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What is love?
Baby don't hurt me...
Okay, I should use a different frame of mind to read this story.
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Or maybe I should use a different frame of mind when writing this story.
Uhh...
Formatting issue.
Well, this is an interesting story. Except for the numerous grammatical and logical inconsistencies such as the example I pointed out, this story is quite well written. The pacing is spot on. The developments leave me wondering, and the descriptive detail adds icing to this special cupcake of a story. Liked and favourited.
Praise Smooze!
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Could you please tell me where that "I'm not to be sure" is, I can't seem to locate it.
Thanks for the feedback BTW.
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Chapter 5, about halfway down the page. It's when Twilight and Pinkamena answer Dread's questions.
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Okay, fixed
3676988 why do i have the feeling that the cackling mare is another twilight you keep mentioning her oh also i wonder if twilight will have to fight an alternate celestia perhaps one suffering from the the sex virus ie: molestia or alternate luna
You're rationalizing, Twilight, but hey whatever helps you sleep at night.
She's awake.
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