Spike buys a comic book and finds it fun even though there's blood and gore. Twilight sees him reading it and doesn't approve of him reading it. The book is called 'The Darkness'. how will is not go wrong. Right?
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A very nice Chapter, I don't see anything wrong with it.
3967089 I saw quite a few grammar and spelling errors, actually... like
but that being said, This story has a lot of potential and I'd like to see where it goes
Welp,Six fully sentient serpents sprouting from Spike's back.....Not even aiming for alliteration here,But still,Seven people in the one body makes for one hella dangerous team,I mean,One of the biggest reasons is the fact that pinkie and i think it was dash just showed the best combo possible,Instakill one mook,Grab his gun and then start going to town,Its the only way you can be a gun toting badass,And not need a concealed carry license
Please make more I really enjoy this. If I could give more thumbs up I would.
Epic man, fcking EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is turning out to be a good story so far keep up the good work.
This is pretty cool. I can tell already that I will thoroughly enjoy this story. All, or at least most, of the girls seem to be very affectionate towards Spike. Is this notice towards a relationship, even if only in their minds, with all of the girls or just some? And what is the possibility of the Princesses and Shining Armor becoming Darklings? The Darklings are more of indirect help instead of the Dark Serpents, much like the Princesses and Shining. I really think that this project has potential and I would love to see the end of the story.
have u read the comic The darkness if so pleas tell me you will use some of the material in it.
Looks good but I can see quite a few grammer errors, you might need an editor. Either then that, keep going.
4079749 Yes!!!
im hopping they will give him a thumbs for actually taking a bite out of crime but i can't help but doubt it
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GODS!!!! *sloshing a goblet full of blood around while dancing on table top with a lampshade on his head*