Photo Finish, behind the strange clothes and sunglasses is very shy and antisocial pony that she has hidden from everypony. So when she meets Fluttershy, she understands that it's not just the loud popular ponies who receive special attention
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Simple, I liked it. To be honest I was not sure what to expect, but I was well pleased at how you pulled things together without making it tacky.
The only thing I missed was (Even though Twilight was mentioned) I still with there was at least a small reaction to her blurting out Spikes secret. Like you said though, In this story Photo did not notice her, so I'll just let go of the desire there.
Good job
Mr. Flare
oh photo, you remind me of many of the woman in my life. just wanna give you a hug,
Thanks guys!
I like it.
Sentence structure needs some work. Jumps around a bit. How her accent was written is..odd, but fine whatever. And in general, it was too brief.