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Llyander
Just this Scottish Gryphon, y'know?
Llyander
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You should use the picture from the new mlp comic where luna gives big mac a kiss.
Really nice beginning. Can't wait for the next parts.
...Eeyup.
3140381What?!? Whwere is it?!
3140483 It`s in the My Little Pony, Friendship is Magic COMIC #10
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Eheh, aw yeah.
A most excellent start. We are intrigued.
can't wait to see more
Tracked and fav'd.
I'm rather pleased with the serious scope you gave Luna's powers: there's a great deal of untapped potential in just how powerful both Celestia and Luna actually are.
You mean 'ponies.'
Looks interesting enough to warrant my attention. I'll stick around and see where this goes.
Oh Thank Jesus! Another LunaMac Story! I have been DYING to get My Fix! I can only hope with the recent IDW comics, more of these will be made! Thank you so much - I love you!
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Eheh, Aw Yis! Saved.
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Glad to help.
3142019 Ah-hah. Well spotted, thank you. I need to keep reminding myself about that. That and any reference to "hands" as only Lyra would know what those are!
3140381 Good idea. :) Done!
3144572 No worries, it's the most common mistake in pony fanfiction. Kinda like thinking AJ is Southern.
Oh, sweet! Did you actually use the image I posted for the new cover? That's awesome!
ok, ya got me.
im intrigued. aaaand another to my fav list. somehow i think i shant be let down.
Loving it! I would space the paragraphs out a tad, but other then that! A fun read to watch!
I require MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAR
please
3156349 MY NEEDS ARE GREATER THAN YOURS, probably
3156356 STOP SHOUTING
let's agree we both have equal need for this to continue 
That is one mean Guard.
Mac has such silly ideas...
We demand moar LunaMac with haste! The Dark Gods must be sated!
Racist Flying Horse is Racist... And Very Rude I might Add...
Also, Yay!
the plot....it thickens.
yup this is gonna be awesome.
THIS IS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ AND MORGAN FREEMAN WILL BE PROUD OF YOU YOU DELECTABLE BASTARD I HOPE TO FLY TO THE MOON AND CONQUER IT FOR MOTHER RUSSIA AND THEN FLY BACK WITH CHEESE TO FEED THE ORPHANS GO AMERICA EVEN THOUGH I'M BRITISH AND I HOPE ONE DAY YOU'LL BE AT THE BALL GAME WITH ME BECAUSE I MISS YOU FATHER MOTHER.
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<3
Hm, you'd think Sweet Apple Acres was stuck in a loop of neverending harvest seasons over and over if you went by how fics always have one of the siblings bucking the trees. While work on a farm never ends, surely there must be other chores, like patrolling for pests...
Harebrained. Since hares are silly buggers, I guess?
Feels a bit unnatural to call them CMC in-universe. Just "the Crusaders", maybe?
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I don't think the Guard is being racist, he's being an asshole or if you want to make it an 'ism', then he's displaying classism. Again while I do love the story, the very idea that ponies are setting to meddle in the love life of a living God for no good reason is hilarious to the point of tragedy. I half expect Applejack to be screaming "DEATH TO THE ARISTOS" by the time this comes to a head.
That said; I'm enjoying this slow burn you've opted to engage with by building up Luna's desire to court Big Mac and the contrast of poor oblivious Mac's first clue to said romantic intentions is one of her bodyguards making an arse of himself.
3159366 Ah, yes, hair and hare. Well spotted, thanks for that! Amended. :) Also, you raise a valid point about the CMC abbreviation. On a second reading I think I agree with you so I've amended that as well.
3159416 And yes, indeed, if you were going to pick an -ism for this story, classism would definitely be it. I'm trying to steer clear of the whole tribalism thing as, frankly, that's been covered in plenty of other fics! Classism has as well, I guess, but it's the one -ism I think applies more than any other to this particular situation.
3156972HOW FUCKING DARE YOU REPLY LIKE THAT! THE USE OF THE THREE WAS INCORRECT YOU BASTARD! YOU HAVE FAILED ME FATHER FOR THE TIME FOR INSURECTION IS NIGH. FUUUUUUUUUCK!
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8T
Nein...
Racist Flying Horse is still racist, looking down on the Red one for being regular, non-flying, non-narwhal hybrid horse. Racist Flying Horse is also elitist as you have stated, looking down on the Red, non-mutant horse for not being a mutant... Racist Flying Horse is also a dickish prude for interfering with things that aren't his to interfere with.
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>_>'
You should go relax...
The guard does realize what happens when Luna's angry right, no one likes her when she's angry. Well except those who are angered at those who angered her...
Oh well just mean's he'll lose badly for his foolishness.
This story is awesome. This chapter had an awesome flow and you can really feel big macs voice in there. I have nothing bad to say. Keep up the good work.
3223577 Not directly from the comic, but it's very much in the same style.
Now this is a better cliffhanger than the last chapter.
"Three may keep a secret if two are dead" - Benjamin Franklin
20 bits says it leaks out to Ponyville in hmmmm.... A lot sooner than would be convenient for the would be couple.
very nice
First off - Oh Lord, yes; Thank you!
Secondly - You magnificent bastard! Give us MOAR! You cut it there deliberately! Where is the extra hour of footage? The Director's Cut? This can't be all that I've waited on for a week? GAH!
Lastly - I feel bad for the guy; he just can't seem to find any normalcy in his routine...
On a side note, I'm glad to see that you used another of my submissions as the cover art! It makes me feel warm inside.
3223864 Okay, I was just wondering because it looked almost exactly like the excerpts I've seen on Equestria Daily (I can't actually buy the comic at this point, but I would love to so I'd appreciate no spoilers pls
), but at the same time I figured if LunaMac became canon I would have heard a LOT more about it, especially here.
(For the record, I don't ship - as in, I don't actually support pairings, I just read certain stories to see if they're the cream of the crop. So far yours is great; please don't let me down!
)
id like to preface this statement with, this is in no way a complaint.
FUCK thats alot of buildup to leave my poor ass hangin in the breeze like a drunken college girl on spring break. i soooo want more of this,the number of levels and sub plots ( heh plots ) is nuts. good nuts. but nuts.
really looking forward to seeing where all this goes.
Good chapter. There was plenty of build up. I loved the cliff hanger and the end line was perfect. The rainbow dash incident was slightly confusing but overall still good. Keep up the good work.
Can't wait for more.
You know, this feels like it's going to end up like a Disney movie. It'll start off slow at first, then slowly build up to a high point where everything is going great for the main character, then suddenly disaster strikes that makes everyone depressed like the protagonist suddenly losing the love of his/her life or everything that was going good for them suddenly becomes bad, followed by a soul searching moment usually hinted with some self-discovery, then an action scene where the protagonist confronts his/her problems, and ending with the conclusion where everyone is happy. Of course, I guess that's pretty much the only way romance stories can really go without one or both of the main love interests dying at some point.