there's not much of a way around that. The stuff that transpires will be interesting enough. Ima send you a pm with some suggestions.

Now get writing... *cracks whip*

w00t. I still don't get the sneezing thing.

rainbow dash what are you doing:facehoof:

992508
YouTube + Tobuscus = Enlightenment :pinkiehappy:

"I taste blood and notice my face is covered in the stuff."
*One paragraph later*
"My lower lip is swollen and I have a black eye, but my face is completely clean."

Hooray for continuity! Yeah, just saying, you might want to sort that out.

1006565 Keep reading, it sorts itself out.

Finally, i am very happy to see that this fic continues.

Eh... It's okay, but you could definitely draw this out much longer than what you're currently doing.
Use more description, maybe some other points of view, that sort of thing?
It's just far too short and the key points just pass by too quickly for my tastes.

WooHoo! New Chapter
Also, I think the Pony-ese is some sort of Romance language? :rainbowhuh:
I d'know but it sounds kinda cool :pinkiehappy:

I just love this chapter, and if you have any doubts about that then i will smother those with a pillow.
And about the pony-ese i'm taking a shot at Latin.

1224081 Good. :ajsmug:
Now, translate it. :ajbemused:

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