Luna is an incredibly awkward pony. Shouting while indoors, using archaic language, conjuring storm clouds out of thin air... It isn't that the earnest mare doesn't want to make friends, it's that she's unfortunately bad at it. She's going to need a bit of help if she hopes to make any strides in becoming more social.
Fluttershy, on the other end of the spectrum, thinks life is pretty swell. She has her animals, her five best friends, and a wonderful lifestyle. She doesn't think she could be any happier.
However, when Twilight decides to take a hoof in Luna's development and puts into action a plan to get the lonely alicorn some friends, Luna learns how happy a pony can truly be, and Fluttershy discovers that maybe something is missing from her life after all.
With a foreword from Princess Celestia
Hmm. Not half bad. You might want to split the paragraphs by pressing enter twice instead of once--it's simply for easier viewing, but you don't really HAVE to do it if you don't want to. Other than that you seem like a decent writer and this seems like a decent story. Onward to the next chapter :)
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Huzzah, the spaces have been doubled!
Well...that doesn't bode well for the rest of the story now does it?
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That Celestia, always tryin' to keep the little people down
Yeah, well, He probably should have thought a little bit more ahead before dating and treating one of the elements of harmony like trash. Never heard from again is probably the best Magnum could have really hoped for in these circumstances. : ) Enjoying the story and quite happy with how much of it you've posted in just one day. Gave me more than enough to sink my teeth into it and enjoy despite Celestia's thoughts in the prologue.
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Yeah, I've had this thing finished for a few days. Since it's my first fic that I'm putting up for real people to see, I wanted it to be done before I started posting.
3445203 Well I look forward to seeing how this continues as you post the rest of it. : D
Omg so many part in the story I cant stop laughing
Oh Luna ur to good
I feel the spectre could avoid all this trouble by simply possessing a cake and getting Celestia to notice it.
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Hmmm... she does deserve it for that nasty foreword...
She lives in a palace and is broke. Is that irony? I honestly can't tell anymore.
Her indoor's yelling voice is..emm.. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
LOL Pretty slow there Cadence
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Friend, I believe you have just stumbled onto a ship-fic premise. "In a world... where a princess has to sell her castle to survive... only one pony is willing to take her in. This summer, Princess Celestia is... the Homeless Houseguest."
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You should see her outdoors shouting-voice. The font's almost size 12!
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Considering that premonitions are supposed to happen before the event they predict, Cadance is very slow, indeed
dat ending!
I can't wait for more!!! 
Why!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did you have to leave it on a cliffhanger plz write the next chapter plz!!!!
Luna is best princess. Period!
For some unknown reasons as much as I love Luna, I would prefer her getting bonk by the frying pan...
Because its the less complicated one to do~
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I agree! Exclamation point!
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She's a tough pony, she can take a little tappy-tap to the noggin.
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Suspense is the spice of life! That's my story, and I'm sticking with it.
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Wooo, I'm so happy that people actually like this!
...Something tells me Discord won't wield the frying pan..
3449800 I know but all right then i cant wait for more.
Insert Tales series game over music.
Huh, that was unexpected. Where the heck did Flutters go? I also liked her battle mantra.
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Bwahaha, this entire story has been a setup for "Fluttershy in Human World"! DESPAIR, PUNY MORTALS!
But in all seriousness, that is not true, and I would be ashamed of myself if it were.
Woah awesome man i was like
at the end
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Haha, so was everypony else. "What the hell, she actually did it?"
But seriously, thanks for the compliment and for reading up till now.
3453962 Your welcome in fact when i was reading that part i was listening to Headstrong by Trapt/Linkin park it totally fit the seen in my opinion
I agree on being curious to seeing how all those questions are answered, though I am also quite curious on what will happen to the specter. Somehow I can see Steve becoming Fluttershy's tool of Alicorn disciple in the future. All Alicorns will bow to her will or be bonked on the head! I'M THE FLUTTERSHY, GOTTA LOVE ME!!
Maybe Princess Celestia would be rich. If ponies were like americans and pay taxes on their income, even there is no law that says they have to.
You know, until now, when I read fanfics, I would only do so much as snicker a bit at something 'funny'. however, 'stupid looking crab thing' just about Babe Ruthed my sides into orbit, and I don't know why. well done.
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Fluttershy, She Who Wields the Golden Pan
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When I told Princess Celestia what you said, she shouted "Dammit, Mesa, I'm a Princess, not an accountant!" So thanks for that
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Glad to oblige. I'm still trying to figure out if other people think my jokes are funny, or if it's just me.
Dat ending!
XD jajajaja, this story was so hilarious, the squirrel jajajajaja, damn, certainly a good story
.... When will these ponies learn that evil is not a toy?
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Can it be a playground?
3499807 It can indeed be a playground... A playground of DOOOOM!!
Well that was slightly traumatizing I'd say. Makes me wonder about Fluttershy and horror movies, maybe because she works with animals all the time its laughable to her how fake the injuries in the movies are? *Like war movies for people in the military, they are kinda ridiculous after you've been in and know how things work*.
Wonder how up for food Luna will be after that, best first date EVER!
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Hope the princess has a stomach for spaghetti, 'cuz it's half-price night at Gino's Istallion Eatery, and Fluttershy ain't missin' that, no way, no how.
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Makes sense, we all have our standards my little 1/1 flying,banding friend. Istallion's take their spaghetti seriously, Luna eats less then three plates and she'll be lucky to get out of there without broken legs.
I hereby vote Fluttershy "Pony most likely to beat a slasher to death with a golf club"
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I now want to write a pony-Mafia story.
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>>I hereby vote Fluttershy "Pony most likely to beat a slasher to death with a magical frying pan"
Fixed
3506687 Of course, how silly of me to forget. Fix genuinely appreciated.
This is quite enjoyable. Why the heck doesn't it ave more likes?
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PEGASUSMESA has leveled up! +1 to Self-Confidence! +1 to Happiness! +1 to Enthusiasm!
Seriously, thanks for the comment, it was a real confidence booster.
No sweet flutter flank for Luna tonight. Ah well, at least she still has the tree by Flutters window to look through as she sleeps.
Tsundere Discord is Tsundere.