A "new" stallion arrives in Ponyville and is trying to stay out of sight. Too bad he runs directly into Pinkie Pie. Why is he running? Who is he hiding from? Can he possibly remain unseen while caught in the wake of hurricane Pinkie? More importantly, is running away the true answer to his problems? A story of learning from your mistakes, being willing to put your past blunders behind you, and never forgetting those who support you through thick and thin.
This story has not been fully edited yet, i apologize for anything sloppy.
Chapters (1)
I'll put this on my read later list because I am lazy but interested
Yes, you're allowed to hate me for this
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Already more comments than I got on my last story so I love you regardless
3758400 That's what I hate about the system. You're a really good writer (I've read Head In The Clouds) and yet, one of your stories only got 6 likes, compared to crappy stories that somehow get all the attention! I pity your situation. THAT'S IT!
I am going over to my profile right now and promoting you!
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Thank you I appreciate it
I don't really advertise at all, I just don't really believe in self promotion
By all means though, go ahead. I was a bit depressed when my rarity story barely had any turnout, especially after the reception of head in the clouds, hopefully my newest short draws more attention
3758462 Definitely going to actually read these at some point
Speaking of romance how's Twilight Sparkle's love life?
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Unfortunately the story i plan on writing that includes twilight is not gonna be about her love life, as was the story i did for Rarity. I have nothing against the two unicorns but i'm afraid to admit, out of the mane six, i find i have the most trouble writing for Twilight and Rarity's personalities.
3787926 Here's one or two:
First Rarity needs to come to terms about Spike and his open-but-not-open secret feelings to either make this relationship work, let him down gently hoping their friendship would never break apart, or set Spike up with somepony else.(I know just the mare.)
For Twilight Sparkle, the only stallion who actually like or like-like Twilight is Flash Sentry so either this will work or she could 'play on the other team' and started to like mares in a way.
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Its not so much i can't come up with idea's. It's more i feel less confident writing with them as major characters. Brash (
), Shy (
), Hard Working (
), and silly (
) are personalities i've worked a lot with in writing in the past.
I've had little experience with glamour queen (
), plus i'm a guy and have little knowledge of fashion and cosmetics.
While i find super nerdy (
) a little easier, I've used it very little in the past. Writing her part in my Rarity story took lots of thinking and rewrites before i was satisfied with the way i tried to make her sound over intelligent.
Anyway, it's really just two character types i'm not used to working with compared to the others. Not so much a matter of not having ideas
That was a funny story. I loved how you had Pinkie hijack the story.
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Thank you
Wouldn't be pinkie if we didn't get some reality bending shenanigans
That was a great story!
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Thank you
Pinkie makes it look like macgyver follows the rules of physics.
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first rule about Pinkie Pie: you dont question Pinkie Pie.
second rule about Pinkie Pie: You don't question Pinkie Pie.
Wrong kind of night.
Capital P
Heh... BreaPie romance... bet you're kicking yourself after Apples To The Core, right?
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LOL yeah the episode aired RIGHT after i submitted it. Hence why i found it fitting that it was both just very slight and having pinkie pie berate me for it at the end.
Yay! This was posted on my birthday
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haha i guess i have good timing
4270799 Huehuehue XD
Good idea of adding Pinkie in to the story as an actual writer at one point and even just going up and breaking the 4th wall at will. Discord was a nice touch as well. Probably better then hard pressed to impress. ONWARD TO RESPONSIBILITY!!!!
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What's Pinkie without some good old 4th wall shenanigans
Thanks for reading all my stuff
my pleasure bro. I've enjoyed everything you've written so far. Just go to chapter 2 in responsibility and as for the question Thunder asked himself, I would be more scared of big mac than I would of AppleJack. Like Theodore Roosevelt always said "Speak softly and carry a big stick."
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That is actually one of my favorite quotes from history
You know this is a pinky pie story when she brakes the 4th wall with the narrator.
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it was a lot more fun to do than i had anticipated
I find pinkie is very interesting to write for because she's a character that has NO rules. You can literally have anything happen.
4286706 Sh'e been doing this to me ever since I started writing The Pony King. It's like I-
Hello again Darth!
AHHH! What does it take to get rid of you?!?!
I'm here to stay and eat your food!
Not this time. *graps her and throws her back to Ponyville* See what I mean?
I loved your 4th Wall Shattering intro so much, I broke one of my rules.... I deiced to post a comment before I read the whole chapter!
But that level of Pinkie was just too good to pass up...
And now that I've read the whole thing... I'm not disappointed...
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Pinkie is best shenanigan
It was honestly difficult, hence why this is my shortest main story. Pinkie needs constant gags, but they need to be witty and colorful. If you just start cracking jokes it becomes bland fast. It does help though that she has no real limits in her character. Her randomness makes anything possible.
Thanks for reading!
Please let there be a sequel there needs to be more Pinkie x Braeburn(I dont believe they are related)
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haha i submitted this story right when that episode aired.
half me was like: fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
but the other half was: meh, this is my universe so i can overwrite it if i want
4465956 good for you,
This whole segment had me in stitches.
A great story. Now I'm off to read the others in the series.
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Haha, john freeman would be proud
thanks for reading 
I loved it!
My favorite part must've been when Pinkie took over writing 
So glad I'm one of your followers.
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hehe thank you! it was fun to write
did you catch the reference in Pinkie's "story?" 
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No… but I'll reread it, see if I can catch the reference!
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haha it's rather blatant... if you didn't get it the first time, then you probably haven't heard of what i referenced, so here... for your laughing pleasure
THIS SI AWESOME
between who was writing 
I just got a little confused
Damn i can't spell write
THIS IS AWESOME
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Haha thank you!
I see it had a double meaning in Rarity's story!
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Aha! you caught that
I like to advertise my stories as being stand alone if you wish... but there are subtle links and references to the others. (such as this
)
Good eye! And thanks for reading!
I don't normally approve of making references to that damnable milkshakes song... but I'll be damned if Pinkie doesn't pull it off nicely.
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haha
Thanks for reading!
(actually im curious... because a lot of people missed this when i thought it would be obvious... do you know what the reference is when Pinkie takes over the story?)
4992110 Which part? She hijacked your narrative three or four times.
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When she starts writing the story herself
4992129 I'm not sure of the exact reference, but it seems like something that Deadpool would do.
Probably wrong, but I've got little yellow boxes on the mind.
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It's actually this
I'm thinking of making a blog about this cause i thought this would be an obvious reference... but i've gotten little to no comments about it overall
