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In an attempt to build confidence in my writing ability and show that theres nothing to fear, I am posting this first draft drabble to remind myself why I like writing in the first place.

Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie have been dating for 3 weeks now, and Dash and gets an idea to make her latest gift memorable.

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Jabberspike

Jabberspike #1 · Nov 13th, 2013 · 2 · ·

There's a few typos here and there (Sugarcude), but this is a good short fic. Keep it up.

Marik_Azemus

Marik_Azemus #2 · Nov 13th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Very adorable, mate. I recommend you double check for a few spacing and spelling errors but it is nice to see something from you once again.

As for that other fic... My ultimatum still stands.

HyperBlossom7

HyperBlossom7 #3 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

I really liked this story. You're a good writer. You only made a few errors here and there, but it's still readable and not hard on the eyes at all. I think you just need a proof reader for those little details and you should be good to go! Of course you can always proof read yourself since there aren't that many errors.

You get a happy Pinkie Pie for effort!

Appleloosa2011

Appleloosa2011 #4 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

Real good.

Dragonfeith

Dragonfeith #5 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

I love it, very clever.looking forward to more!

Ponyman

Ponyman #6 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

3482951 other fic? We havent talked in forever

SHL

SHL #7 · Nov 14th, 2013 · · ·

It's good

My Little Scribbler

My Little Scribbler #8 · Nov 15th, 2013 · · ·

I know how you feel. I've got several fanfic ideas, but I've been so busy with more important projects that I haven't had the time to write them. Hopefully, once the fourth season starts, I might have a little more drive. Now if only I had the time.