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Dawn Flower


Have you ever heard about the theory about how subatomic particles can pop into existence at random? Well, replace subatomic particles with updates and you have my writing style in a nutshell.

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Rainbow Dash, Rarity and Fluttershy travel to the frozen north of Equestria and there, they encounter King Sombra. Armed with new abilities, they proceed to do battle with him. However, even with their new powers, they still have trouble with engaging him directly, with the kind of power he possesses. Rainbow Dash, being the Element of Loyalty, fights stronger than all the others and goes all out to protect her friends. However, even this is not enough to defeat King Sombra, and he eventually pins Rainbow Dash down and kills her. All seems lost, but then suddenly, Rainbow Dash stands up once more.

Note: This is actually a part of another fic that I was writing, but I have since scrapped it. This scene is what inspired me to write it in the first place. I like this part so much that I decided to make it a small, independent story. Enjoy.

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what anime was this crossovered with? and why was this so epic?

This...I can't even describe this with words...holy mother of the gods...

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Bleach. This is a ponification of the battle between Hollow Ichigo vs Ulquiorra. The dialogue was originally closer to the original, but I had to change it because it was too close too it and considered plagurism. Glad to you still like it.

3817454 i've seen the abridged series and fanfiction of it but not the actual thing

The cover art it....speaks to me :pinkiecrazy: it whispers dark secrets into my mind

I'm not gonna lie I kinda just skimped through this really quickly, because I've seen the fight between Ichigo and Ulquiorra so many times. Still very good narration however.

This kinda reminded me of Goku going super saiyan and beating the shit out of Frieza.

Hmm... I like it. I don't like Super Rainbow Dash (Blocked on dA), but I like this. Reminds me of the final duel between Setsuna F. Seiei (GN-0000+GNR-010/XN 00 XN Raiser) and Ribbons Allmark (CB-0000G/C Reborns Gundam) in Gundam 00 season 2.

Damn that was badass.

is she super saiyan god :derpyderp2:

:rainbowdetermined2: Hmmm....This calls for an awesome theme song!

Wait. So, Sombra killed Rainbow Dash right? (The answer to this, is, of course, right). If that is the case (and it is), then why exactly did Rainbow Dash feel bad about hurting Sombra as badly as she did? Now that I've got my personal question out of the way, this was a very well written fan fiction. If you decide to answer my question, please remember to do so in a manner that allows for the question to be answered with respect for the question that is being asked and respect for the person asking the question, unlike this example:

Okay, you brought up a lot of valid points, so I think you deserve a reply. And in all honesty, yes: Luna could've been able to help Spike at this time. However, the reason that I didn't do that was because I wasn't thinking about adding Luna; I just wanted to write a heart-to-heart story between Twilight and Spike, and setting it after the Wedding seemed like the best choice. I wanted to write a story based on emotion and character development between the two characters, and the inclusion of Luna wouldn't have fit with the tone. Besides:

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This lovely little response to a rather intelligent comment about a story which I had said was well written, was brought to you by the user TheVClaw. And no one likes a TheVClaw response. And why don't they? Because at first it seems to be just fine! Then you look at the picture. And you feel a crushing weight on you and you start to want to cry. Because all you wanted was to engage in a intelligent conversation with someone, and NO, that someone had to go and post that as a reply. Is it so wrong to want to engage someone in an intelligent conversation? So, anyways, please try to keep your response to my question to a level of maturity that is about 20% more mature than TheVClaw's level of maturity (and 20% more mature than my comment here, as I shouldn't just assume that your response to my question is going to be an immature response.) Thank you.

This was amazing I like how it resembles Ichigo's final battle with Ulquiorra.

OH my God! So epic!:rainbowdetermined2:

ok, first you need that :

and now we need an animated version of this fic. like, we need it really bad!:pinkiecrazy:

it looks like would be possible sequal to explain this

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