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When Pinkie Pie breaks into the Mentally Unstable Wing of Ponyville Hospital, she finds out that everything is not what it seems. She is thrown into the Wing with the others, Screw Loose, Mind Twist, Screwball, Derpy, and Luna herself. Pinkie begins to loose faith, for a month of nothing but torture and padded rooms can do a lot to somepony.

PLEASE REVIEW!!!

Also you can read the prequels:
Mind Twist: The First of The Insane
Screw Loose and Screwball: The 2nd and 3rd of The Insane

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 100 )

Can't wait for the next chap! :twilightsmile:

That was interesting...I look forward to more :raritystarry:

In the description, torture is spelt 'torcher'. Other than that, interesting story.

Thanks everyone for the great reviews :rainbowkiss: and 3246318 thanks my spellcheck was being weird :pinkiehappy:

:applecry: I feel so sorry for the patients of the mental wing. :raritydespair: And they took Pinkie Pie. And Princess Luna is there. :raritycry: WHY?! I'm going to go over there and cry now.

Just commenting on the blurb

Mentioning the clincher kinda ruins the point of it being in the story. It actually turned me off the story actually.

Alright I'm just gonna read this because I feel like it.

"It was a beautiful day in Ponyville. The birds were chirping, fillies were playing," Already a +1 for mentioning fillies. xD

Holy crap the way you described the next pony is already making me get attached to her. I firkin love ponies like that so much.. I think I'm gonna like this story lol. Especially because she's actually blue.

... and she thinks she's a dog. .-. Damnit you ruined it. xD The blood and the panting made it all perfect until now lol.

Lol Pinkie too weak to even throw dat ball.

Lol you're making it seem like the hospital is an insane asylum.

You should totally ship Screw Loose with Pinkie. xD

Also I'm just gonna to straight into the next chapter. You should add a mare who's obsessed with blood and can't get enough of it though. I would loove that..

Lol. Midnight and everyone is in bed? Da fuck kind of backwards ass town is this. Nobody is in bed that early anymore. xD

Lolninjasuit. *Insert MGS theme*

Lol an open window. irl there would be no such thing-- especially in a hospital.

Nobody ever listens to those keep out signs do they? xD

Lol Pinkie and her randomness. Who knows what else she has in that mane..

Dafuq is Derpy doing in here? Wat :S At least she can always see her cute face. xD

Now Luna? What the flying Obama fuck

Ohgod Pinkie is dun fucked. tbh I'm a little confused as to what's gonna happen next tho.
I'd say this is pretty good so far. Update as soon as you can. xD

3246610 I know I know I was tearing up when I wrote that part :raritycry: Luna is best princess! You'll understand why she's there later, for now, have some :pinkiehappy:

3246887 OH MY BUCKING GAWD, YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD IM LAUGHING RIGHT NOW!!! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: *falls out of chair* okay, okay....I'm done. Thanks for one of the absolutely most greatest ideas ever. I'll try my best. :pinkiehappy: I'm already thinking of Pinkie going :pinkiecrazy: at the end. I'm not sure yet.

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I think I can smile and sit until something awesome happens. :pinkiehappy:

So don't forget to check my other stories guyz! I am also in the process of writing another one! Hope ya enjoy! ::derpytongue2: :derpytongue2: :derpytongue2:

This looks interesting. *Puts on Read Later to see where it goes*

If they touch Derpy or Luna, I swear imma march over there and whoop their asses good! Derpy and Luna are not to be touched? Understand dude? NOT. A. FUCKING. SCRATCH! And also, Screwball IS insane, she's Discord's daughter. And last time I checked, Screw Loose is her mother. Not that hurting anyone like that is cool at all. I mean, I'm black... 'Nough said.

I like this story. This is nice bucking story.

Favorite and five out of five mustaches.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Nice story. Don't listen to Derpy and Luna not to be touch since that would make it darker and a little more...interesting :pinkiecrazy:

3255212 oh I know that. I've already made up my mind on the ending!!

I know this story is supposedly sad, but that cover image is hysterical. :rainbowlaugh:
Will definitely read later. :pinkiehappy:

"I knew I'd need this some day." Pinkie said as she dug through her mane and pulled out a skeleton key.

Is that a Darksiders 2 Reference?

ALL RIGHT, CREATOR LISTEN HERE, IF YOU EVER GET TO TOUCH LUNA OR DERPY IMMA SUPA GLUE YOUR BUM HOLES SHUT, AND FORCE YOU TO EAT MY GRANDMA'S THREE OUNCH CHILI UNTIL YOU EXPLODE! THERE'S GONNA BE CHILI AND GUTS ALL OVE RTHE WALLS! ANY QUESTIONS?

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Im pretty sure that's actually fanon

Wow. I never really did like reading this kind of stuff...
But it's just too good! How could I resist? You're doing a really good job at keeping things interesting!

Trust us fake doctors...
You wouldn't want to get Pinkie depressed! :pinkiecrazy:

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What is? Screw Loose, Screwball and Discord?

Dude, after seeing her, I have one question... May I use Mind Twist?! She's fuckibg amazing!!! XD

3257472 if Mind Twist is the main character, it would depend on the type of story. You could message me the summary of your story if you want :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: but if she isn't the main character, then go for it!! :rainbowdetermined2:

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Sweet! Thanx! I'll message you when I come up with something!

Hmmm. I can see the headlines now: "Oncoming Storm destroys Hospital of Evil."

"You mean Pinkie could be locked away getting torched right now in some padded room of the Ponyville Hospital?"
Shouldn't that be tortured, not torched?

3258953 oh, thank you. My spell check is being very strange lately. :rainbowhuh:
You're not the first to point this out :twilightblush:

The Doctor will save them all!!! Luna, Derpy, Screwball, Screw Loose, and Pinkie will also be free!!!!!! If you don't decide to kill them off, that is. :pinkiecrazy:

Who operates a hospital like this?!?

Man this keeps getting sadder. Oh well, if Pinkies friends and the Doctor don't rescue them Princess Celestia will eventually come to check on Luna's progress. There's no way they can refuse to let the Princess see her sister.

Doctor... Why didn't you use your psychic paper to pretend your the guard of that place? You could have saved a lot of them a long time ago!

Ok guys, before you say anything, this is not the last chapter. There will be a little bit more. :rainbowkiss:

bruses on her face, along with the rest of her body.

Bruises

:pinkiesad2: I'm so happy, I want to cry.

They struggled as they pegasus kicked and screamed.
the pegasus
Derpy say in her chair sadly as the guards tied her up.
sat in her chair
:pinkiehappy:

she had received from pill they had given her
the pill
a pill
It took Pinkie to realize Screw Loose was arguing with herself.
it took pinkie a while

Well at least it's a happy ending. I :heart: this story. Thank you for writing it.

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