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Always.
and luna wins again.
good girl.
Aww... Luna left her sister hanging. Was an excellent read.
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Why thank you, Your Royal Sexiness.
3618228
wow your definitely making a comeback in stories
isnt this anthro not human?
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Check the tags and my statement in BOLD LETTERS at the top.
Ok. Apparently Princess Celestia and Luna seem to have taken a vacation somewhere tropical.
Because I see a palm/coconut tree in the background.
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Aaaaand there's another story prompt!
Great
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Sorry!
Did I say something bad?
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No SPAM. Period.
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Nah I just got like 4 stories in various degrees of completion I'm juggling. And you've added to it.
3618232 You're most welcome, loyal subject~
3618910 While you misspelled a word there, I must say that I certainly am~
WHAT THE FUCK?!?! Hey wait...
Now that I see, that cover art isn't Mature, but is on dA...
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I asked a story approver about the cover art before posting the story and he said it was ok. Sooooo yeah.
Hot, sweet, and with huge amounts of cutes just like I like my clops
It it the popular stories box, which is how I found it.
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Ah... Odd...
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Lesbians are awesome.
3624581
Yes.
pobre celestia la dejaron tirada xD
buena historia hay muy poco princest aqui
no human WTF also so damn short, weird
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What do you mean "no human"?
And yeah I know it's short, but it is a one shot.
3628097 well it had the tag human sooo wtf?
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You mean the cover art, I assume? It was the only SFW thing I could find involving a bath and both princesses. Deal with it.
3628657 oh well ok just remove the human tag and replace it with I think arthro
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BZZT!
Wrong answer, story is humanized cover art isn't. Deal with it
3628868 what ever I don't care good bye
Congrats you're on the feature box.
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WOOOO!!!
I enjoyed it! It was short, sweet, and very to-the-point.
I think it would have been better off, however, if you had built up a bit more to Luna's climax. I am speaking from experience, as a girl, when I say that it can take quite a long time to get off, just gotta say. It's generally not nearly that easy.
Good read, anyway, though!
yessssssssssssssss
You know, I looked up "hmm'd" and "mm'd" in the dictionary... They weren't there. I don't know what the fuck those words mean.
The biggest problem with this story is how quick it rushes into the sex. There's no lead in to celestia and her relationship with Luna before she starts rubbing her off. It makes celestia seem very one dimensional. And I did.t see a great transition from "Tia, wtf are you doing here!" To "oh I want you to fuck me". It just kind of... Happens. And we just are supposed to go with it, I guess.
3635075 pretty much what she said
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I was going for a more descriptive use with "Hmm'd" and "Mmm'd". Guess it didn't work as well as I thought.
Yes, it's fast paced for female climax, but I am a guy so I'm not as familiar with how last parts work as I'd like to be.
Well I did write it for the Princest group so it's assumed they are active with each other. Plus I wrote it for fun and not seriousness. That and I'm a crap writer.
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I'm a guy, I'm a little more familiar with how female orgasms work. It's not rocket science.
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Fair point.
Gripping, intelligently written and not too descriptive for those who prefer lighter interpretations but still descriptive enough so we know what's happening
If only I had managed to write my first fic this we'll XD
Nothing quite like lesbian incest.
5710024 agreed
The cover art looks more like the "Anthro" category than "Human".
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Was all I could find...
6413080 Oh.
WTF did I just read?
Short but sweet