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Sand Storm


I am a big Spike fan, so most of my fanfics will have Spike and/or CMC as the main hero's. If you have come here for some logic than this is the wrong place...maybe

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Spike wonders the Everfree forest and finds a Spaceship and enters it, he wonders for abit than see some strange gear on a canter. Spike try them on but they don't work till he was attack by a monster known as the Krawl. Spike will have to keep this to himself or he'll in danger his friends. His and many other worlds will be needing he's help but have long will it take for him to face his Krawl self.
This will centain some sexual events but they don't happen alot just at times when i feel like its need.
Ps the Spcetrobes would be able to talk but only to Spcetrobes master.

This takes pace after the third game.
All pics use in this fanfic belong to their rightful owner.
Some episodes will go different in this like
The wedding would go different
The crystal empire
Dragonshy
And many others.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 23 )

Everything looks okay all things considering. I would suggest joining writer groups to help write your stories.

You have caught my interest with this, I would like to see where you take this story. :trixieshiftright:

3561775 Thanks. If you feel like helping with this than that would by nice.

I like how you gave each of grildas head's a different personality:ajsmug:

Not bad all things considered and I see you took some of my suggestions. I wonder how the others reaction is going to be like when they see the Adult or Evolved Spectrobes.:trollestia:

3580508 will I read the wiki for it and it said: the right head looks intent, the center head appears tired, and the left head appears to be surprised but what I put it as what the seen to be but the center head I can agree with it seen tired.

3580882 just wait till you see the react to an Ultimate.

I'm considering doing my own Spectrobe story.
(Drops the freshly pony-shaped High Krawl on Equestria)
What? Even planet-destroying monstrosities deserve a second chance.

Scootaloo:
Shako. The sword thing. It seems like it would fit.

3673007 That is great!:pinkiehappy: One thing you should do is not have all of the mane six be Spcetrobe master,is not like kingdom hearts. the way i see it Twilight, Rarity and Fluttershy are like Jeena and Spike, Dash and Applejack are Spcetrobe masters. Pinkie I don't know. but this is what I think would work but is your story was go with what you do. If they all are going to be masters than give them the Prizmod in different chapters. here's a pic of the high krawl as ponies fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/365/d/4/pony_krawl_by_dracokrawl-d51jmt6.png

I can't wait to see their faces when they learn Spike's secret.:pinkiehappy:

hmm, well that was a "interestin" gem hunt that spike n' co. had earlier :pinkiesmile: before he passed out all of a sudden :facehoof:. anyways can't wait to see what happens next :raritywink:

Well this should be interesting and it seem that Star Swirls already knew a thing or two about Spectrobes.

maja is best high krawl, and seems to me like a shoo-in for possible redemption if any of the 4 got it.
Jado-Cowardly, sadistic, hated
Gelberus- too violent
Gronos- do I even need to say?
Maja- Cool, calculating, but smart enough to (maybe) have a change of heart after a near-death (or actual-death) experience.
If anyone wants to help me write a story with the high krawl in equestrian(I have ideas, but am not the best at putting a story together), please PM me.

plz continue quickly

Yes please continue!

6767142 I'm writing the next part as we speak.

Thank you!!! How is the story coming? Good I hope.

hey whens the next chapter it has been 28 weeks.

And then the dark star mineral gave them a bad day.

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