Spike buys a comic book and finds it fun even though there's blood and gore. Twilight sees him reading it and doesn't approve of him reading it. The book is called 'The Darkness'. how will is not go wrong. Right?
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needs some work not your best work
IT LIVES(THANK GOD )
4299707 I'll fix it when I got the time.
Some how before we get to the end I can tell the Darkness is lieing to him.
Next chapter please I love this story please continue.
4468529 Well sorry, I can't really tell if I made a grammar error or a few spelling, Some reason I write what my mind says but my hands write down something else. But I'll try to do better next and find a good poofreader.
4468722 a good tip i learned in school is to read what you write out loud, because in your head mistakes have to be pointed out specifically, and reading out loud brings attention to your mistakes when it doesn't sound like the mistake makes sense
4507852 Thanks!
They watch him get naked
I find it interesting that Spike and the Six aren't more freaked out about having committed grusome bloody murder.
As stated by others, like the idea, but you need to keep your grammar and spelling in check.
4510773 When think about it they have in a way kill a few creatures and maybe a race. When you watch season one to four you will see that the kill creatures that don't bleed so for kids seeing blood in a show when the hero beats an enemy they'll bleed showing death but MLP don't show blood show it looks like they just knock out.
Decided to re-read this story since it's been awhile. Great story so far. Can't wait for more
Dude can you Please, continue this? It is one of the only, and better, Darkness fics I have seen on this website.
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well I'm hoping on finishing a chapter sometime today. Sorry for the long wait, had some family issues and stuff.
While I do like the concept of the story...It reads as if it went through about fifty trips through google translate...
well if it aint obvious he s planning a get together with the element of kindness i mean they are friends
Blueblood however im gussing is still his usual ungodly self probaB;y the leader of those thugs who tried to knock off spike if they had succeeded then they would go for the mane 6 why because he could just fiegn ingorence and say what really i am not worried at all i mean really why does every dark story write that blueblood has to die in a horrible way imean really goodgod i know he was a dick in that one episode of the show buut comeon attempt to at least have him die in an orginal way
Spike and the six seem oddly content that they just commited multiple murder...
You would think at least shy would be torn up about it.