I had lived most of my life in a far flung community, with a distant relative. My parents had sent me here as early as possible, since I'm an earth type pony, and thus had no real future with my parents in Cloudsdale.
Since I have no memory of them, I can't identify with them. I couldn't even really miss them, even if I still miss, what I don't have.
An incident changed my life, but lead up to making me into who I was to become. It's a choice, and I made it. This choice is what made me into who I'm about to become, since I can't turn back to what my parents had hoped for, or what I had been born into
Moving out, and embarking on the first of my adventures, in search of what I'm supposed to be. I had no intent of staying the blank flank I am now.
A story summary is a SUMMARY not a piece of the story
I may need to work more on that.
Just that if it is to introduce the story, but without spreading spoilers, since it'd ruin the suspence.
It's a story rated Everyone, and yet you added it to the "My Little Fetish" group?
- "Ponyville" is one word.
- There is a difference between "weekly" and "weakly"; learn it.
- When referring to the forest, "Everfree" is one word.
- It's spelled "pony", not "poni".
- "Indignatedly" is not a word, but "indignantly" is.
- The phrase is "of course", not "of cause" (and it's certainly not "ofcause", which isn't even a word).
- I'm pretty sure you mean "shot out", not "shut out".
- Vast and unexplained magical powers are almost always a sign of a bad character and bad storytelling.
Why in Celestia's name is your long description written like a chapter. That's not what long descriptions are for
3750230 the groud does accept 'None Clop'?
As of this time, there hasn't been any acts in the story, worenting it labeled.
Even if fetiches have been mentioned, specified elsewhere.
3750290
I'm not sure what you're trying to say to me.
Being in a fetish group actually requires displaying a fetish in the story.
3750267 I'll go over the details you brought up, and corect them the best I can.
Sadly, 'spell check' isn't exactly fool proof, you know.
the most logical, is to have somethng like say; "Pinkie Pie drool over the frosting"
then again, I could add something more juicey, even though I may have to change the markings of the story?
3750290 The labels of everyone teen and mature, and also tags should be put acordingly to the direction the history is going to take, so if you know you are going to include sex somewhere along the line the tag of sex should be put in regardless if you have written said sex yet, same reasoning with other rags.
3901370 with the Mane character in mind, I'm not planning anything like that with this story.
I guess some ponies may accept it, but I just don't feel like mixing it.
Since you mentioned the tags, do you feel the story is develloping away from the stipulated categories as marked at the moment?
What in God's Earth is going on?
4059590 in chapter 2, since it is where it looks as if you were?
a new filly is coming to town.
3750281 Thanks, I've finlly gotten to fixing this.
3750267 Technically, isn't that a matter of misspelling, refered to as a typo?
Most of these problems would be adressed.
3721810 I've changed that part, hope the new 'Summary' is more pleasing to your eyes now.
3750230 just curious, exactly how much does the group requite to show on screen, in your oppinion?
Hmmmm... Most OC's never work for me but you got and interesting chararter here there's also good story line and very little errors overall it was well worth the read. Have an upvote.
4096570 OC's, as in flat and undevelloped?
I have a few fics inspiring me, I need to keep her on par with these.
Thanks.
Then the efforts aren't in vain, which would have suckd.
Thanks.
Hope the story will be worth continuing then.
It Is. loving It
. -Digital
4250488 good thing this is my more active story, even if I'm distracted by new or old stories from time to time.
Some of the Errors are hopefully removed Story-wide, by now, in part because they're not making sense the way they originally was intended to.
The "Poni" would be reserved for stories where it can make sense.
There's a 'fun' part? I can't wait.
4879232 There always is, but it is up to you to choose where and when.
Next chapter should be up in some one or two weeks.
Where they will be off to by then, who's to say?
Seriously!
Didn't anyone else find that odd? Besides, we SAW her fly in season 2, The Cutie Pox.
I'm sorry. I've just played the straight guy in too many jokes.
5162909 I love slipping these reflections into my stories.
Even if it was later proved that Pegasi flight is a magic talent.
It has been said that infants can have bursts in magic exploits, but this does by no means explain the duration of the Cake twins.
A burst last no more than a few seconds, not several minutes of secure and thought through acts.
The Cutie Pox, wasn't that Apple Blooms Potion?
As rapid as the progression was, but why would none ever consider exploring this further, even after knowing the cure?
Am I going too far out into the wrong direction or miss-interpreting your comment?
Well, that sounds like Spike?
CORRECTION! Bravery is rushing in to do what you must regardless off the danger to yourself. COURAGE is when you go in despite being afraid, despite knowing how dangerous a situation is, you do it anyway because it's the right thing to do.
There's a difference!
You must be mistaken. Diamond Tiara isn't evil. She's just a schoolbully at worst. And Silly Filly? Wow, creative.
6238276 To call Diamond Tiara outright Evil would be stretching it, but she has done a few very bad, and low things.
From what I have gathered, she has grown and matured in the later episodes of the show.
The question is who she will grow into, and how they will interpret her mark.