Reader and writer of all things shipping and Rainbow Dash. Also, AppleDash will forever be the ultimate ship.
It seemed like it was just going to be a fun night with her friends, nothing out of the ordinary happening. What Rainbow Dash certainly didn't expect to happen was to be kissed by her fun-loving friend, Pinkie Pie. Rainbow Dash is left confused and bewildered, wondering what the hay she was supposed to do.
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Cool. So where's Spike?
Cute, but saw some errors in it. Such as:
It's Pinkie Pie.
Otherwise, this was funny. I'll keep an eye on it!
So cute! And I love that ending! NIce job.
should be quiet.
There were a few other mistakes, but reading it over should help you see them. Anyways, cute story! You have earned a favorite
Oh, and I hope you don't mind that I added it to the PinkieDash and RainbowPie groups.
sweet and short... or is it the other way around?
(it is)
thanks lyra
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Uh, he... went on a holiday somewhere? I kind of forgot about him 
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I'll go and correct that, thanks for pointing it out.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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I don't mind at all, that's fine. I'll read over it and correct those little mistakes.
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Glad you enjoyed.
I
likeLOVE it! i LOVE rainbowpie/pinkiedash shippings!3466102
Well, I'm really glad to hear that! Thank you!
d'aww
Not a bad story. The title image kinda deterred me tho...
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I'm taking that as good.
3467889
Hmm. It was the closet thing to what I was looking for, sorry about that. Glad you enjoyed anyway.
that was nice short sweet and so cute like Pinkie Pie
i see what you did there
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Thank you!
3465481 You forgot about him living in the setting in which this fic takes place? That's less upsetting and more frustrating. I don't understand how people can so easily forget the most dedicated person in Twilight's life. This is the kind of pony-obsessive frame of mind that cuts my fun short and makes the mane six downright unappealing.
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I'll add a mention of it somewhere if you're that upset.
Well, sorry.
3468520 No need to change anything just for me. I'm just commenting on how biased and selective the fanbase tends to be.
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It's alright. You're right anyway, I should've had some some Spike somewhere.
3468584 Seems there's a jerk out there who disagrees.
You really don't need to change anything, though. All I ask is that, for future reference, people keep in mind that any given member of the mane six has six close friends, not five. Especially Twilight. Show's about friendship, after all.
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Oh well...
3465485 That's what I do.
3468584
It's cute, and I like it. Short 'n' sweet. Only thing I notice is that Spike went to bed early in your current edit... and Dash takes Pinkie up to the room he sleeps in for their private conversation, which proceeds to get kinda noisy. Not a complaint, just an observation that'd be easily fixed in a future work. (Y'know, with something like:
)
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Thank you!
And I'm going to steal that
3468702
You know, not every character has to be in every story.
Applejack is my favorite character. If I'm reading a nice story about Rarity and Twilight getting together, I'm not going to go saying "Where was Applejack in that?! You know Rarity and Twilight have more friends than just each other!!!1!1"
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you do not seem... reluctant to reply, does the talking to a pony breathing down my shoulder not activate the CREEP RADAR?
3469277
Eh, I don't get a huge amount of comments so I reply to most of them
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oh, okay... that's a shame... if you need a proof reader, i'll volunteer, if not... then say so... i guess...
WUBSTEP!
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That'd be cool, although I don't know how the whole proofread thing works...
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uh... hadn't... thought that through... i guess a link to the unsubmitted story or chapter in a comment or something would work... i think the anchor is for links... that sounds right... i'll check the faq's
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nada... but i think i may be right... or not... need to stay positive
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then we can see how it works out.
Well, get back to me when you do
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i think the link idea works. i just tried it with myself
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Cool
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Let's continue this conversation on my user page
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Have fun with it! :)
And I don't think it was that Spike HAD to be in the story because he's such a main character... it's because he lives there. The last time Twilight had a sleepover in canon, they had to explain why Spike wasn't there, so now, folks will wonder about where he is.
I really found this facinating
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I'm glad you did.
3469153 Of course he doesn't, but when all six of his friends are having fun together without him, anyone who likes to acknowledge that they're his friends at all should be wondering why he isn't hanging with them. And when a story takes place in his home, like Shrinky Food pointed out, his whereabouts should at least be explained.
Short and sweet. Nothing more, nothing less.
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Thanks. It's always nice to just write a bit of fluff.
*stuffing
*choke
*get it."
XD That was so cute!