You know, this feels like it's going to end up like a Disney movie. It'll start off slow at first, then slowly build up to a high point where everything is going great for the main character, then suddenly disaster strikes that makes everyone depressed like the protagonist suddenly losing the love of his/her life or everything that was going good for them suddenly becomes bad, followed by a soul searching moment usually hinted with some self-discovery, then an action scene where the protagonist confronts his/her problems, and ending with the conclusion where everyone is happy. Of course, I guess that's pretty much the only way romance stories can really go without one or both of the main love interests dying at some point.

@Llyander...

Have to point this out for correction because it is becoming a serious glaring error the longer this story continues...

Big Mac's proper name, as with its Real Life counterpart namesake, is McIntosh Apple.

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Formulaic, probably... And yet, Disney movies sell...

Macintosh.Exe has performed an illegal operation and must be shut down.

this just got more intresting

Can't wait for more

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I was actually thinking more of this:

But that works too.

Hurray, another chapter! I love it; and no cliffhanger this time. This pleases me greatly, and I can only look forward to seeing more!
You know, this reminds me of an old Silesian fairytale - maybe that's why I like it so much.

3268060 Actually over here in the UK it's spelt Macintosh. McIntosh just looks freakin' weird to me.

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Fair enough, if there is a difference between countries (or languages for that matter).

I am simply pointing out the MLP:FiM canon according to its own official Hasbro labeling.

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Heh a good old romance looking forward to more of the plot, also cant get the image of a huge alcorn Big Mac out of my head. XD

I am rather enjoying this story so far. I will enjoy the two clashes of "evil" in this story. Jealously from the Night Guard and the evil Prince Blueblood. I hope this continues as well as it has so far. Excellent job on princess Luna's dialog I find many writers tend to screw it up. Keep up the good work.

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Would be kind of cool for Luna to be the one doing the rescuing though; reversal of the old cliché.

I think my brain ishort-circuitingofbdgzfcxvnujdsvB-

ARTL.exe has encountered problems with a foreign operating system and must be terminated. Please insert replacement Universe at the earliest opportunity and reboot.

Hmm... I give them about half way through the date before things start going wrong.

Good to see you don't care about the words they say about you, but I would advise you to do something about their actions and keep an eye on who's listening to them. If you do, you can always find a way to turn the tables.

3303582 Wait, there we go! I didn't see the "save" button. Doh. :)

3303658 Nooooo! New chapter is coming! Soon! Hopefully... Really... Uhm... Like maybe in a couple of days? Don't be saaaaaaaad!

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I suppose it depends on whether you are Scottish or Irish. I forget which is which.

McIntosh Apples is how Wikipedia spells it.

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Correct, the Real Life apple cultivar is spelled McIntosh Apple.

MLP:FiM canon, via its wiki and by Hasbro's official labeling, for Big Mac's proper name is also McIntosh Apple.

I simply was pointing out the MLP:FiM canon (proper) name for the big red stallion. It is a minor, but increasingly, glaring error in this fan-fiction. And while I still advise making the correction, I also begrudge the allowance for differences in either language or country too.

Yay! I'm really enjoying this fic! Fav'd!

Behold, I come bearing more gifts! Here's another really good LunaMac picture that I think you'll appreciate.

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So Big Mac would enjoy rutting Luna huh?

.......I'd like to see that

.........and this story does have the "sex" tag on it

3305640 yeah but wiki doesn't have spell check. I once wikid gallefray and the 3rd word of every paragraph was penis

Quick, say something. Say something meaningful, something thoughtful. Just say something!
“Eeeyup.” …Damn.

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Brilliant!

3336960 Predaking u naughty metallic bastard (i mean that in good way)

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This is so adorable!
I love reading these 'new' ships! Usually you have Mac with Flutters, Twilight or Cheer. (A.J. too when the author is more naughty). But Mac and Luna? This is definitely a first!

4791012 That GiF.... Sire i applaud you it had me in tears.
10/10