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Wut.
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Not allot to go on there.
trouble?
No seriously.... wut?
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To know better whats going on, read the fic that enspired me.
basically Twilight is drunk, and Spike takes down every word she dictates as she says it. so the letters make little sense and are random thoughts, comeons, and insults
Too bad this end here. I did enjoy this one.
I still wonder what will happen to Twi at the end
3555222 I find myself wondering if YOU were drunk while writing this.
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ha ha ha Funny you should mention that actually
I was sleep deprived and finished the story around 5am but forgot to save the revisions
I FINALLY got it all revised. Even though I didn't pay much attention as I was writing Twilight's letters because I wanted to capture that random drunken rant state she had going in the original story this was inspired from.
But I have cleaned up the letters as far as punctuation and capitalization. Hopefully they are easier to read.
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There is a sequel a-night-on-the-town but I suggest you read the first one that inspired my spinoff. the link is in the title.
Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon would be the last she writes to while drunk, as indicated by Spike telling Silver that Twilight passed out.
Then comes the SUN
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he he he well if they don't read your first, mine doesn't make allot of sense. like the "rotator" and Twilight's bigotry toward pegasi LOL
cant wait to see more of
punishment of 
hope you enjoy my spinoff. I focussed more on DT/SS relationship because they are my OTP.
Twi's letter was just the imperfect end to a PERFECT evening.
Oh... oh my.... Twilight, dear, I suggest you get yourself a damn-good lawyer, because you just pissed off the wrong daddy's filly. Big Daddy gon' take yo' flank to da cleaners and hang yo' purple plot out to dry like an old sock.
Coincidentally, I happen to have previously read Alcohol's Effect On Friendship, and therefore got the references. I also picked up on a few others, as well. I rarely laugh, but I cracked up at the line about the red-headed mule. Not bad, Spoony.
I also find this take on Diamond and Silver's relationship to be an interesting one. I could see that sort of thing happening based on what we see of their dynamic as friends, plus a few creative liberties (which are always required with these two because the show tells us so little about them).
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Well said.. I was rather proud of the "red headed mule" comment myself.
that and the "white nondescript cart" comment LOL
Oh god. That was tremendous.
This almost feels like two fics smooshed together, honestly, but luckily they're two very enjoyable fics. The best part was the beginning, with all the sweet and very sexy details of Diamond and Silver's relationship. I love the idea of Silver being Diamond's pet. It's adorable, and it fits the two of them really well. You also give some great details here, like the way Silver's face smells like Diamond's pussy.
Then of course, Twilight's letter shows up and now we're dealing with foalphile Twilight's drunken love letter to a little filly. It's kind of a jarring switch from sexy to funny, but luckily, it's really entertaining. Twilight's letter is just the right intersection between creepy and hilarious.
Overall, great job! I think you could use a proofreader, as I caught a lot of little grammatical quirks, but other than that, this is solid and fun. I want to see more of both SilverTiara pet play and Twilight's lust for Spoony, but if I can only have one, I pick the former.
" when will then be now"
SOON!
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(squee) why the hell wasn't I notified that my idol freaking just critiqued my fic?!
Thank you so much, Hammy. I revised this bitch 5 times at least for I finally left it alone
I wanted to give as much detail as I could about DT and SS's relationship without having to actually describe all the sex, because it's the romance and humor that are more important.
in a first draft I had DT buy one of those collapsible kennels "that's when they knew they had gone too far, and there was no going back" I had wrote. Diamond was supposed to hide the kennel under her bed. but I didn't save it right and lost several 1000 words in the process of learning that submit means save. But I think the cage would have been overkill and something for their future.
Right now they don't know about BDSM lifestyle. they were just playing pet and it turned into "pet play" LOL. I based this relationship of that of my Serving Silver and her Diamond.
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Gotta love Dark Helmet
Lol she's at it again.
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Damn right! Honestly, this was more than sexy enough without any graphic depictions (not that I am necessarily opposed to graphic depictions!) Clop (and naughty fiction in general) tends to overlook the potentially sweet and affectionate aspects of BDSM, so I'm happy you brought those to the fore.
Yeah, I think that was one of the best things about it. It felt more genuine because it happened naturally, and just happened to drift into the power dynamics of a dom/sub relationship. Which is adorable, in a very naughty way.
Idol? Really?
(don't feel bad though, I'm just weird about strong compliments. Thank you!)
