if you think you can write a sequel to this, then do it mate! don't be too anxious to do so.
very good read overall.
it did seemed rushed at some parts.
there were a few other errors that are possibly pointed out earlier.

Rating: 8/10
Prize: Pz. V "Panther"
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I would really like to see a sequel to this! It's very cute, heartwarming and sexy all at the sametime! Maybe for the sequel Spike and the Mane-iac will take their relationship to the next level onto marriage or something of that ilk. It's your story, you call the shots!

I think a sequel is in order. Personally I wonder how the power ponies would react to the fact Maneiac has a coltfriend and meeting the Mane 6? I know the 2nd annual of the MLP comic has the actual power ponies in it and on the cover so we know what they look like now which is useful for describing them now.

I agree with GIGA-XISBASS idea

YESH SEQUEL But please don't change Spike a lot if you do make a sequel

NEEDS SEQUEL (please)

Chanting "Sequel!"

YES PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!

SEQUAL PLZ!

Yes please!!!

Sequale yes

more please

I vote for you to make a sequel.

4595164 I know what your going to say: You don't want to see Spike get anally raped, I understand, and I'm sorry, It just came to my head. Please don't judge me

i vote sequel

Sequal plz

Make a sequel or we may have a problem here

Go for it...

I know I said this and again I will
yes sequel

Sequel please.

sequal please do it do it naow

5318601 no, this is a grammar dalek:
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http://hijinksensue.com/comic/dont-be-that-guy/
basicall, it will correct your grammar mistakes then kill every living tying on your planet
grammar potato <grammar guy/girl <grammar king < grammar nazi< grammar mega-nazi< grammar dalek

5699239 Listen monsieur, if you don't like this story, why are you even here? Don't read it if you hate it.

6581778 Yeah, it's a balancing act.

I really tried to enjoy this, but I can't get past your way of telling this story. All this "she said" "he said".
Got only to the beginning of the fourth chapter and couldn't continue.

7851899 I put her there because Spike was staying with her for a while