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Before I read, I must tell you that I like the new name for the story!
Well, guess they should round up some guards and arrest those press-ponies for trespassing on private property.
Ooh, changing the story title. "A Princess and a Ploughpony."
Right before the sex chapter.
"Plowpony"
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You can only blame yourself for this.
Dream sex doesn't count as sex.
4073238 ~Facepalm~ I didn't even think of that. Oy.
This chapter should come with a free box of tissues...for the feels I mean.
Anyone want to start a pool for how far Mac will kick those press ponies out of town?
I'm saying more than 50 yards out. I do enjoy the new title, is Luna going to give Mac a set of wings via magic?
Why did you change the title?
Get rid of one of the tongues!
His heart was in the right place? Well thats all well and good. Too bad his mind wasn't anywhere near it's correct location from the beginning...
Oh well - I can only hope that the two of them interact in such a manner as to provide entertainment.
Also, the title has changed... Why? I enjoyed the wistfully free flow of 'Dreams of Flying' - it had a mellifluous value to it.
I had this story liked and favorited until now, so I feel I should at least give a explanation why. I am dissapointed in the fact that you felt the need to add literary porn to a otherwise amazing story. Yes I know this is your work and you have all of the rights to write it as you please, and that you have a sex tag on it (something I thought meant such scenes would be implied, as is in many stories), but I feel as if you could have made it a most wonderful work for everyone to enjoy without such descriptive sexual scenes. I just wish you had placed the mature tag on it a the beginning to prevent such disappointment. In the future please make sure to do so.
4074944 D'oh. Thanks for pointing that out.
4075898 No problem!
…I wonder what reactions will ponies have when they see Mac's mighty morning log?
Um, the thing I found annoying was that with adding in this scene and thus changing the rating to Mature, it doesn't normally show in my Favourites. (I generally have it set to not show mature-rated stories, for a variety of reasons including that I read this stuff at school sometimes.) I was just seeing that extra number of "updated favourites" and not knowing where it came from, which is annoying; I finally hit on that it might be a Mature story that had updated, but I didn't expect to see that one I'd previously read had upped its rating. Would it maybe be possible to have the explicit stuff as a side-story or what, and get this story back to its previous lower rating?
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Considering he can pull a house when motivated, I say he can buck am at least half way back to canterlot.
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So should I put you down for 20$?
So she can't wait for this! NSFW
I expected for this chapter to be really weird, but I must say, good job. It was a lot better then most other 'clop'. Overall good job
The best clop is less about what is physically happening, but about the feelings behind it.
And this is a tremendously great example.