That's...quite a strong word! I'm not sure how to respond, other than to get all embarrassed and hide.
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Basicaly yeah, you are the one who got me inspired to start reading Silver Spoon fanfics and ultimately start writing again.
Thanks for that because for weeks I couldn't RP I could only read here on FIMfiction
Tarnished Silver and Ms
got me inspired to go beyond the RP and start writing again, scenes for my alternate universe for Diamond Dazzle (my online daughter). I have written on my blog for ALTERNATE Tarnished Silver, Tarnished Sweetie, Dr. Triage (whom I gave the surname Mash), Dazzle's changeling Spy "Poison" and i started for my changeling Spy OC "Cypher" AKA "Gaze" as he killed the original (not knowing he was a deep cover Knight.) and downloaded his memories into a crystal to learn more about Fancy's Circle.
Before you there was Pen Stroke who I passionately admired for "Past Sins" but Nyx could never hit home like you did with Silver Spoon. The only thing that disappointed me about the Nyx story is we never got to hear if Silver Spoon accepted her apology for what she did to the two of them as NMM. DT did all the talking, and was considerably NOT inclined to accept.
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Your stuff is really fun, too, so I hope you keep it up!
It's really a joy to hear that I inspired someone else to write.
Ive read the majority of the fics of this series(The alcohol letters,not just this one),And ive come to wonder,Just how much fucking restaint does twi HAVE,If she's this bad when her inhibitions are lowered by alcohol?.....I mean at this point her non-drunk form is starting to look like a god of self-control,With drunk her being the same thing,But discorded
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I have a "Fall of Equestria" story for Silver Spoon in the works. Like Tarnished Silver it will be dark and sexy if I get it done
It was wrong in every way, but i couldn't stop laughing.
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I am so glad you enjoyed it
so wrong but it feels SO right
....I'll be honest, i don't know how to comment on this fic. It is wrong on so many levels and yet...I can't stop laughing. Brilliant, bloody brilliant.
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I have a new story that I just submitted for approval. It's called "The Taste of Victory" and it is about what could have transpired in the club house after "The Sugar Lump Gang" took it over. There will be hints to Tarnished Silver's influence such as this Silver Spoon describing how she loves DT for both her cruelty and her kindness.
not sure yet if full blown clop or just implied sexy times. We shall see. The climax (no pun intended) will be a game of "Spin The Bottle" that escalates. Again I don't know how far into the details I am going. No bondage though sadly.
Silver's pet play may be mentioned in her head as it is from her POV but Babs will not be told her secret.
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You know, the things both in your story and your post reminded me of something that happened to me.
Back when I was 12, there was a particular girl in our neighbourhood. She looked exactly like a human Twist. We weren't really friends, we just hung out for a time. She told me a lot about herself, about what she's afraid of... anyhow: One day, while we were playing in her attic, she decided upon a new game. She'd be the princess, and I'd be the evil villain who keeps her prisoner and rapes her. I'm not making this up. Now we never did anything more than strip her of her pants (she wore pantyhoses and undies) and lock her in a "cage" (some bed-frames put up sideways), but it was still pretty weird.
To this day, I can't forget that.
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DIAMOND GOT OWNED!!!
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ttthat is BUCKIN HAWT!
OMLuna!
I would SO date a Human Twist!
can you even put that stuff here in a note? The mods wouldn't even let me do an anthro version of "Alchohol's Effect On Friendshipping" because FOALCON can't be anthro! My submission was denied due to an anthro tag, and it wasn't even in the official rules yet.
but I know that when I was a kid and played "cops and robbers" I found myself wanting to be the one put in "jail"
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I don't see why they'd have a problem with my post. Like it said, we didn't actually do anything ^^
This foalcon rule must be new. I can't even find it in the writer guidelines! Ah, pity. This would've been great as an anthro... though it was great as a non-anthro anyhow!
And haha, I was the exact opposite! I used to tie up my sister's barbie dolls because, well, they just looked right that way, you know?^^ It's weird how early those things can start. I wonder what would've happened had that girl and I met four to six years later, when we both knew more about ourselves. Then again, I'm pretty sure whatever it is we had was less about us than it was about her... at least that's what I think.
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yeah I tied up my stuffed animals to. Looking back it seems so werid but at the time I thought nothing of it.
and yeah was pretty disappointed because I wanted to do an anthro version of this.
My cats giving me weird looks cause I'm laughing so hard
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And my work here is done.
