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When five out of the Mane Six are having a hard time planning Pinkie's birthday party, Cheese Sandwich's Cheesy Sense leads him to Ponyville to plan the bash. But do these friendly ponies want to be more than friends?

Hilarity ensues.

Chapters (4)
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Aw, don't they make such a cute couple? :pinkiehappy: :heart:

PLEAAASE CONTINUUUE SOOOON!!!

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Pinkie Promise!:pinkiehappy:

Cross my heart:heart: and hope to fly:rainbowdetermined2:
Stick a cupcake in my eye!:pinkiesmile:

I'm so happy you liked it!

Update please !!!!!!! #Pinkie+CheesyForever#

I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter

This is a cute little fic you have going. Go on. :pinkiehappy::heart:

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How could i not!? ^_^

YAY!! :pinkiehappy:

more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Thank you all so much!!:pinkiehappy: I'll try to get the next chapter out soon!:twilightsmile:

can't wait for it to be complete MORE PLEASE

I can't wait for more, love it!! As soon as I watched this episode, I knew that they would be the cutest couple, even better than Pokey Pie!!:heart::heart::heart:

Hm, maybe I do have a crush on Cheese! He makes me… well… really happy!!!

I believe you forgot to italicize that bit, otherwise not bad. First Cheese Sandwich fic I thought worth reading.

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Awesomesauce! :pinkiehappy: Thanks for the help! I'm terrible at proofreading myself:twilightblush:

AND LET THE FAN FICS CONTINUE!

This looks like a great story. I can't wait till the next chapter, and when Pinkie and Cheese tell each other they have a crush on one another.

Look!! THERE'S AN AWESOME PERSON WHO IS DOWNVOTING ALL OF THE COMMENTS SUPPORTING THE SHIP!! GO CHEESE PIE

He defiantly was certain he had a crush on the pink party pony.

Should be "definitely."
That was the only glaring error for me. Anyway, good start! I'm not really sure if I ship these two yet, but I like the story so far!

I'm liking it so far. I personally ship Discopie but I will support this ship just to get rid of Pokeypie which I just honestly do not understand.

Get an Editor, and this story will be much better.

Not bad.

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d-e-f-i-n-i-t-e-l-y.com
hehe

This is going to be a super cute story!! :pinkiesmile:

Omg so cute, more plz! :pinkiesmile:

If you're looking for a consistent editor, I'm good at finding little errors that others may miss. If you'd like my help, just hit me up with a PM!


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The fanfic shall continue you wonderful people!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

There was a collective gasp as the Mane Six looked at the pony in the shawl and stetson.

Is Pinkie Pie planning her own party? Anyways I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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Wonderful!

Get the editor.

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Oh it's fine! I'm just glad you found it! You did not offend me in any way, Pinkie Promise!:pinkiehappy:

I can't wait for this to continue.

Awwwww.....I love this! I can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

Yes! MUST. HAVE. MOAR!

MORE! OH SWEET CELESTIA MORE! :heart:


YOU NEED TO SPEND YOUR EVERY LIVING BREATHING SECOND WRITING THIS!


if you don't........:pinkiecrazy:


just kidding, take all the time you need (although spending your every living breathing second would be nice)


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Lol, I'm pleased to tell you I'm working on the second chapter write now!

Ever since I watched pinkie pride, I always thought that Cheese Sandwich should've stayed in Ponyville. Also, if he had, CheesyPie should've become canon. New fav shipping: CheesyPie! :twilightsmile::heart::heart:

Comment posted by ComboKick deleted Feb 4th, 2014

Oh yeah! This gonna be gouda!

I am favoriting this. Now. I need you to write more.:pinkiehappy:
This...this is amazing. Excellent work! That is all. :derpytongue2::rainbowkiss:
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CheesyPIe will now and forever be the uncontested shipping couple! :pinkiecrazy:

Ever since the episode, I've been trying to find as many of these fics as possible (with more...cloppy results than I expected :pinkiesick:), but it'll be nice to see more of a romantic comedy version of their pairing. Can't wait to see how this story goes! :twilightsmile:

You have my curiosity.

Looking forward to the next couple chapters :pinkiehappy:

This is Epic! (insert goofy pun smile) I cannot wait to read more of this, please continue. /)
:yay::heart:

"He defiantly was certain he had a crush on the pink party pony."

I'm pretty sure you want "definitely" here, not "defiantly".

Excellent work. Hurry up with the next chapter, please!:pinkiesad2:

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Thanks! I remember somebody told me about that before and I forgot about it:derpytongue2:
Don't worry, the second (technically first) chapter has been edited and ready to publish!

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3900249 You're doing great for your first fic. See about getting a good editor, there's a thread on the boards here dedicated to just that. A good editor is worth their weight in gold.:twilightsmile:

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Thanks! But this isn't my first fic:derpytongue2: Sorry if I mislead you

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