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RarityEQM


Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem

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Wow. Super curious now. Gonna fave~ Don't disappoint me now, k? :pinkiehappy:

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Darling, I wouldn't DREAM of disappointing a fan! :raritywink:

Needs a bit more description during Trixie's speech, to help drive in the fact she's a bit insane. Like during her speech she slams her hoof on the table, laughs angrily, stuff like that. All in all it seems like a good story.

Btw, this has a romance tag so...is this going to be a Twixie fic? Cause if it is I would love you for long time :raritywink:!

Gotta be honest: the last line of chapter 1 and the entirety of chapter 2 were a tremendous disappointment. There is so much interaction between Trixie and Twilight and so little between Trixie and Spike that every scrap of the latter equals the pleasure of a free dinner and the premier of a new Tolkien or Bond movie. Those two or three paragraphs in the middle of chapter one were the best part of the entire story for me, even though it clearly won't lead to a TrixiexSpike ship.

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This?! A Twixie story? Hohohoh, Darling.
Ofcourseitis. ;)

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Well, dear, can't please ALL the ponies.
Is...is Trixie and Spike even a thing? Is that a thing? I'm sorry darlin, this is a Trixie/Twilight Fic. Spike just happens to have a roll.

This...this updated?

Oh, and you're getting a bit better at writing, but who cares about that?

Don't be silly darling! Of course this updates! :raritywink:

...I kinda wish I was a psychotic magician now :pinkiesad2:

Trixie you luck mare you :twilightsmile:

I see you accidentally uploaded eh :moustache:?

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What?! Hohohoho! D, Don't be preposterous, darling!

Nice story so far, can't wait to see how this continues. : )

It's good to see that this story isn't dead. It was a pretty cute duel, if a bit risque at a few spots. Wonder if Twilight thought she'd get that much of a result from it, or if she just thought that a duel would cheer Trixie up. Still, it's always nice to see a story where Twilight wins Trixie over with a little bit of cunning and a whole lot of friendship. Please, do continue.

Curiously, this story didn't show up in my Updated list, but it did appear in my Feed.

It's good to see that this story isn't dead. It was a pretty cute duel, if a bit risque at a few spots. Wonder if Twilight thought she'd get that much of a result from it, or if she just thought that a duel would cheer Trixie up. Still, it's always nice to see a story where Twilight wins Trixie over with a little bit of cunning and a whole lot of friendship. Please, do continue.

Curiously, this story didn't show up in my Updated list, but it did appear in my Feed.

Tis very curious why it didn't show up on the updated list. But regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed the duel. I wanted to write something really cute, and 'awkward' at the same time. Adorkable, of sorts. I MUST warn you, though, darling, tis rated mature for a reason...

As a huge fan of this story, I can't begin to tell you how happy I am that you updated, and how incredibly sad I am that this story hasn't hit over 1000 likes. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what Trixie and Twi are going to do next!

Hmm...odd. I don't recall reading this chapter...

Oh well, read it now! If Twi isn't careful it's gonna start looking like she's trying to get into Trixie's...non existent pants.

Twilight a good cook? (laughing)

That was an incredible performance. A very good show of Trixie's versatility. To say nothing of being able to capture someone in a painting, AND making wonderful breakfast to boot. Seriously, Twilight, marry this pony. You could do so much worse. :raritywink:

Looking forward to the conclusion. Hope it's a happy ending.

oh, c'mon, updated again and still not showing in my favorites list:twilightangry2:

I just found out because the notifications feed

Oh my....Twi angry :twilightangry2:!

ONE MORE CHAPTER!

ONE MORE CHAPTER!

ONE MORE CHAPTER!

...Please :fluttercry:

*Sees in news feed Blood Boil was updated and it wasn't.

WHY DO YOU TORMENT ME SO?!

That or fimfic screwed up, who knows?

Good story. Even if there is another chapter *which I do hope for*, I can't see this becoming a romantic Twixie fic. It seems alot more like a friendship Twixie fic, at least to me.
You portray a very interesting Trixie, makes me wish that you were adding alot more into this world. Makes me wonder why Celestia just dumped her and never checked back on the filly she said would become her pupil. Did Trixie really just slip through the cracks in celestia's memory? Can't see Trixie NOT being pissed about that.
A more random and pointless question I have to ask is, just where Trixie hit Twilight with that feather spell that is illegal? :rainbowhuh:
I felt this to be a very good mix between dark/comedy/and friendship, which doesn't have a tag. Trixie got a taste of what it would be like to be in a friendship *well, ok, it was kinda like having either a roommate or a marefriend, but with Twilight just wanting to GTFO and Trixie kidnapping, ya gotta take it with a grain of salt*.
Well done, and I will have to look through at what else you have made...at least if I ever get a notice on them updating. :pinkiehappy:

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. A nice touch that they didn't pick up a perfect romance at the end, because it's so much cuter when they're awkward and fumbling.

All in all, a very touching adventure. This goes on my Favorites of Favorites list.

Absolutely fantastic. I don't usually ship Twixie because no one can do it right. Except you, You did a phenomenal job.

Honestly this is one of, if not my top favorite story of all time! Love this!

And the epilogue was updated sooner than expected. At least, I'm assuming based on my feed.

Where's the Epilogue?

Twilight's a worse cook than Sweetie Belle!!!

4261361 She is! SHE IS!!!

Well, I think it's cute and playful enough to fill my daily recommended intake of WAFF, so no objections about that. It does feel not so open-ended at the end, and more like leading into a chapter about them going on a dinner date. Still, I like it.

Incidentally, would you care to read and comment on a Twixie story I'm writing at the moment? I'm not too sure about where it's going and my regular prereader has concerns about internal consistency, so I'd really like another person's opinion. That is, of course, if you could spare the time. I won't hold it against you if you have more important things to concern yourself with.

This was fantastico! Also, I'm guessing this cottage isn't the fake picture one, but a real cottage?

Great story! :pinkiesmile:

Awww...that was a sweet ending deserving of the great and powerful Trixie. Awesome story!:twilightsmile:

Had to read this again, I loves it :pinkiesmile:

Kind of hard to find the romance and "Dawwws" when Trixie continuously threatens Twilight with torture...

5811826 Daaws are comin' darling!

Nope, I'm sorry.

Though this story was masterfully written, I wasn't able to take away the same enjoyment others apparently had. The story starts with an incredibly dark and disturbing kidnapping and that combined with the constant threat of torture (which is never brought up in detail what exactly she was planning) made it that the romantic subplot felt disjointed to me.

Again, I do see high level of writing skill in this story and since it is so well lauded by other people, I'll just go ahead and assume my personal squamishness toward anything torture is what primarily stood in the way of my enjoyment.

That was a great story :pinkiesmile: I'm hoping this was the start of the little one shot Twixies you have scattered about. :twilightblush: If not I shall make it that in my mind :rainbowdetermined2: Really nice story well done. :twilightsmile:

5861507 IT WAS! This started all the twixie One Shots.

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This makes a lot of sense now, lol.

Well that was wacky

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