Please read Transformers Fall of Equestria and Equestria's Darkest Hour by JDPrime22 first before reading this so the story can make sense
and thanks goes to my proffreaders (list will be updated as time goes on)
ReptileLover
5 years after the transformers disappeared into the vortex Equestria has been in peace and harmony although all of the ponies miss Optimus Prime and his bots they are glad they would never be disturbed by the transformers war ever again.
or so they thought
it has not been as great for the autobots although they finally destroyed Megatron, Shockwave among other high ranking decepticons at the battle for autobot city (aka Metroplek who they managed to move to earth) the cost was to high
Optimus is dead among the hundreds of autobots including Ironhide, Ratchet, Wheeljack who died in that very battle
there has also been a new decepticon leader that had risen up and caused more chaos for the bots
his name is Galvatron
although there is hope there has been two new primes selected by the matrix of leadership
Sentinel Prime the wise brother of Optimus Prime and Ultra Magnus (used to be Sentinel Minor)
and Rodimus Prime who used to be the the hot shot autobot Hot Rod
both Primes carry one half of the matrix
the autobots have now picked up a mysterious Decepticon message from a strange being who calls himself Nemesis who tells them that he has found Equestria and has moved out to destroy the planet the bots promised and hoped to never return.
naturally the autobots wont allow this and Rodimus takes a brave squad of autobots with Ultra Magnus and Jazz as his second in commands he sets forth to help while Sentinel waits and prepares a squad in case the rescuers need the rescuing.
although Galvatron the manic he is has been monitoring the Autobots communications filled with hate and obsession for killing the autobots orders his cons to follow the autobots and destroy them and the equines once and for all.
Transformers and My Little Pony are owned by Hasbro i take no credit for anything but the story and even then i give credit to JDPrime22 for without him this story would not be.
Is this going to be closely similar to prime or G1
3483793 Well more based on war for cybetron/fall of cybertron because this is a sequel to 2 stories by a diffrent author who i got permission to write this.
and those games take place in the prime universe so lets just say prime
its just the events of prime never happen (cliffjumper is still alive)
3483793 and you should read theses first or this story wont make sense
this first
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/46203/transformers-fall-of-equestria
this after
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87563/transformers-equestrias-darkest-hour
I like it. I really, really like it. I mean, there are a lot of spelling, capitalization, and punctuation mistakes but it's still understandable. Good work and I'll be sure to check in when you post new chapters.
3484638 thanks its really really a honor hearing that from you
yeah in real life i am bad at talking with others due to vocab but its also due to me not really talking (i am not saying no friends just i don't talk when i hang out with people i let actions do that)
so i don't know what i should do first the Rodimus getting the message from Nemesis that he will attack there or have Vinal talking to mane 6 about it and ending the chapter with the beginning of the attack.
i am also going to do what you did with Equestria's darkest hour by having a bio at the end of each chapter for a random character with Bombshock being next (he is a major con in this story along with the rest of the D.M.P.T)
3484752 I like the character bio idea!
Oh and by the way her name is Vinyl Scratch not Vinal Scratch.
3485033 thanks editing now (i also fixed up a few mistakes not a lot but something.
3484534 I have read em already
3486373 ah ok so then you know it will be more prime/fall of cybertron styled.
3486516 Yup. I was wondering if someone would make one. an it looks like u did it.
3486578 yeah and I am proud of my work so far. and thank you for faveing!
3486827 welcome
Aside from some run-on sentences, periods, capitalizations, commas, and other punctuation errors, I can still understand the story and it is getting pretty intense so far!
Also...this part.
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Thank you
and that part about the books at first i was going to make original titles for them but i could not come up with anything so i decided to read the first chapter of fall of Equestria again and then it hit me
why not just use those titles to make it more apparent that this was a sequel.
Cool the sequel to fall of equestria can't wait to read it!
3674921 thanks for faving it
question do you want me to send you the list of characters i have planned?
Maybe if you want to.
3674973 yeah i don't mind
Great first chapter!
I was so impressed with the characterizations and fight scenes here. :)
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I thank you for the kind words i appreciate it.
Unfortunately as you could see the story is on Hiatus for awhile I might get back to it but I don't know when.
Finally this has updated!!
4870958 Last time too unless someone decides to continue this
A pretty swaggin' new chapter here, Mirage. :)
4917680 Thank you
As i have said this is the last unless someone else takes over or i can figure out how i can fix my mess.
5290087 I don't think its canon and i don't think he will respond here since this is on my story.
I think its better to ask on his profile if my story is canon or not.
I think i asked him and he said it was not.
5300414 Oh yeah i forgot about that.
But still i think its better to ask him on his profile.
Well that makes sense because ever since the movie came out everyone hated him instantly just for linking twilight. What a bunch of crybabies if you ask me.
5432388 Agreed.
when this be update?
6356612 Read the notes it wont be updated by me.
sorry for the late replay but life has been keeping me from this site as well as a lot of things.
6442676 if not you then who?