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so mane-iach is slenderman?
This reminds me of Slendermare. I don't suppose that after you're done with this story we could do a collab with Mane-iac and Slendermare teaming up and fucking Spike?
Is this a flutter-pike combo?
And que slender references!
If the Mane-iac is Slender man...then can you explain this...th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/145/8/6/slendermane___commission_by_spittfireart-d5113at.png
...and thispinkie.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/138766557760.png
3877454 *bonner * mhhhh damit dude you just had to but that thought in my head
This is really good. But I'm just wondering is this also somewhat a fluttershy x Spike Story? just wondering.
3877930 It isn't the first time one of my ideas give you or someone a boner and you know it.
3878048 ture but this time you did it with out a story
You need to work on your story telling. It's very wordy and difficult to slog through. Literally all that happened in the first chapter was Spike saw her on his way to see Fluttershy. All of that little stuff in her house was completely unnecessary. You can't write a whole chapter of filler text. I'm not trying to be rude or mean and I'm sorry if I did anything to upset you, but I thought I'd offer some proper feedback.
3880685 Agreed. This looks promise, but rough around the edges.
Also, complete nitpicking on my part, but only Rarity calls ponyville's favorite dragon, "Spikie-Wikie"...
Okay, I immediately started being suspicious of Fluttershy being in love with Spike the moment she started calling him Spiky-Wikey. Looks like the Mane-iac isn't the only thing after Spike's heart.
i like how this is going, however-and i say this nicely- please get an editor. Way too many mistakes that disrupted the flow of reading. I'm one that can skim over the errors but most people cant or wont so if you want more readers, you really need to look over this again. I would understand if there were only a few errors, but they were everywhere from missing punctuation, to incorrect grammar placement.
Even with the mistakes tho, this story is definitely interesting and i will keep reading. It has the premise of containing one of my favorite ships too! I have to read it!
Possible FluttershyXSpike Shipping?
I Dunno but I'm willin' and able to find out! Let's shoot this motherfucker, ay?
...Typos though, I can get past 'em but they annoy me
I bucking LOVE LOZ:TP The ending was just so sad. They must make a new game where Midna returns. Anyway the rest of the story was great too.
4578122 twilight princess was the first Zelda game I played
4303978 here, here. but besides the shortness of the chapter. it is always good to be straight to the point
I don't see why Spike is worried about hot chocolate, he had lava in his mouth without getting injured at all. Why would a bit of hot chocolate burn him?
hey bro ham man. so grammer....
"Spike then tjought about how he was going to tell Twilight,"
thought. this part is after the Nintendo song if your wondering.
A fun little start, noticed a few errors.
this is getting interesting
4578122
Man I have played majora's mask and ocarina of time but only twilight princess gave me the happiest and saddest moments in my life I LOVE twilight princess and think it is one of the last greatest Zelda games.
8992803 I feel the same way as you.