• Published 13th Feb 2014
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Spike's six Darkness - Sand Storm



Spike buys a comic book and finds it fun even though there's blood and gore. Twilight sees him reading it and doesn't approve of him reading it. The book is called 'The Darkness'. how will is not go wrong. Right?

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Great work keep it up

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How dark will this story be? I haven't read the story yet, but all those tags make it seem like this story is going to be way to needlessly dark and edgy. I love a good dark fic, but even I have my limits. Still, I don't see a tragedy tag.

9120572
i can send you the link to the zalgos translator if you want?

Hope for more.

Comment posted by DarkAngel864 deleted Oct 9th, 2018

Great the main six is turning into opposite of harmony

Interesting story now show me more.

when wiil u update this

When's the next chapter coming up

9492793
Trying to fix the image error by rewriting what the darkness has said.

9493315
Oh well that's annoying

"What?" Dash said confused. Machines started to make noise inside the Factory.

Text isn't loading in

9512158
yeah trying to fix that

9512513
K good luck with it, it's a bitch to fix

Can I expect a chapter in the next week or 2

Before I read this I saw the description and I'm left wondering.

Did the six merge with him or something?

9682900
more of a merging

9706643
while you are at it, could I ask when the next chapter is?

9706643
:applejackconfused: is there a hiatus?

Good job with the dialogue btw. :pinkiehappy:

9750530
No, just having some issue in life but I am writing again now.

Looking forward to it.

9751144
Last chapter was in 2018 your last comment was in 2019 it is now 2020 and still nothing. I’m not trying to rush you in to posting god knows how shite that chapter would be but it’s been two years this has to be a great chapter to be waiting this long.

10078084
Sorry about that, I had to deal with some depression for a long time. I am getting back into writing again, I just need to get together and putting together some other stories that's not on the site.

10078220
Ah well power to ya good sir.

Take your time, real life first.

Why does something written by a twelve year old have 230 upvotes

Remake?

Make more of this story of spike six darkness

You ever coming back to this story, loved the games it was based on, would love to see more.

It’s really good story I would love to see more I hope it’s not canceled I hope you come back to some more

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