What happens when Spike gets betrayed by Rarity by turning him down for another stallion? With a mending heart and lost memories he sets out to seek revenge on the mare that broke his heart and to torment to any pony that gets in his and Nightmare's way! Beware of Spike the Dragon!
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At the first mention of Canterlot Rarity acts like a little kid in a candy store and is willing to give up a special evening with a supposedly close friend in Spike.
That is just low. 
Bro, what happened to the original story?
~Gold
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I and other readers felt like it needed a clearer and less confusing plot.
Do you not like it?
Love triangle, anyone?? Spike doesn't like Rarity, RArity realizes that she still has some feelings for Spike, but now unknown pegasus Summer Blossom have come in.
And on top of that, why is there a tragedy tag?? I don't personally like it when somepony has to make the ultimate sacrifice, regardless of whether it's a main character or an OC
Uh... oh.. Rarity is going to have an angry big sister to deal with when she gets to Canterlot, if she discovers that Spike is there.
3398841 I know right? You blew him off don't want him too hate you but you go on that date ANYWAY???
But first I need to get ready for my date tonigh
bitch
3395851 i think hes gonna try/hopefully will killl rarity for tragedy tag
HAHAHA WOW it took me a couple of years to grow a pair and ask you. Man that is harsh.
kinda rushed just a smige
dude uncalled for there is a diffrce to set up a fluttershy death and a out of no where death man. I mean really uncalled for and just random. My advice read Nighmare of a Dragon
Um ok I understand the part where Spike is touting Futtershy, But why kill her? Was there a reason? Is there a reason? Cause I seen none.
That was the point i havent stated a reason yet.......
3594478 Oc for Spike part then.
Woo hoo nightmare moon x spike. Also Rarity: DIE BITCH DIE!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
WOW!Fluttershy was Spike's first victim.
Love it dude keep going
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=yDpVT0fAypg I think this song will fit this story perfectly
Just a peek? Seems a bit short. But. Who is Spike targeting first?
I am very disappointed.
4650104 oh im not done yet muahah it was just a sneak peek of whats next
4650987 Oh
i hate spike now oh why fluttershy she was so kind i know should't read to much into this but its fic like this really breaks your heart
i like this fic at first but now i think i'm going to leave goodbye sir may this fic be good to all others
I am liking this story so far and the funny thing is your name is really funny when I saw it I laughed you get a favorite dust for being this cool
oh hell yeah spike is so bad ass he could kill a god is he so desired
i don't remember when you last updated this so i'm just gonna say thank lun-er nightmare moon your not dead
Fluttershy being victimized? 'Get me a sniper in here we're looking for a purple and green dragon shoot on sight' You do NOT mess with Fluttershy!
Wow. Intense. I guess with this, the elements of harmony are null and void. Good luck with the next chapter. I was happy to see this story updated. Great twist with Fluttershy getting Killed and Discord Siding with Spike. Have a good time writing the next chapter.
DISCORD turned a bit to easily.
dj bacon *slowly claps* yeah
Nothing says like kick to the nuts by still going on the date that broke him even though she wants his forgiveness.
Das ist goodt
Okay your story is just broken. Discord willingly going along with the destruction of Equestria even though he promised to never betray again. and he wasn't even angry that Spike had just killed Fluttershy for no reason.
Btw where did Nightmare Moon come from anyways?? Didn't Luna conquer that part of her? Wouldn't someone notice if she was showing signs of reverting to NM and inform Celestia about it????
Also Spike going on a murderous Rampage and killing innocent ponies, creatures, his own friends (granted he did regret killing Fluttershy but he also got over it quickly) blowing up Canterlot and enjoying it.
all because Rarity broke his heart??
He is NOT that petty. Downvote.