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I require MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAR please
3156349 MY NEEDS ARE GREATER THAN YOURS, probably
3156356 STOP SHOUTING let's agree we both have equal need for this to continue
That is one mean Guard.
Mac has such silly ideas...
We demand moar LunaMac with haste! The Dark Gods must be sated!
Racist Flying Horse is Racist... And Very Rude I might Add...
Also, Yay!
the plot....it thickens.
yup this is gonna be awesome.
THIS IS THE GREATEST THING I HAVE EVER READ AND MORGAN FREEMAN WILL BE PROUD OF YOU YOU DELECTABLE BASTARD I HOPE TO FLY TO THE MOON AND CONQUER IT FOR MOTHER RUSSIA AND THEN FLY BACK WITH CHEESE TO FEED THE ORPHANS GO AMERICA EVEN THOUGH I'M BRITISH AND I HOPE ONE DAY YOU'LL BE AT THE BALL GAME WITH ME BECAUSE I MISS YOU FATHER MOTHER.
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<3
Hm, you'd think Sweet Apple Acres was stuck in a loop of neverending harvest seasons over and over if you went by how fics always have one of the siblings bucking the trees. While work on a farm never ends, surely there must be other chores, like patrolling for pests...
Harebrained. Since hares are silly buggers, I guess?
Feels a bit unnatural to call them CMC in-universe. Just "the Crusaders", maybe?
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I don't think the Guard is being racist, he's being an asshole or if you want to make it an 'ism', then he's displaying classism. Again while I do love the story, the very idea that ponies are setting to meddle in the love life of a living God for no good reason is hilarious to the point of tragedy. I half expect Applejack to be screaming "DEATH TO THE ARISTOS" by the time this comes to a head.
That said; I'm enjoying this slow burn you've opted to engage with by building up Luna's desire to court Big Mac and the contrast of poor oblivious Mac's first clue to said romantic intentions is one of her bodyguards making an arse of himself.
3159366 Ah, yes, hair and hare. Well spotted, thanks for that! Amended. :) Also, you raise a valid point about the CMC abbreviation. On a second reading I think I agree with you so I've amended that as well.
3159416 And yes, indeed, if you were going to pick an -ism for this story, classism would definitely be it. I'm trying to steer clear of the whole tribalism thing as, frankly, that's been covered in plenty of other fics! Classism has as well, I guess, but it's the one -ism I think applies more than any other to this particular situation.
3156972HOW FUCKING DARE YOU REPLY LIKE THAT! THE USE OF THE THREE WAS INCORRECT YOU BASTARD! YOU HAVE FAILED ME FATHER FOR THE TIME FOR INSURECTION IS NIGH. FUUUUUUUUUCK!
3159416
8T
Nein...
Racist Flying Horse is still racist, looking down on the Red one for being regular, non-flying, non-narwhal hybrid horse. Racist Flying Horse is also elitist as you have stated, looking down on the Red, non-mutant horse for not being a mutant... Racist Flying Horse is also a dickish prude for interfering with things that aren't his to interfere with.
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>_>'
You should go relax...
The guard does realize what happens when Luna's angry right, no one likes her when she's angry. Well except those who are angered at those who angered her...
Oh well just mean's he'll lose badly for his foolishness.
This story is awesome. This chapter had an awesome flow and you can really feel big macs voice in there. I have nothing bad to say. Keep up the good work.
Yea lets pick a fight with a pony who could buck you to the moon. Sounds smart right?
3159366 Actually, different types of apples ripen at different times of year. They seem to have several types of apples, and they could have several apples that only appear in Equestria. Plus, with all the magic around, they probably get more than one harvest per year.
3156946 ARE YOU RELATED OT BILLY MAYS?
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Yep, some apples are ripe by mid July, others late October.
Hmm... Methinks there is a bit of jealousy here! Maybe a certain bat-pony fancied his chances with the royal plot?
The plural for pegasus is pegasi. Just a tip.
I like it so far, in spite of Luna dropping the infatuation bomb so early, the pacing seems fine.
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Hypocrite detected.
Well, the salty night guard certainly explains the lack of Intel. Can't help but wonder what Celly's got to say on the matter
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I think you mean insurrection is neigh