”And you mean to say, that Pinkie Pie has been spying for you, for how long?” Luna pronounced in a more indignant voice.
“Yes, she has been spying for me, for most of her adult life. It's not as if I had asked her to, it's just that. You see, she tends to go out on a limb, and in this state, she sees things. Things not quite of this world, by what I have managed to grasp. Places, and events!” Celestia acknowledged.
“She is Pinkie Pie, I know as much, but still?” Luna ranted on.
“You wouldn't believe, what that Pony is capable of. She was partaking in raiding the Star Swirl wing, at one time, and I guess that's among her more normal activities?” Celestia retorted.
“The Star Swirl wing?” Luna screamed at the top of her lungs, in utter disbelief.
“She was apparently looking for a time spell!” Celestia mused, as an interjection.
“A Time Spell, but she is an Earth Poni? Who would she snap that for, who thought herself capable of performing such an act?” came Lunas response.
“By the looks of it, it was for, and with Twilight, but it merely created a time loop, it changed nothing, in effect, unless you count the deteriorating state of Twilight herself, during the time span of the loop. I think the entire event was actually accounted for, in one of her many messages to me!” Celestia pointed out.
You need to work on grammar.
As Jon Snow made his way slowly down the winding road, he came across strange story blocking his path. Curious of the layout of the story, he approached it with caution.
3730496 A young lad named Gherkin was not far behind fair Jon Snow, and curiously inspected the strange story as well. The "story" was grotesque; a towering wall of text with many a spelling and grammar error to be found. "By the Gods," Gherkin did exclaim. "How does one spell the word "pony" wrong, in My Little Pony fanfiction no less!"
"I fear I do not know," Jon Snow replied, dumbstruck by the horror.
Gherkin inspected the story closer. "I say, it looks like he could have used Google Translate to write it in our fair language!"
3730512 "Our great language must not be butchered in this manner", Jon Snow exclaimed. Our brave Heroes inspected the story further, discovering that words such as 'replied' had been spelled incorrectly. Jon Snow and Gherkin screamed as they retreated from the abomination, but to no avail, as the creature was following them.
3730556 Both of the fair, young lads screamed in terror as the abomination enveloped them. Their screaming soon ceased however, and the two became mindless drones, forever destined to type everything in a giant wall-of-text and misspell simple words.
Gherkin turned to Jon, and said, "Jon. I had a flöashback just now."
"Interesting," he replied. "Now, I must return to my throan."
And the two lived miserable lives thereafter.
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3730576 Thanks for the Hilarious outburst of a story.
3722643 I can, and will finish that part, once the story is finished.
If I had no story to tell, the rest would still fall flat onto the ground?
At least, now I have a story to edit, in order to improve on said grammar, as well as spelling, where this is required.
3730590 If the two of you are still stuck there, you may consider a new attempt on passing?
3730576 sorry to crach the party.
3730556 but the story and text is no longer what it was, when you two stumbled by last time.
That is the worst description Iv ever seen in my life. It says nothing about the story other then it will contain spelling mistakes.
3955870 in what way is it a bad description?
are you dissapointed because did not see the Princesses squable?
At a woopingly low word count of 2,000, this isn't exactly the entire story.
You're not expecting me to reqwrite the description every time something new is introduced, I hope.
3956098 What are you talking about? The description is rubbish because it tells me nothing about the story at all. No Im not asking you to change it every time. I was just pointing out that nobody knows what your story is about because the description is rubbish.
3958378 just had to ask, since it wasn't clear from my point, knowing more of the story then is available to read.
since you didn't like it, what would you have said, in order to describe the story, such as you saw it?
I hope it isn't to much to ask.
If it isn't a desciption of the story, in part since the story hold no commedy.