If a letter like THAT came to my door I would of been disgusted, flattered and incredibly creeped out.
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(twiddles fingers) eeeeexcellent.
*falls over laughing and gasping for breath*
Oh dear lord, that was too funny, that was too disturbing, and that was most excellent. Kudos!
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Thank you so much. I can't get enough of rereading it myself.
AH!.. Now this one, I liked.
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Glad you liked it
I really want to see the aftermath of these letters.
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Really? what would you like to see? give me some ideas? Maybe I'll be inspired to reopen and add chapters. Who knows.
I noticed a few tense shifts here and there, a few unnecessary commas in the narrative, but those are tiny things. This was hilarious. I almost seriously laughed and I just woke up... That was supposed to come out like a compliment. Ah well, I feel kinda like I can envision Twilight feeling in the story, so, there's that. Anyways, here's your comment and I guess something else. Just give it a sec.
3763906 How about Silver goes to the library and gets twilight's dick shoved up her plot?
jk, let me think......how do i get them to the basement?.........oh i know!
Filthy comes and asks DT what happened but after looking to SS and asking her to hand over the letter she has an idea. "Ern....Daddy can go to the theme park?" blahblahblah then she explains SS that if they could rush to the library before she wakes up and take a picture if her laying drunk on the floor sleeping on a pool of vomit then they would have her at their hooves and could have her do or give them anything they want. She could have a princess as her personal slave!
SS is not sure it will work nor that it's a good idea, recalling DT what spike said but DT says no stupid dragon will tell her what to do.
Both get to the library and open the door carefully making sure no one is watching. "SS remember what i told you", SS nods nervously, when they enter they see Twilight laying on one side of the library, some books around her on the floor and a puddle of mostly clear vomit (when you drink vodka+lemon liquor+redbull with an empty stomach it looks like water #firsthandexperience)
DT takes out the camera from SS saddle bag and readies to take the shot but then spike comes down and sights them. DT blinds him with the camera flash and shouts NOW! and SS bucks spike to the floor and ties him with the belt and leash. Spike struggles but cant do more that shout for help. "Spike, shhhhush up!" Twilight mumbles as DT takes the picture. Then they take spike to the basement so that no one hears him shout but when they go back Twilight was starting to recover her conciousness, and notices them. They try to escape but Twilight grabs them with her magic and brings DT near her face. Twilight reeks of alcohol. And she tells her how much she dislikes her for having SS all for herself and treating her so bad. She then notices the camera and after a couple of seconds she realises she was trying to blackmail her. SS starts crying because they got caught. "please forgive us" and stuff. Twilight tries to make her feel better and decides to show her how much better of a mare she is compared to DT, and takes them to the basement.
Twilight sees spike tied on a corner but she's pissed at him so she ignores him and leaves him there while she has her fun with the filies.
Roles change, make DT be the SS' pet, Twilight has her fun with SS and goes a little rough on DT's plot hole to teach her a lesson. Then she takes a picture of DT eating SS out with a dog collar on around her neck to keep her quiet.
Spike had to watch and hear everything.
how about that for inspiration? you dont need to credit me or anything, change it however you like. just write it
4090832 3763906 i second the motion that this should be another chapter...or running along the same lines for another chapter. please?
Best fucking one yet!
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OMFG
that was actually a good idea for another chapter or two!
I had wanted this to be an extension of the Orginal Alchohol's effect on Friendship though. and to have Twilight act out her drunken proposals would be a serious deviation from the original story line since the last thing that happens is Celestia dropping in with the wrath of a thousand suns.
but I MIGHT just have to write this for you. i mean we all know DT has no quams about resorting to black mailing her enemies and in her mind Twi would deserve it for insulting not only her but making Spoony uncomfortable.
I seriously just might do this!
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twilight
wet
teh
fuk
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anyways, i liked the thing that silver spoon is diamond's pet, gave me an idea on what to draw xD ahm, so yeah. its a nice fan fic
I AM DIAMOND TIARA AND I ORDER YOU TO FINISH THIS!!! just kidding lol :3
5438751 OMG please do draw something from this and let me know when you do. I would LOVE to see it!:rarity starry:
Oh and as far as I was originally inclined this fic IS finished. Though if I wanted to go further you see below there is an idea I might want to pursue if I wanted to deviate from the original story and have actual clop between Twi and Silver.
Now I want to see DT and Silver Spoon's relationship turned into a full story...
It'd be interesting... Don't judge me... Please...
Eh.