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I'm at a loss of words at how good this is. I didn't notice any spelling mistakes, if there were any.
Also quite funny and smart that you chose a dimension- hopping horse as the name of the faculty.
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I noticed a few punctuation issues and some missing words. An editor or prereader might have been able to catch that.
But overall, a very good first story.
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Thanks for telling me, I think that I've fixed them
MOAR!
That is, if you don't mind.
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But this disturbed me in ways i didn't know i had.
I did enjoy it but but your grimdark scares me
cool. can I see a human here? seems unnatural.
Wow. Pinkamena describing how she killed Corncob
Ha! Fullmetal Alchemist reference in the first Chapter. I miss Barry. He was great.
This story is interesting so far, and has me curious. Multi-verses, probably a villain of some sort from most the grim darks. And if a certain earth pony is present, then I wonder if a certain Pegasus is there too.
Fingers crossed.
"Nope, I had a red and black alicorn oc hehe!"
"GET AWAY FROM ME YOU SICK FREAK!"
Two things of note here:
1) Clearly the head of Sleipnir isn't accountable to literally anyone because no one in their right mind would make this legal.
2) I'm getting some slight Deadman Wonderland vibes.
Geee I dunno Twilight, could it have something to do with your memory loss? Like stereotypical blunt force trauma to the head causing amnesia?
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Unless that's some kind of sick joke which, as Twilights reaction would indicate would go over ponies heads, that would imply certain comforts are allowed, probably under certain circumstances or something.
"Nope! I'm a main character, I mean who the hay is Corncob? As if some nobody'll win against me!"
"Told ya so!"