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I'm at a loss of words at how good this is. I didn't notice any spelling mistakes, if there were any.
Also quite funny and smart that you chose a dimension- hopping horse as the name of the faculty.
3234918 Thanks
I noticed a few punctuation issues and some missing words. An editor or prereader might have been able to catch that.
But overall, a very good first story.
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Thanks for telling me, I think that I've fixed them
MOAR!
That is, if you don't mind.
But...why did the Cakes have that table in the first place? I guess maybe the effects of reality being altered?
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Here's a hint, they were newly weds when they got it.
S-she killed Fluttershy?!
Oh its only Fluttershy thats good I was worried it would be Rarity.
I could probably figure out how to make pony into cupcakes.
very carefully?
I'm going to guess that this is an alicornified version of Researcher Twilight.
I love Researcher Twilight.
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This story was partially inspired by Researcher Twilight (actually it was inspired by grimdark ponies in general but whatever). I hope you enjoy the story.
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I'll take that as a compliment.
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Meh. I want to go back to the maracas wielding minotaurs!
So is this Researcher Twilight? She has to know 'why' so she 'experimented' on all her friends (and everyone else she could catch)?
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Well dear child, we shall have to wait and see. Oh, and I like your interpretation of the fourth image, I was afraid that this chapter would go over a lot of people's heads.
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and if it's the one I'm thinking of, she took in one of the CMC as apprentice.
3591500 It was Applebloom she apprenticed(is that a word?). She had her kill Silver Spoon.
> Applejack, an orange earth pony that Twilight had known back in Ponyville
Gee, d'ya think?
It's a good story, and I really like the idea of the asylum and keeping all the insane variants of fanfiction together. It could have used a little more atmosphere and prose, and Twilight could have expressed emotions a little better to make her a more relatable character, but good fic overall.
What is love?
Baby don't hurt me...
Okay, I should use a different frame of mind to read this story.
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Or maybe I should use a different frame of mind when writing this story.
Uhh...
Formatting issue.
Well, this is an interesting story. Except for the numerous grammatical and logical inconsistencies such as the example I pointed out, this story is quite well written. The pacing is spot on. The developments leave me wondering, and the descriptive detail adds icing to this special cupcake of a story. Liked and favourited.
Praise Smooze!
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Could you please tell me where that "I'm not to be sure" is, I can't seem to locate it.
Thanks for the feedback BTW.
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Chapter 5, about halfway down the page. It's when Twilight and Pinkamena answer Dread's questions.
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Okay, fixed
ERMAFERST!!!
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What?
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I do believe it is a corruption of the words "I am first".
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I guess that makes sense.
Huh. Will they all end up in there? The others aren't made homicidal as frequently in fanfic, as far as I know.
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Between you and me, there are about 12 other Pinkie Pies somewhere in the facility. One of them is a stallion, an other one is a pegasus, at least one is a changeling, and the rest had to be lobotomized.
Of course none of them will be making an appearance in this fic so...
3807321 Translation: Oh my Faust.
As in Lauren Faust.
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Forgive me, but I still don't know what you mean.
3817989 Sometimes, people replace "God" with "Faust".
Lauren Faust created Friendship is Magic, and she has an alicorn OC, and in some people's head canon, this OC created Equestria and is the mother of Discord, Celestia, and Luna. The OC is usually called Faust.
Does that clear it up?
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Alright then, I was unfamiliar with that. So I'm guessing this a complement?
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Good to know, but I meant Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash.
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Well there's the Applejack who is Applebloom's sister/mother
The Rainbow Dash who brutally murders anything she perceives as "uncool"
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Never encountered either of those. And simply incest wouldn't be enough to be dragged to Sleipnir, would it?
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Anything that break's MLP's family friendly values is enough to end up in Sleipnir.
I disappear for a month and come home to a new chapter of this. Excellent.
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Welcome back! Was everything to your liking?
The plot thickens!
And that test log.....
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Thank you.
3945858 You're welcome.
You've got numerous spelling errors and missing words here. Not sure why the quality took a dive in this chapter. The content is good, though.