When Twilight Sparkle discovers an old book within the Canterlot library she begins her search for answers on who the "Queen of Equestria" is. Turning to Celestia and Luna, Twilight learns more about the legendary queen, as well as Equestrias dark forgotten history, the origin of Discord, The Crystal Empire, The Changelings, and Prince Blueblood. The story of Genesis, War, and a Nation's history lost to time begins with Writing Glory.
3180170 So what you're saying is that i shouldn't put capitalized "i"'s and "i'm"'s unless it's starting a sentence?
3184619 Alright, will do, though i am somewhat reluctant to have an editor as i feel as though they might make unwanted changes, If you have an editor in mind do let me know unless you wish to be the editor.
I looked over the first chapter a tiny bit. And most seems legit. Just need to clarify some things, ad more details slightly and fix your grammar errors c:
Sincerely (your art designer)
I love how you put the two most common theories of how things came to be into play here.
Christians believing that a God created us,
Scientists believing that The Big Bang created us,
And you, saying that a Goddess set into motion, The Big Bang, to create Equestira. I like that.
And one quick thing.
I think that should be
4410257 Thank you, and yeah my writing for this is bad considering this is the first fanfiction I ever put out and it was rushed. I'm happy you enjoy the elements that came into play in this now cancelled story.
Imagine that, being the only person/pony in existence all on your own. Such an idea is basically the antithesis of the MLP message. Yet technically, everything starts that way. The first thing in the universe would have it the worst though because not only are they alone, but there’s no chance, yet, that they could be with something or someone.