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MarvelandPonder


You've got the heart of a phoenix! Profile Art by Bevin Brand. Writing: The Ex Files.

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Reversal spells sometimes have a few ... unprecedented side-effects. Some, much more permanent than others, as Angel bunny finds out. In a wicked turn for the worse, he must stop his kind-hearted caretaker from destroying the entire cottage, and his sleep schedule.


Prompt #1 for Equestria Daily's Writer's Training Grounds!
"Not everything went as planned when Twilight undid her spell on Fluttershy."

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Hilarious! :pinkiehappy:

The bird open cages ranging from little to large trembled, the birds ruffling up their feathers and backing up against the far end of their cage from Fluttershy.

I don't understand the beginning of the sentence. I think the words "The bird open cages" were supposed to be just "The birds"?

‘Bout time for a midnight snack, huh, boys?

Maybe this is a little bit of a nitpick, but just so you know, an apostrophe is supposed to be a closing single quotation mark (’), not an opening single quotation mark (‘).

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Actually, I think it's supposed to read "The open bird cages", indicating the birds are hiding in the cages despite the open doors, making the cages tremble.

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